Reviews for Luring the Enchantress
Cinimar | 2006.02.23 - 09:52PM | 39: Nearing the End: Part 3 | Signed |
Ahh! ahh ahh ahhh! Oh bloody hell. I didnt even like th guy, and I knew it was comming, but now that it has I cant believe it? I really admire your writing and am curious to see how you end this. Snape! Ahhh!
Stupid Hermoine. Poor Hermoine! lol.
Okay I'm done.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm happy that you are enjoying this so far. There isn't much left, but it will be up soon. :) |
Jadeous | 2006.02.23 - 09:52PM | 39: Nearing the End: Part 3 | Signed |
Well... is he dead? Gods i hope he isnt dead, yet i have that sneaking suspicion that he is. Le fuck.
Much love.
Author's Response: I'll have everything out in the next chapter. It shouldn't be too long. Voldemort was on a mission when he tried to hex Hermione. LOL |
June W | 2006.02.23 - 07:57PM | 39: Nearing the End: Part 3 | Signed |
PS - if you kill Tonks, I wouldn't mind if you kill Lupin too. Git... he coulda said no...
Author's Response: LOL... I wanted to so badly (off Lupin), but I guess I'll let him hang around. |
leahnecas | 2006.02.23 - 04:51PM | 39: Nearing the End: Part 3 | Signed |
Nice chapter; I think everyone's reactions were very believable. I'm pretty certain that you deliberately left Severus' fate open, but that doesn't make me feel any easier about the consequences, since Voldy threatened Hermione with making her nothing more than a vessel for certain activities only. I'd like to plead the case a little for Hermione, I know she's your character and you did a nice job with her, but just because Severus has grown throughout the book doesn't make her any less intelligent or mature. He is the one who instigated the relationship and deliberately manipulated situations. Perhaps if she had been left alone to learn about relationships at a normal teenage-to-adult rate, she would have been very mature in a few years, whereas she is still a bit thoughtless now. I hope you plan on allowing them to grow in their relationship more in their future(not that you need to keep writing), but if you decide to really give Severus the axe, heck, that's a lot of fun, too! he he he... I've really enjoyed this story from beginning to battle and I hope you have a few more up your sleeve after this.
Author's Response: Yes, it's open on purpose. I'm glad that you caught Voldemort's hint. Hermione will do a bit of growing in the next chapter. Some time will have passed, and we really see her coming into her own. I think sometimes certain situations changes and person and opens their eyes. As far as the way she's been acting, right, she's quite young and never had a real relationship before. I'm very happy that you are enjoying this. You'll be pleased with the next bit. :) I hope. |
allyroksmuch | 2006.02.23 - 04:33PM | 39: Nearing the End: Part 3 | Signed |
that was so sad. snape died ):):):): ohh hermione heart is broken. cant wait for the next chapter. ther is going to be a next chapter right? anyways really good as well!!
ally
Author's Response: She's quite distraught. I'll have another chapter up soon. Cheers! |
redhanded | 2006.02.23 - 04:04PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
Please merlin, don't let Severus be dead. I mean it wasn't a green jet light that hit him. I don't think I read the next chapter dried eyed if he's dead. I barely made it through this one without a tear. I got high hopes, so don't disappoint me : )
Author's Response: yeah, Voldemort asked her if she remembered what he said he'd do to her. I think people didn't notice that, but some are pointing out about the different colored light. Teehee.. I can't really say without giving things away. I am happy that you "liked" the last chapter though and will have more up soon. |
pickles | 2006.02.23 - 03:18PM | 39: Nearing the End: Part 3 | Signed |
Thank you for a new chapter. It was wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks, my dear! |
jazzjackrabbit | 2006.02.23 - 01:46PM | 39: Nearing the End: Part 3 | Signed |
i think severus is not dead...it wasnt a jet of green light...it was creamy *please please*, i cant take his death, no seriously....
i think it was an amazing battle scene i could visualize eveything...thaks for such a great story *cries*
Author's Response: Right. It wasn't the Killing Curse. Voldemort had warned her what he'd do to her before she left his castle with Snape. It's just unfortunate that the hex hit Snape instead. LOL |
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