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| LariLee | 2005.04.30 - 06:28PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| The dream was a great fake out sequence! I am beginning to think Ginny was sorted into the wrong House. You definitely got her strong will down perfectly. Ron and Hermione seemed to have a typical high school relationship where the guy got caught out. He thinks he can issue her an ultimatum on how quickly she can get over it and get back to him. I'm glad she's got Snape on her side, even if he is morally ambiguous at this point. I don't think Snape killed Higgs, but I think he watched and enjoyed it. ~Lisa Author's Response: lol such a surprise with the dream, eh? Thank goodness that's all it was. Ron will be taking a hike soon. I have other plans for him. I'll explain all about Higgs' death in the next chapter. I'm thinking Snape didn't do it either. :) | |||
| Armor | 2005.04.30 - 05:31PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| This chapter was really interesting. Ginny is a true friend... I will tell no one (or so). indeed. Anyway, I was afraid at the beginning of your chapter, I don't like the rape even if we are in a fiction world. I was glad to see it was a nightmare. And Ron... Ron... he's a prat. Doesn't he know that a girl is sensitive, that it was a trauma for Hermione to see him like this... He doesn't even know the feeling of betrayal. He's too selfish. He sould read "Memoirs of Egotism" by Stendhal... a good muggle book for a prat like him ;) Update as soon as possible. Author's Response: thanks! Ginny will be chided by Hermione soon. I am so glad that Severus only dreamt that. Ron will move on soon, as will Hermione. muahahahah more up soon. cheers | |||
| Lyndie578 | 2005.04.30 - 05:05PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| Interesting that you've had Voldemort openly discuss or even acknowledge his parentage--it seems almost AU, I'm not sure that he'd back track. But good plot development with Ron/Hermione--quite logical. I wonder what Severus is going to do next. Author's Response: I have a different Voldemort here. He thinks Severus is his most loyal servant, so I'm thinking they would share things. I don't think he'd be so open to all of his followers. He was pretty open about it to Harry as well. Of course, he probably thought Harry wouldn't live to tell a soul. hehe I just don't see him as a murdering lunatic out to kill all Mudbloods. He did try to give Lily a chance to live when he went for Harry. Anyway, about Ron/Hermione, yep, things happen. I can understand both points though. Severus has something interesting planned. A little bit of sneaking about is coming up. More up soon. cheers | |||
| entmaid521 | 2005.04.30 - 04:25PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| No I do not believe Severus killed Higgs, but I do think that Voldemort set that murder up to set an example for the 'cause' you (ahem..Severus) mentioned in his meeting with Voldemort. Lesson learned for all the new death eaters and such...hey, lol, change the password to "T.S. Eliot" and make Snape quote "the lovesong of J. Alfred Prufrock"...hehe that'll throw him! Sorry, for babbling...your story is awesome (again). Author's Response: Thanks, ent. Oh too funny. I never thought of changing passwords. ahhahaha!! More up soon, and I'll explain Higgs' death and who did it. Cheers | |||
| SeverusSnape | 2005.04.30 - 04:11PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| I hope that Hermione totally forgets Ron and tells him to piss off. Haha. Great chapter. You're doing a great job in making his 'side' a mystery. He really seems like he could be either good or bad. Great chapter! Update soon! Author's Response: hahaha! as of the next chapter, ronniekins will be out of the picture and have other ideals. Im gald you are enjoying this. more up soon. | |||
| Satoni | 2005.04.30 - 03:47PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| you are great! this story is...great! this chappie was....magnificent. I enjoyed it sooo much, really. I don't think Snape has killed the bastard. I think snape doesn't want hermione to know he killed him, and knows he would feel guilty when he would kill him. As he wants to change Mione's view on him, I think he would be afraid to do it in case she ever asks/finds out....and, you said he was talking to Lucius and he ignored the boys yelps, right? I liked the dream in the beginning, but i'd never wuold have forgiven him, that would've been rape. Ron...I dunno, I think the only reason he wants to get back together with Mione is because he's afraid of his mum. Ginny, as I'm still mad on her for telling Ron about the flowers, I don't have an opinion about her 'Remus' and wether or not she deserves him. Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. The dream bit was a bit sneaky, but at least we know that he would never do something like that to her. I'll have more up about the Higgs death in the next chapter. Ron will be out of the picture soon enough. :) Ginny has a big mouth! Hermione will confront her about that. more up soon. cheers xoxo | |||
| lovethelab | 2005.04.30 - 03:42PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| I think Ginny and Remus is a good match. (Especially if Tonks is messing around) I think Hermione did the right thing with Ron - if he is just going after what Hermoine won't provide. Yes, I know, double standard - boys need experience and girls should stay at home virginal and pure until marraige. I am not sure if Snape did the actual murder himself - - I can see him wanting to make sure noone ever talked about Hermione, but I am sure she would be very put off if she ever found out. It's one thing to kill a physical attacker, but a verbal one outside of her presence?? I am not sure I can see it. Plus, I think he would demure to allow one of the new recruits some "hand on" experience. (especailly if the dark lord had just given a pep talk!) Author's Response: I do like stories with Remus and Ginny, but I'm not sure if they will work out here. Ron is being a bit of a prat, but I don't think he has a chance with her at all. I'll explain about Higgs' death in the next chapter. :) Cheers! more up soon | |||
| cocoachristy | 2005.04.30 - 03:35PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| Also, I think Vodemort may be watching Severus more than he realizes...Maybe Vodemort is up to something being so generous....Unlike him... he he he Author's Response: muahahahah.... mind always working, eh? I read over the bits with Voldie again in ootp and believe he may not be as horrid as pictured in some stories. Gonna portray him a little differently here. Not one to mess with but not exactly a homicidal maniac either. | |||
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