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| Thorn | 2005.04.30 - 01:18AM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| Ginny is a tattletale! Jeez, you think with brothers she would have learned to keep her mouth shut. Maybe she is miffed at Hermione for not fully supporting her in telling on Tonks. Hermione was lucky to find out now that Ginny can't or won't keep a secret. Severus sure is posseive once he makes up his mind. I hope Hermione can handle him. Ron certainly is acting his age. I hope he caught something nasty from Pansy AND Molly finds out it was his fault. Good chapter! Author's Response: Hermione isn't pleased about that. Ginny was more or less taunting him about it. I'll have that up in the next one. Severus is a bit possessive and protective towards her. lol@catching something from pansy! that is hilarious. I have information about pansy that will be fun for us. xoxo more up soon | |||
| Fictionlover_32 | 2005.04.30 - 12:56AM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| Hi, Sunshine! I know Ron is being patient, but he's acting like a prat! I agree with Hermione, if he turly loves her, he'll wait for her without accusing Hermione. And Ginny was a surprise! I assumed Ginny liked Draco, but it's Remus she's interested in! That's interesting. I like Remus, hope they'll get together. And Snape is really in his element, isn't he? As far as I'm concerned, he's giving an Oscar winning perfornence being Hermione's 'freiend' He should've went for acting, instead, since he's so good at it. The plot is getting thicker! Love it! Ver nice chapter. Update soon. Cheers!
P.S. If you see any errors in this review, please understand. The font size in this thing is so small I can barely see what I'm writing. I didn't have any trouble leaving any reviews yesterday, but that was before they changed the skins and the layout. Sigh. Do you have any idea how to make the font sizes bigger for writing reviews? Author's Response: I see it normally (the font). Did you try to change your skin to the silver and green one? That's the one I use. No matter what size my font is on, my review wording stays the same. Maybe try a different font and hit the plus sign til it is as big as you can get it? Good Luck! Ron is being a bit pratty. I feel sorry for Hermione's confusion. About Ginny, I would say that your first assumption is correct (later on though). {~_~} Snape is completely sneaky. I figure if he can fool Voldemort and Dumbledore, he can fool a young, confused witch. muahahaha I just love it. Does that make me terribly naughty? hehe more up soon xoxoox | |||
| Sassara | 2005.04.30 - 12:55AM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| Another terrific chappie...don't keep us waiting too long! Author's Response: Thanks, sass. I'm glad you've enjoyed it. It shouldn't be too long until the next bit comes out. :) cheers! xoxox | |||
| cocoachristy | 2005.04.30 - 12:53AM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| OMG!!! My heart was beating out of my chest the whole time during that dream! WHEW!! Dark!Snape with a little Scary!Snape mixed in...
To me, Ron was being a prat in this chapter. Ginny told him about the flower and letter and he thought of Hermione with another and couldn't take it. Serves him right! And I hope Molly does send him at least one howler for cheating with Pansy. BTW, what is Pansy up to these days??
Like the talk with Ginny, lets us know Witches and Wizards don't think 19 years is too big of a difference..good!
I think Voldemort killed him to flaunt his authority and his "cause." Poor Severus has it so bad and doesn't even recognize what "it" is! Enjoying him finding out and his seduction ploys. Very snarky and Slytherin indeed!!
You are Brilliant! More soon please, great chapter! smooches ;-) Author's Response: you are too sweet. thanks, doll. I wanted to trick people a bit with the dream. hehe...but at least we have established that he would never do that to her. Ron was a prat of sorts, but I think Ginny had no right telling him. Pansy is in the next chapter. :) More up soon. Cheers. xoxo | |||
| sevviepoo | 2005.04.29 - 05:40PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Bloody Brilliant! Please, you must update quickly! ::Adds to favs.:: Author's Response: I should have something up tonight :) | |||
| laceyweasley | 2005.04.28 - 09:12PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Very well written and interesting. Author's Response: thanks, more up soon | |||
| Novinha | 2005.04.28 - 06:04AM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Well. I cannot agree with you. If you write Snape dressed in pink and calling Harry by his given name, we'd call it OOC, wouldn't we? There are some things I think are a bit OOC in your story. Such as Snape's macho-like behaviour, some of his thoughts... This is your view of his character, and I have the right to disagree and say - I think this is OOC. I believe that due to his emotional problems and tough life, he is looking for a woman that would understand and respect him. I also believe (call it wishful thinking of you want) that he cares more about intellect than body - and he seemed a bit too impulsive in your story. As well as chuckling a lot ;) I respect your right to write him any way you wnat (as long as he doesn't call Harry by his given name ;) But let's go back to the matter at hand. Actually, I don't mind your characterisation of Ron. If I were in his situation, I would be frustrated with Hermione either - not because of the sex thng, but because she doesn't seem to respect him. She treats him like a younger brother, and that is a bit stupid. He might not be as bright and a quick-thinker, but he isn't dim, either! He is a graet chess-player, strategist and deserves to be recognised as someone such. Pansy seems to like him the way he is, whereas Hermione tries to make him fit her view of him - this just proves that they aren't suited, and both are immature. I also like Ron's civil courage. He is willing to take responsibility for his actions. And you forgot about Dean, who is also a Gryffindor ;) I like Snape's enchanted parchment - it is so evil. I mean, really evil, something Hermione wouldn't forgive him. Mind control. Disgusting. Honestly - I am quite interested in this story because I am writing something a bit similar (in Polish). That is, the main subject is very different but I have a subplot about Lucius seducing a pretty Muggle out of boredom, while killing random Weasleys :) He is using some similar tactics to lure her... And he is going to get more than he bargained for ;) I don't think this Severus is a good man. He isn't just Slytherin here - he is a ruthless manipulator who doesn't really respect other people. That is why I am reading this - out of curiosity. I want to see how he manages to manipulate Hermione. Greetings from Poland, Novinha Author's Response: I wasn't slighting you on your opinion, just depending my own. Please feel free to interpret things as you'd like. At this point in my story, Snape is looking to claim her as his own, and he will do that as he sees fit. His chuckle? I'm doing that simply to show his amusement with getting away with things. You know how Voldemort cackles? Something like that. If I had him dressed in pink clothing, I wouldn't be allowed to post here. hahahaha I just get annoyed when I read people talking about stories saying oh that's ooc when they have no idea either. I would like consider yours ooc as well since we seem to agree. Of course, I wouldn't tell you probaly because how do I really know anyway? I'm not Rowling. I think the Ron/ Hermione thing played out well. They are just too close to be lovers (in my eyes). I wonder if I'm not just biased. hehehe I didn't want to put down Ron. I wanted them to both have faults. So, I'm glad that worked at least. About Dean being a Gryffindor, well, he was killed in an attack. I had that in a previous chapter when I talked about Ginny having 'feelings' for Lupin suddenly. I've written chapter 4 already, and her feelings on missing Dean is in there. It was so subtle that it could be easily overlooked. It was either there or when I talk about Harry's D.A. going off to Hogsmeade to fight the Death Eaters. I mentioned that Padma had been missing in action as well. That will come back up again in the future soon. Yes, what Snape is doing is very evil, and I love it. lol I think I'm just a wicked girl though. Your story sounds interesting. I do like Lucuius fic. I'm a bit sad that you'll be disappointed throughout the story. Snape won't change. He'll continue his manipulations until he has what he wants. But, I do believe there will be a love match. So, he won't just use her. He's starting to slow think of her as something more. I think he's already said he'd keep her safe no matter what. More up hopefully this evening. I'll be sending to my beta today, and when she has time, she'll look it over and send it back. Cheers, ~SW69~ | |||
| magicalwonder | 2005.04.27 - 10:40AM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Great chapter. I think that you have portrayed Snape's character perfectly. He often reminds me of a Byronic hero. And it strikes me that he would do everything in his power, whether considered good or dark magic, to have what he wanted. It also seems that his character would reserve his judgement to see which side came out victorious before standing firmly on that side. He may wish for one side to win more than the other, but he would manover himself to be on the winning side no matter which side that ended up being. Again beautifully done. Can't wait.
B Author's Response: thanks! That's so how I see him. I have a good bit more in the sneak department and will be posting again soon. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Cheers xoxoxoox | |||
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