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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

Chartreuse2005.10.28 - 10:06PM26: The Need for VengeanceSigned
I hear the evil music in the background. If you were having probs then it's sorted - great reading.

Author's Response: hahaha! Thank you!

Chartreuse2005.10.28 - 09:42PM25: Holiday: Part 3Signed
Lucky, lucky me. I get to read three whole chapters in one hit (yes, I've been saving them). LOL. Backtracking to the last chapter briefly, you really had H down pat. I did a re-read before starting here and it just struck the right tone. She's often written a little too mature for her age (which isn't really borne out in canon) but you had a balance of maturity and naivety which seemed so real for a girl of her age. After all, she's not a 40 yr old head on 18 yr old shoulders, whatever is often written. Now back to here. Tonks/Remus??? What is going on there! Remus has real problems - you gotta love a man who can't choose between two then decides on marriage! Yeah, classic stuff. I still can't decide how you're playing him but we'll find out in due course. I think my feeling on previous chapter really are just echoed in this one. On to the next!

Author's Response: Thank you! I had hoped Hermione seemed all right. Some people felt she was a bit naive after Snape did what he did to Rodolphus, but I feel that will be explained well enough in the next chapter I upload. I will have something about Tonks and Remus in chapter 29. Thanks!

SylvaniaSnape2005.10.28 - 06:28PM27: Taking Care of His OwnSigned
love the chapter,,, Its real and well a long time coming for Snape

Author's Response: Yep. Now she knows though. Things will be all right... probably. hehe

Fictionlover_322005.10.28 - 04:15PM27: Taking Care of His OwnSigned
I'm so glad Hermione is safe. As for Snape's actions, he could've been more lenient on Bella's husband, but as you said, he's a dark man and he feared for Hermione, so he acted harshly. Snape might believe that his actions was justified, but Hermione doesn't see it that way. I can't get over how he treated her while he was rescuing her. She explained her situation to Snape, again he brushes it aside as if her opinions doesn't matter, what a jerk! And killing Bella's husband in a brutal way in front of Hermione may not have been a good idea. Didn't Snape realize how his actions would've afffected Hermione? After all, she was captured and was in pain, she needed to feel safe, instead she gets another show of utter violence, and Snape wonders why Hermione isn't comfortable with him. Duh! Hermione is definately rethinking her relationship with Snape, why wouldn't she? She'd be a fool not to. Poor Hermione. I hope she's strong for both of them. Update soon. Cheers!

Author's Response: He did treat her shabbily, didn't he? She's definitely going to be thinking on that. She is in shock b/c she was nearly killed and was brutally handled. Then, here comes her lover acting the same way the other man did. hehe! She'll continue to think on it, but things will sort out soon enough. Bigger problems lay ahead.

imrastro2005.10.28 - 03:56PM27: Taking Care of His OwnSigned
I thought this chapter was great because it's realistic. I've always had a problem with fluffy Snape. Can't be given what eh must be allowing if not participating in for Voldemort. It's completely believable to me that Hermione wouldn't think on that too carefully. People edit out what they don't want to know. So, well done I say. A blatant confrontation with an aspect of a person that you care about but that you have (perhaps) deliberately refused to consider would be a tough swallow. Not an aspect I've seen dealt with too frequently.

Author's Response: Thank you! I don't mind Fluffy Snape sometimes, but I'd prefer a darker Snape most of the time. I appreciate the review. I'll have more up in a few hours. Hermione will have much to think on. Things are going to be fast-paced for a while. :)

Fictionlover_322005.10.28 - 03:36PM26: The Need for VengeanceSigned
The plot thickens again! Bella's husband was right about Harry's motives, wasn't he? I was really hoping Harry and Mione would've stayed put, but knowing Harry, I knew they were going to go there amyways. I'm hoping Snape would find them soon, I don't want to see Harry and Mione being tortured or something worse happening to them. I hope Mione doesn't blame Snape later on, but I suspect she will have doubts about his role as spy. And as much I feel sorry for Mione, I feel more remorse for Bella's husband and Narcissa, because Voldemort would kill them when he finds out they have betrayed him, not to mention Snape's rage on them too. Man, I wouldn't want to be in their shoes right now. Brilliant as always! Update soon! Cheers!

Author's Response: They tagged Harry dead on. As usual, you are right. She definitely questions his loyalties. Snapes rage? Oh, yeah

fuchsiasteerpike2005.10.28 - 01:40PM27: Taking Care of His OwnSigned
Goodness! Severus sure earned alot of Dark Side points in this chapter, didn't he?

Author's Response: uhhuh! my little dark snape! muahaha

jelena2005.10.28 - 12:49PM27: Taking Care of His OwnSigned
Dear Southern Witch, I like your story a lot. However, to make it more interesting and less predictable, you could develop certain feelings between Hermione and Harry. I do not believe in a pure friendly relationship between men and women anyway... Looking forward to your next chapter!

Author's Response: I have some other things planned. I doubt they will be too predictable, but I do have some "Harry" action planned. It's not much though. I don't want a triangle. More up later today.

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