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| LariLee | 2005.04.25 - 04:00PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Such a dark vision of Snape! I love it! Manipulative bastard that he is. :-) I just hope he's on the side of good. And I love it obligatory succubus reference. :-) ~Lisa Author's Response: hehe!! succubus, lol!! had to throw that in there! muahahaha. I really like this snape so far. he's such fun to play with. | |||
| organicchemflute | 2005.04.25 - 03:45PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Oh this is great, please continue writting. I love that he is such a Slytherin, and I can't wait until they kiss. Author's Response: thanks so much organ. it's great fun! hehe... she'll be thinking of that almost kiss until tea the next day :) I wonder what he's going to do next? **wink** | |||
| Lola Weasley | 2005.04.25 - 03:18PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| I love the ambiguity you give Snape! Author's Response: thanks!! :) more up soon | |||
| sarah7174 | 2005.04.25 - 03:16PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| I LUV this fic,
I love that special parchment with the subliminal message and enabling snape to find Hermione anywhere.
please update soon because i dont think i can wait very long for voldermorts suggestions, and the rest of snapes plans.
As I said i luv this fic :)
Author's Response: thanks! I was hoping that I'd explained the parchment bit well enough. :) Pretty sneaky, if you ask me. It shouldn't be too long before I have more up. Cheers, doll. ~SW69~ | |||
| cocoachristy | 2005.04.25 - 03:08PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Oh this is getting HOT! Like a slow burn...I did not think the part with Ron was boring because she is (was) with Ron and Hermione is not the type that would just go off with someone else, she is very loyal. It needed to be shown and it was very realistic. I love how he is slowly luring her in and how she is confused as to who is making the moves, herself or him. Its interesting that while he makes it out to be a game of sorts, when he thinks about them together it is always in the long term. he he he Brilliant as usual, Sun, biased or not! ;-) smooches Author's Response: Teehee. I do love that slow burn thing. I'm glad about the Ron bit. It came across as I meant for it to then. She is a confused little doll, isn't she? She'll always mostly think that it's she that is paving the way for something more (he intends that). lol. Yep, his private thoughts seem to show that he wants her for a bit more than a brief affair. hehe! cheers! | |||
| Miari | 2005.04.25 - 02:58PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Beautifully, devillishly, utterly Slytherinishly clever. Author's Response: thanks, doll. muahahahaha. I'm really liking this story. The possibilities are so great with the sneakiness. Severus is such a sly little boy | |||
| Winna | 2005.04.25 - 02:46PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Well, things are starting to heat up! The break up talk was believable and rather touching; personally I don't understand why JKR insists on making them a couple. Oh, and I loved the reference to the Succubus story! Author's Response: muahahahah!! someone caught my succubus plug (teehee!!) I couldn't resist. I know! I hope JKR ends with things open for them. That way we can all imagine our own ships. teehee... More up soon. Thanks, Winna | |||
| Novinha | 2005.04.25 - 06:26AM | 2: Taking Advantage of the Situation | Signed |
| Dear Southern Witch, I like the way you are building sexual tension here. And Snape's PoV - even if a bit OOC - is interesting. I would prefer - very much - for the Dark Side to win here and for Severus to keep Hermione safe. It would be dfferent - we get so many nice stories nowadays, I want a darkfic! To be honest, I suppose you will make Severus good and softer as the story will progress. I would rather for him to stay dark and Slytherin and get what he wants. Please, make hims tay dark and evil and get the girl - I always liked the villains better and wished they won the girl for once - you could make my wish come true! And I am sure I am not the only one ;) I vote for Severus to keep the girl in the "Death Eaters won" world. Greetings from Poland, Novinha Author's Response: I really don't see Severus as OOC here. He is pretending to be a nice guy to lure her to his lair. He's wanting some action, and in order to get some, he must lead her to believe that he's a 'good' guy. hehe Besides, how do we know what is OOC, or how he's like in private anyway? Sorry. lol.. I'm always amazed when people say that about some characters. At this point, I'm not sure what side of the fence Severus is on either. I'll not have him getting much 'softer' if I can help it. He will love her, but I don't see that as being weak. Even bad boys need love too..hehe... I do have a story in the works for a SH challenge where Severus is a bad boy until the end and really pulling for Voldemort. I will let you know as soon as I post that. :) If you'd like a really spiteful Severus, I have one in Vengeance. Most people don't really like him there though. Sometimes I like dark tales too.. hehe | |||
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