Great chapter and a very intriguing premise. Some comments: First, I wouldn't say Snape was being *kind*. He was being devistatingly manipulative. Very Slytherin. Second, do you really think there's Ron fans at Ashwinder? *grin* Seriously, I think he comes across as a thoughtless but normal teenage boy, just like in canon. Finally, I really like Devious!Snape and Naive!Hermione. There are so many ways this particular pairing can go and I look forward to seeing what you do with them here.
Author's Response: thanks, win. He's definitely manipulative and will use anything to his advantage. giggle @ ron fans comment. more up soon |