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| kiwifire | 2011.08.16 - 12:42AM | 32: The Madness of War | Signed |
| Great chapter! I really loved Aberforth's scar. XD Great complement to Dumbledore's! Hahah! And good one on Snape and Draco dueling, I hope Voldie doesn't pay attention too close at how long they duel... ;)
I did find a few things though:
-- In the Tumbly Woodside part, I'm pretty sure 'sculking' should be 'skulking'
-- In the part where Lucius Malfoy disappeared -- "No one knows" if he made it out alive? Maybe 'no one knew'? I'm not sure.
-- The part where Hagrid left by portkey -- "Hagrid did better with portkeys that Apparation" -- should be 'than'
-- Aaand, Bellatrix Cruciatus-ing Hermione -- "every nerve felt as if it they were on fire".
I think that's all I found, but I'm not sure how to actually spell disapparate/disaperate/disapperate/*flail*. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll get those typos fixed. Most of the Potterverse words I've got in my word processing program, so I don't have to remember how to spell them! Thanks! | |||
| verasuspense | 2011.08.16 - 12:35AM | 32: The Madness of War | Signed |
| I woner how Voldie likes being called Lord Whore and Dark Whore ? Author's Response: :D I imagine it annoys him. | |||
| Book Lover | 2011.08.10 - 02:12PM | 31: The Sky's the Limit | Signed |
| I didn't think I'd get to the last chapter of this before you finished it... Huh. =D Looking forward to the rest!! XX Author's Response: Thank you! | |||
| s50m | 2011.08.09 - 11:41PM | 26: Albus Lives! | Signed |
| From the very beginning, I got sucked into your addictive plot and I must congratulate you on how very creative you are! Your explanation about how and why Snape became mad, as well as the entire goblin soul-splitting magic was really surprising (in a good way!) because it made so much sense within the context of the books. I can tell that you have taken a lot of time thinking this story through and it shows. Your writing is exceptional; your humor, suspense, and characterizations are most enjoyable to read. Please finish this story! :) I eagerly await the next chapter. Author's Response: You are too kind! Though there are many things of my own in this fic, I wanted to make it as cannon compliant as possible, post HBP anyway. I'm so glad that you are enjoying it! | |||
| Blondiebear | 2011.08.09 - 10:00AM | 31: The Sky's the Limit | Signed |
| You've returned!! And the day after my birthday too... I believe this is the best birthday present I have ever received. Welcome back... you have been dearly missed.
Beautiful chapter btw :-) Author's Response: Happy Birthday! And thank you so much. I missed you all too. | |||
| hgelman | 2011.08.08 - 11:01PM | 7: Whores and Serpents | Signed |
| Since you are posting new chapters, I have decied to re-read this story. I am soooooo happy that you are finishing it - yipee! This is really up there as one of my all time favorites. The first time I read it, I spent about a month calling everyone a whore (mostly to myself). It have to say, the second time around, it doesn't get old. The whole whore thing is still priceless! I am grinning from ear to ear! Thanks! Author's Response: I had to re-read a couple times in order to continue it. The whore thing still makes me giggle too. Thanks! | |||
| NightQueen | 2011.08.08 - 08:54PM | 31: The Sky's the Limit | Signed |
| Absolutely wonderful chapter! So tender and yet so very passionate! Now Honor and duty call, but may-hap love will finally conquer all?! I really am more thrilled than I can possibly say that you're writing again! Author's Response: Hiya NightQueen! I'm thrilled I'm writing again as well. I missed it. Thanks sweetie! | |||
| verasuspense | 2011.08.08 - 08:33PM | 31: The Sky's the Limit | Signed |
| There's just one thing : Hermione misquotes Lovelace's poem. It's "I could not love thee, Dear, so much / Loved I not honour more" Misquotations irritate the hell out of me. It's like strolling along and suddenly stumbling over a big rock in the path. Author's Response: Yes she does. In my mind, Hermione is quoting what she has heard. Bookworm that she is, I just can't imagine her having read the original. I tried it at first with the original quote, and quite frankly she just didn't want to say it that way. Perhaps I should change that "quoted" to "said." | |||
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