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Reviews for The Price of Madness

Lilysweets2007.04.02 - 12:31AM21: Gringotts RevisitedAnonymous
03-11-2006 06:08 Rated 10

Hooray! I'm so happy to see this story again. You have been missed, Pooka! Interesting chapter...I'm intrigued by the parchment and what Bill wanted Hermione to understand about the vault. I'm looking forward to the next installment. Cheers!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry about the delays, but things seem to be moving right along lately, so hopefully no more big breaks! Thanks so much! :)

jenonymous2007.04.02 - 12:31AM21: Gringotts RevisitedAnonymous
03-11-2006 06:04

Woo hoo! I've been watching FOREVER for the this chapter! Hurray, Plaidie! That Severus really cracks me up. So casual. Covered in soot, and no, nothing's wrong at all. That would be really creepy waking up to find him staring. Has she ever asked him why he does that? And I loved Bill at the bank, long lanky Weasley crammed into spaces meant to be cubbies for little people. Can't wait to hear his explanations. Bravas to the betas--and write faster, can't you, Plaidie? I'm perishing for something to read (Just kidding. Well, no I'm not really, but I'm done nagging you as well.)

Author's Response: I'm writing up a small storm these days. The next chapter is already at the betas, and I'm halfway through the chapter after that! Go me! *giggle* As for Severus, i imagine he stares at her because he likes to look at her. ;) Thanks so much! :)

hedgehog2007.04.02 - 12:26AM21: Gringotts RevisitedAnonymous
03-11-2006 06:02 Rated 10

Thanks for the update. I'm glad things are rolling again and the betas are warm and safe. A very teasing chapter. I know just how Hermione feels, more questions than answers. :)

Author's Response: The next couple of chapters will give Hermione and my lovely readers a few answers, so you won't have to wait too long! Thanks so much! :)

minutiae2007.04.02 - 12:26AM21: Gringotts RevisitedAnonymous
03-11-2006 06:01 Rated 10

I've been checking Mage every day for an update to your story - I'm so glad to see you writing TPOM again! This chapter was worth the wait - I bust a gut every time Severus calls Hermione "Trollop"! Also very glad to see him getting some quality snogging in - I'd love to see more of that - I don't know how Hermione resists him, although it must be a bit strange to wake up and find him in her bedroom, I wonder what that's about? Looking eagerly forward to the next installment! (BTW, I think the expression goes, "you've got another think coming", not "thing".)

Author's Response: Actually, both “you’ve got another thing coming” and “you’ve got another think coming” are equally valid expressions. In my life, I’ve heard “thing” far more often than “think” so I went with that one. I have no idea what they say across the pond, but I don’t try to make my fics completely Brit compliant.

As far as the expression goes:
In 1982, Judas Priest sings the song, “You’ve Got Another Thing Coming”, on his “Screaming for Vengeance” album. In 1983, Bill Cosby uses “You’ve got another thing coming” on his album “Himself.”
Lol, the 80’s were definitely my formative years. Yes, you can find uses of “You’ve got another think coming” as well. My point is that both expressions are in common usage, neither is incorrect.

Now that’s out of the way, thank you so much for your kind comments! More soon--the next chapter is already at the betas. Thanks!

entmaid5212007.04.02 - 12:26AM21: Gringotts RevisitedAnonymous
03-11-2006 05:09 i love snow..just not in Buffalo. I want it here in NJ. Anyway, glad to see the return of this story. Why did she get shown the philosopher's stone vault?? I am DYING to know here:)

Author's Response: I was hoping to explain the vault business in the next chapter, but I'm afraid that you'll have to wait two chapters to discover that. Thanks for reading, and thanks for the kind review! :)

Vampire_Exotica2007.04.02 - 12:25AM21: Gringotts RevisitedAnonymous
03-11-2006 04:48 Rated 10

Interesting! Very interesting! Lovely update but what is it that has Bill spooked hey? and a curse breaking seems like the perfect job for hermione....if only she could get over her discomfort of the 'knee high whores' lol

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I think that Hermione would make an excellent curse breaker. Thanks so much! :)

Popkin2007.04.02 - 12:25AM21: Gringotts RevisitedAnonymous
03-11-2006 04:11 Yay, an update! *Does the wiggle of joy*

Do we eventually find out why Severus stares at Hermione while she's asleep? I hope we find out. As for the Gringott's vault thing, the only thing I can think of is what was on that scroll has something to do with the way the Goblins protect their vaults. But then what does that have to do with Severus?

Will they keep Severus occupied when Bill comes over, or will they make him swear not to tell anybody and let him know. Bill seems trustworthy enough.

Anyway, I'm extremely glad you've updated, and I hope you do so again soon! Great job :)

Author's Response: I think Severus' staring is one mystery I can let out of the bag. He just likes looking at her! ;) As for the rest of your questions, many will be answered in the next two chapters. Thanks! :)

fire wall2007.04.02 - 12:25AM21: Gringotts RevisitedAnonymous
03-11-2006 03:47 Rated 10

I was so happy to see an update. Once again, another impressive chapter to a truly poignant story. It is so sad to see Severus trapped by whatever curse is on him. Thank you for updating and kudos to your intrepid betas.

Author's Response: On behalf of me and my fantabulous betas, i thank you! :)


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