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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

MollysSister2006.01.16 - 10:28PM28: Prelude to a WarSigned
Voldy’s followers reminded me of kamikaze pilots. There was no option for them to return. I liked hearing Snape’s POV with his mixed emotions in the moments before the battle. I felt your words rang true. I am hesitant to read the next chapter. I don’t like violence, reading it, seeing it, nothing. I may have to skim and not leave a review. Don’t be offended, its just my weakness.

Author's Response: I believe Rodolphus' death was more violent than anything that's in the next chapter. There will be some sadness though. I'm quite a violent girl at times (hehe), so some things don't really bother my while they may bother others. I'm not really a good judge of it in this case.

MollysSister2006.01.16 - 10:09PM26: The Need for VengeanceSigned
Why was it Fleur’s decision on where Gabriella was housed? Harry was right she was at risk. Frankly it was profoundly stupid and short sighted to leave her unguarded. Sex on the table was HOT. I hope these two will continue to find new places and positions. Surely they would branch away from the missionary positions soon. Please?

Author's Response: Yes, Fleur is Gabrielle's guardian, and the decision was hers. She never did grasp the concept of what it meant to be at war with Voldemort, did she? Guess she knows now. I don't write much actual sex in this story, so I won't try to go through all the positions and different locations, as I feel it would take away from the plot at hand. I'm certain they aren't all missionary, but even so... sex with Snape in any position would be welcome in my home. ~snicker~ Luckily, I don't find missionary sex to be boring.

MollysSister2006.01.16 - 10:07PM27: Taking Care of His OwnSigned
Southern I am going to have to call bullshit on Hermione’s behavior after Severus apperated into the dudgeons. She was on the brink of being mutilated. She had just witnessed a graphic murder. I am highly skeptical that she would have been chereant enough to question Severus’ loyalties. I think she would have been in shock and probably unable to speak. And I wanted to smack Severus upside the head 1. For killing Rudolphus in front of Hermione (duh) and 2. For killing him prior to finding out about Gabriella.

Author's Response: Was she not shocked enough? I thought she was. I'll have to go back and read that chapter, but I remember seeing him murder someone, even for good reason, freaked the hell out of her and made her wonder about many things, loyalty just one of them. As far as Snape, he was a man on a mission. I think seeing his lover being attacked just pushed him over the edge and brought out that fiercely protective instinct that we should all house. I might have reacted in similar fashion to find someone harming my son. Anyway, these are the way I would feel and think, and I try to project that into my characters.

MollysSister2006.01.12 - 10:42PM24: Holiday: Part 2Signed
excellent! thank you for not having George be a whole big trust issue. I do feel a bit cheated that the last Intimate scene was glossed over…details I need details.

Author's Response: Nah, I'm not into too much back in forth, other lovers / flirts jealous type thing. LOL... If you know what I mean. I'll have more descriptive intimate scenes later, but not too many.

MollysSister2006.01.12 - 10:22PM23: Holiday: Part 1Signed
Mr. Pouty face not going to give in huh? Oh but then he did. I wonder how he rationalized that one? Severus being in love is seldom about right and wrong. Its about making your partner happy to the best of your ability. If you have to be around her friends that make your skin crawl, you’ll just have to suck it up ya big louse. Glad you were able to talk some sense into him. Also I do not believe you that we will have actual S E X in the next chapter. You have cried bat once too often.

Author's Response: lol.... *shrugs and doesn't give plot away*

MollysSister2006.01.12 - 10:01PM22: The TruthSigned
Blah blah blah Lupin. Mr. Wishy Washy himself. I have no sympathy for him at all. If you never wrote another line about him in this story, I wouldnt mind. The part that I enjoyed was Severus spending time with Hermione and Harry. Being nice, becoming closer, and making plans to get the hell out of the castle.

Author's Response: Muahahhaa... There will be a long line of chapters that have no Lupin in them, Teehee...

MollysSister2006.01.12 - 09:43PM21: Full Moon Rising: Part 3Signed
you are the biggest tease EVER

Author's Response: yes, quite naughty, i am....

MollysSister2006.01.12 - 05:15PM20: Full Moon Rising: Part 2Signed
Tease tease tease I think you are just teasing us again Southern. All this talk about sex and no ACTION! Bring it on!

Author's Response: I'm quite bad, I know. hehe

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