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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

PhoebeADA2005.04.26 - 02:26AM3: Subtle StrategySigned
Really nice realy really nice

Author's Response: thanks! more up soon. ~SW69~

Thorn2005.04.26 - 01:54AM3: Subtle StrategySigned
Hey, lil missy, thats some mighty fine writin' there... :) Hermione was pretty easy on Ron, but it's always easier to end a relationship when there is another possibility. Severus played that one just right. It's also common for girls to 'progress' their feelings, transferring affections from one boyfriend to the next. Considering she was getting close to having some action with Ron, again Severus is in a good position. Well, thats all for now. I gotta go herd the cows and psycoanalyis em.

Author's Response: hiya! Thanks! Too right. It's so easy to go from one to the next. I've always found that as well (not saying i've done that often, but I've been sooo in love with my ex-arse and tried to leave but would always go back. Then I started talking to my now husband was like i can do this!) Much easier. lol i'm thinking severus will use whatever advantage given. more up soon! ~sw69~ cows?

Fictionlover_322005.04.25 - 10:59PM3: Subtle StrategySigned
Poor Ron! I know he was just experimenting, but with Pansy? Blech. I thought he had good taste, appreantly not. I agree with Hermione's mom on her views of finding the one that's right for you. But I don't think Ron cheated on Mione on purpose, I just feel that his Lymbic system was activiated, but still, with Pansy? That is just too creepy for me. And our Snape is scheming as usual. He thinks he's just luring her so he can enjoy her for his own needs, but whose to say that he'll eventually fall in love with her? She's already taken his interest, it'll be a matter of time until he can accpet his true feelings for her. And our Mione won't fall that easily with Snape either, I noticed that she still has feelings for Ron. Being the brilliant witch she is, I also know that she'll eventually question Snape's motives, since he's acting so out of character towards her. Can't wait for the next update! Update soon. Cheers!

Author's Response: lol.. i guess it's a free piece of arse...hehehe... but we will see more on that in the next chapter. I think you'll find it interesting why Pansy would want Ron. I'm thinking as Sev lures Mione in, he's luring himself. hehe She is still thinking there may be a chance with Ron, but she's also thinking of her 'hero' now. So, we shall see~! Cheers, doll. ~SW69~

Molly Schlemmer2005.04.25 - 10:34PM3: Subtle StrategySigned
This is by far my favorite Severus that you have written. A little bit from The Succubus, a little (ok, maybe more than a little) fromVengeance is Sweet!, and a lot of cunning. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: thanks, molly! glad you like this Severus. I'm smitten with him as well. Most of Vengeance's snarky, yet his 'fake' side reminds me of Succubus Severus! more up soon. ~SW69~

Sooz2005.04.25 - 09:46PM3: Subtle StrategySigned
Wow...still a sneaky bastard. Love it! Ron is a twat. Cannot believe him. Hermione's description of a Byronic hero was text book perfect without making her sound like she was reciting something she read. It truly came from the heart. Thank you so much for the update. Can't wait to see where the slippery anti-hero ends up next ;)

Author's Response: lol! Ron will try to get her back but it won't work. She'll be thinking of her Byronic hero hehe I guess that was me speaking through Hermione. I just love those types!! Thanks so much!! More up soon! xoxox ~SW69~

confuzable2005.04.25 - 09:46PM3: Subtle StrategySigned
'He chuckled as she fled, slamming the door in her wake. “Well that worked out better than expected. She’s extremely naïve.”' delightful! i love a sneaky severus!

Author's Response: teehee..isn't he so bad? more up soon xoxoxo

SeverusSnape2005.04.25 - 09:41PM3: Subtle StrategySigned
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! So much!!!!!! I love how he almost kisses her!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: so close yet so far away! more up soon xoxoox hehe

lemonade82005.04.25 - 09:00PM3: Subtle StrategySigned
Whew!! Creepy Severus!!! I do like your story, but he is a bit ... stalky evil. More please. ;)

Author's Response: ahahha!! creepy! yikes! more? teehee.. i'm thinking there will be more in a few days!! thanks!! xoxoxo ~SW69~

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