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Reviews for The Price of Madness

Firewall2006.08.26 - 09:56AM19: FrustrationsSigned
What a great chapter!!! So he can't call people by their real names and she has finally figured it out. Let's hope she doesn't just let it go as she is contemplating at the end of the story. Go, Hermione, put that brain in gear. I'm really fond of mad Severus, I must admit. You portray him very well.

Author's Response: Writing a mad character is a bit of a stretch for my writing skills, but I have really been enjoying it. Thanks for saying that I've been doing it all right! And thanks for the kind review! :)

Bek Allen2006.08.26 - 09:37AM19: FrustrationsSigned
Hehehe... "Trollop." I absolutely love that word... Because it is so old fashioned. It's isn't used nearly enough, I think. I almost died at his second suggestion and could so easily picture the look of horror on Hermione's face. It was well worth a giggle. I am really enjoying the way you've meshed Severus' madness with some of his 'normal' personality traits; the smugness, the almost child-like innocence when he starts banging out suggestions for names other than 'whore', but above all else, the subtle moments where his madness is really obvious to Hermione. Talking to the suit of armor. A quiet kind of crazy. Please update when you can.

Author's Response: Lol! Trollop is a word my girlfriends and me used to call each other in high school, along with wench. I think we were unduly influenced by Monty Python. :D "A quiet kind of crazy" is an excellent way to describe it. Thank is exactly what I've been going for. Thanks so much! :)

Maggie2006.08.26 - 09:28AM19: FrustrationsSigned
She opened the can of worms, honestly, the "c" word. I wouldn't blame her if she hit the roof!

Author's Response: *giggle* I would have hit the roof too! Thanks! :)

sykofreek2006.08.26 - 02:02AM19: FrustrationsSigned
Poor Hermione I know how she feels! Guys have it so much easier than girls when it comes to doing certain things. Oh well we get cheaper car insurance thats somthing I guess.... I have to say that I am so glad I started this fic yesterday because if I had waited to start today I probably wouldn't have gotten to this chapter until tomorrow. This fic is just fabulous...I am very curious about Sev's fixation on the word whore? When are we to find out exactly what the reason for that is? I hope to eventually find out why... Well I just can't wait for the next chapter this one like all the others in this fic was wonderful!

Author's Response: Ha! Cheaper car insurance indeed! Guys do have it rather easy in that department, the buggers! You will definitely find out why Severus is fixated on the word whore, but not yet! Thanks so much! :)

Tautriadelta2006.08.26 - 01:19AM19: FrustrationsSigned
*waves torch threateningly* More, Faster, MORE!! OK, now that THAT'S outta my system,I've really been enjoying this. I only discovered it around Chpt. 16, but this is a great story, and I really want to know WTFs going on. I've got a lot of ideas running around my head (what's with the whore (slut cunt trollop) thing, what caused this whole thing (well, duh, a spell, but I want to know MORE) ) ... I really love your mad Severus, I can't help but laugh at him. He comes across naturally, as in, not forced. Some stories you can almost see the writer struggling with their characters, but your's seem to flow really nicely. I'm curious, is writing this story giving you any problems at all? You're updating rather quickly, and everything flows really nicely.... So help a gal out, or, I'll, um... wave my torch some more?! -S-

Author's Response: Aaaaaah! Get that torch away from me! :D I wouldn't say problems exactly, but I have noticed that writing for this is going a bit slower than usual. I think that is probably due more to my RL at the moment than because of this story. When I can sit down at my computer and buckle down, it seems to flow pretty easily. I am working on the next chapter, even as we speak, so it shouldn't be too long before I update again. Thanks! :)

Dudette Hermione2006.08.26 - 12:34AM19: FrustrationsSigned
Wow. This is the most intense story I've ever read. It's so wonderful. To say that your writing is any less than brilliant, would be an insult. The complex phsycological and dramatic scenes in your fanfiction really bought tears to my eyes. I really love reading your story. I also love the quotes in the beginning of each chapter. They're fascinating to read! Until next time! =)

Author's Response: How sweet! I still feel very much like a noob when it comes to writing, so reviews like yours just make my day! Thanks so much! :)

SchfiftyFive2006.08.26 - 12:08AM19: FrustrationsSigned
This is such an amazing story! It's so well thought out and put together! You are an amazing writer. I've read all 19 chapters today (I couldn't stop after I started!) and each one is witty and believable, and I just love it! Keep up the great work, I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are enjoying it! As much as I adrore the WIP readers who have been with me from the first chapter, I suspect it makes a better read if you read a whole chunk at once. Thanks so much! :)

greenwood2006.08.25 - 11:47PM19: FrustrationsSigned
I am amazed how you manage a brilliant chapter every time but you do! Each chaper seems to have it's own bit of personality and focuses on some significant little detail. Great chapter, funny and loving at the same time. Keep it coming.

Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you are enjoying it! Thanks! :)

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