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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

Maddy Riddle2006.03.27 - 04:38AM42: Back to Good: Part 2Signed
It's terrible sad to see the story end. And at the same time I'm really happy with the chapter.
As usual you manage to answer all my questions (even the ones I didn't ask you). Because of it, I think the story doesn't need any kind of epilogue. But of course, it's you prerrogative to do so, and seen what you've done in the past, I know I'll be happy with whatever decision you make. ;)
I love the conversation between Lucius and Hermione. It's so easy to understand how Lucius sees the world.
And you are an evil author, dear. If I weren't so sure you wouldn't do anything but a happy ending, I would have suffered a lot reading the chapter. I even doubted you for a second when Hermione was all weepy about failing. Only a second, mind you, I have too much faith in you.
As for your new story, I will try to stay away from it for a bit. I know me too much to try to convince me that I'll wait until it's finished, but if you're going to take time between updates, I'll try to wait until several chapters are up...
Did I forget to address something? If so, tell me and I answer in my LJ... you can't keep a conversation here. ;)
Oh, yeah, I forgot! This story will be added to my list. So I'll love you even more than I already do if you tell me any other archives you posted the story in.

Author's Response: Thanks, dear Maddy. I see my ploy to trick the readers worked, eh? LOL Thanks for reading. And I do appreciate all your support, dear, and for keeping me on my toes. Flight will be fun. I hope you like whenever you get time to read it. :)

Esmine2006.03.26 - 10:58PM42: Back to Good: Part 2Signed
Brava Southern, Brava! Most excellent indeed.I like the conversation between Hermoine & Lucius. She's not so different than them after all. So sad to see this end, but great read nonetheless. It doesn't have to end....epilogue???

Author's Response: I had fun with Lucius and hoped to show that Hermione could fit in with him if needed. thanks for reading. I may put an epilogue.

littlevixen2006.03.26 - 08:21PM42: Back to Good: Part 2Signed
I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this story. It was flawless. The characters never changed from original form, and thats something hard to do. Cant wait to read the next thing you write.

Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it. It was hard keeping Snape's loyalties hidden, I'll say that much. Cheers!

Crescentmoon2006.03.26 - 08:03PM42: Back to Good: Part 2Signed
WONDERFUL WONDERFUL WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Congratulations on a story well done!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Jadeous2006.03.26 - 07:45PM42: Back to Good: Part 2Signed
Well, this is the end of a very great story, it saddens me to see it end, but it ended nicely enough for my liking. I agree with you about the not immediately getting married idea-- it seems more to their character to just start getting back to normal before throwing everything up in the air again just after he wakes up. I'll miss the story, and I'll keep an eye out for "The Flight of the Prince".

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I am so happy that people seem to agree with the not rushing into marriage thing. Cheers!

casey2006.03.26 - 05:46PM42: Back to Good: Part 2Signed
Southern, I truly enjoyed this story, so much great development particularly of Snape's character since the beginning. I've been elated as each new chapter appeared anxious to know what would happen next. I'm pleased with the ending, happy you finally got us here and ironically sad it's over. I'll be watching for "The Flight of the Prince." Will that be here on Ashwinder? Thanks so much for this great story. ~casey

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Flight will be on Ashwinder, yes. It was hard to keep Snape's loyalties hidden. :)

Pearle2006.03.26 - 04:18PM42: Back to Good: Part 2Signed
Such a great story, I'm so sorry to see it come to an end. Your portrayal of Lucius is interesting to say the least. Somehow I can't see him being redeemable, even at the cost of his son (but that's me - LOL). I like how Hermione has changed, subtle but with a bit of grace. And Severus woke up! I really didn't think you were going to leave him in limbo, but you never know. Nice touch having him cognate of all that went on around him. She and Severus seem to have matured into their new relationship nicely. I agree, sometimes, though readers want to see them married, it may not fit the story line. I think your ending fits well with all that's come before it. Excellent story, m'dear!

Author's Response: I miss it, too. I have mixed feelings about Lucius/Draco. It seemed that Draco is near redeemable, if only those dang Death Eaters hadn't showed up. Teehee. However, I think that Lucius is a piece of work that is truly dark, though I'd like to think he'd do what he could for his son. ;( Like a normal parent. Teehee. Thanks!

Lyssiej2006.03.26 - 03:17PM42: Back to Good: Part 2Signed
I truly enjoyed this. Thanks for the realistic ending. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

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