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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

Chartreuse2005.10.05 - 08:11AM24: Holiday: Part 2Signed
You know, I hope you don't mind me saying this, but in the previous chapter (23) I found the first half different to your usual - awkward, I would call it, compared with the rest of your writing in this story (which is my first of yours). I can't explain why exactly, it just felt strange. This chapter, however, was PERFECT! Not just because of the lemons, but because the lemons were so right; so well done. Like you said, realistic and not too perfect. Which was, of course, perfect. Love it.

Author's Response: I went back to have a read, and you are right. It seemed a bit forced. It's likely got much to do with how I was feeling at the time, and it influenced my writing. I am glad that you liked the lemony scene. I had hoped people would approve and not be let down. Thank you so much. More up in a few minutes.

magicalwonder2005.10.05 - 01:48AM24: Holiday: Part 2Signed
WooHoo, sex at last. Now maybe Severus will lighten up. Oh who am I kidding, that would so not be like him. It just makes him more possessive, and I do so love a possessive Severus. What I find funny and wonderful at the same time is the way you write men, Severus specifically. The line 'Though she was not a practiced lover, their sex had far surpassed any that he’d ever had.', is so wonderfully naive. It is my exprience that most men are unaware that sex with someone that you love is always different. Very well written indeed. My only suggestion would be more, faster.... -- B

Author's Response: I guess that's how I see men. They think they know everything, and when they can't really place something, they "make up" something to explain it. hehehe.. berks! Yep, sex isn't just sex anymore when you love someone. Glad you are enjoying. I have more and will upload it for you shortly. xoxox

Meredith2005.10.05 - 12:27AM24: Holiday: Part 2Signed
Hey, chickie!! Story is going great. I'm glad they finally got to this point. More glad that he finally gave her the parchment!!

Author's Response: Thank you, my love. The parchment will be very important in chapters to come. *wink*

Pearle2005.10.04 - 11:37PM24: Holiday: Part 2Signed
Ah, very nice. I can only say you are lucky I hadn't read 23 through before this, especially since you ended it where you did (still retaining the title of evil if you ask me). I was a bit behind and read both 23 & 24 in one sitting. Great chapters, I have always loved a possessive Snape, and your's is great. Add to the fact that he truly has his own agenda (Dark!Possessive!Snape - yes!) and the story just keeps getting better. Well done, my dear

Author's Response: lol...I'm glad you didn't get stuck on the cliff! I like possessive!snape too. We'll see just how far he'll go soon enough. Glad you like it, love. xoxox

Maddy Riddle2005.10.04 - 11:24PM24: Holiday: Part 2Signed
Great chapter! The EVENT was very good. Sounded realistic (that's the most important thing).
Suggestions? Beware for readers asking for things... if you let us ask we can come up with weird requests. ;) Requests? I want to see more of that map. I wonder how much will Hermione be able to learn about Severus that way... and I'm sure the little thing has more insight that Severus himself about his feelings... yep, I want to see more of that map.
BTW, I answered your response of last chapter in my LJ (locked entry). Didn't know any other way of answering.

Author's Response: Hello, my dear Maddy. Glad you enjoyed it. Actually, the map will be an important part of the plot soon enough. She'll start looking at the map more once she's back at the castle. I have a Lupin/ Tonks convo in the next chapter. I hope you enjoy it.

queenp2005.10.04 - 11:00PM24: Holiday: Part 2Signed
Suggestion? MORE!!! Request?? NOW!!! Chapter was excellent, as always. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I just want more...SOON!!!

Author's Response: lol! Hope this next update pleases you. I am happy you've enjoyed the chapter.

SeverusSnape2005.10.04 - 10:59PM24: Holiday: Part 2Signed
YAY! Not a bummer at all! It was great! I can't wait for the next chapter. And to perhaps see the things Snape will teach Hermione? Haha!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed! In the next chapter, he's going to allow her to do a bit of exploring. teehee

lemonade82005.10.04 - 09:28PM24: Holiday: Part 2Signed
Well.. the deed is done!! He's so sexy, yet kind of obsessive. Intent on having a good christmas and boxing day, regardless! ;D Was it Severus that was listening to Hermione and George's conversation, or maybe a plot twist?

Author's Response: No, he wasn't the one listening, and the plot twist will be obvious with the first of the next chapter. hehe... Well, the first plot twist anyway. more up in a few!

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