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Reviews for Vengeance is Sweet!

Maggie2005.03.28 - 03:59PM4: Reprisal!Signed
I'm glad there'd be another chapter. I'd hate to see it end right like this...

Author's Response: working on it now! hopefully it will be up tonight. :)

Horserider2005.03.27 - 11:08PM4: Reprisal!Signed
Ah-haaaa...I think Severus is coming around very, very slowly to how Hermione (and everybody else, including me) hopes he will. Please keep this going! Hoping for a happy ending of course, but I love how Severus is going through so much conflict over this...he really is emotionally vulnerable and having a really hard time with all of this. I can't help but think that Hermione was planning for him to tell her to sit by him, and had this part planned all along. She was seeming to be weak for a while there, but now I think she has some tricks up her sleeve. Kudos! This is damn good! ~HR

Author's Response: Exactly! She did hope for that, and it worked. She's going to harden up just a bit, and Severus will remain the same (very slowly changing). Thanks for having a read! yayay! more up soon

Horserider2005.03.27 - 10:33PM3: Retribution!Signed
I very much like how Severus seems to keep biting himself on the arse with his actions, though I do hope things turn out with both of them happy together. You've got this constructed very well, how he keeps alternating between making himself happy and shooting himself in the foot with his hopes to always come out on top. Loving it! ~HR

Author's Response: yep. i will have more up soon, and they will be happy together. :)

Horserider2005.03.27 - 09:53PM2: Bwahahahaha!Signed
Oooo, I'm so glad it has taken me a while to get catching up with this one...a juicy spellbinder for a lazy Sunday night! Got my eyes glued to the monitor as I run off in pursuit of the next chapter! :D ~HR

Author's Response: yay! good to see you back. i hppe all is going well for you, and I must say that I can't wait for more of your new story here. It's great! more up on this one tomorrow. Cheers!

Satoni2005.03.27 - 02:53PM4: Reprisal!Signed
don't give up on this story yet.....it's brilliant ! let him work through his feelings for her...but don't do it to fast. He needs to think over it. step by step hermiones goal must be achieved. She deserves it... and I would hate it if this story ended after the next chapter....

Author's Response: i'm gonna have a good bit more.. yay!! hehe....

Barbara2005.03.27 - 01:07PM4: Reprisal!Signed
Hi sunshine, pretty please don't let it end here. Hermione can't really stay in the situation she is now - either Snape changes gradually (NOT too aprupt ...) or let her end it end (her way out, you remeber ...). But anyway, I really enjoy reading your story. I hope for more, what little twist came to your mind? AND I hope you're well soon. Love Barbara

Author's Response: Hiya! I'm going to do a good bit more. I'm starting to work on the next chapter, and so far so good! The twist is having them follow through with a shaky marriage. Can't really give more away than that, but it'll come out ok i think.

Lana Manckir2005.03.26 - 05:57PM4: Reprisal!Signed
I would have no problem with a twist in the plot or it getting lengthier. Loved the chapters, you're working really well on how some men's minds work. I have to say though that I don't much like Severus right now, he sounds an awful lot like my husband. The whole treating her like an object and the control games are just infuriating. Hermione is too weak and I know why, I've been there. She really wants him and it's hard to think straight on your pride and respect yourself when the need is too great. That's why I think you're doing a wonderful job. The way Hermione is not eating and acting as the vibrant intelligent woman she was is also the sign of someone who's angry with herself for letting him treat her that way, but at the same time not being able to let him go. Whatever plot you have in mind, I'm sure you will do it wonderfully. My suggestion is that I would really like to see Hermione put Severus in his place, even if it means leaving him. He sure as well deserves it ;-)

Author's Response: I'm glad you won't mine my messing with it even more. I have some stuff in store for our mates. lol. You are so right about Hermione, and I am glad that I am able to project that. She will start to questions herself and voice her opinions more in the next chapter. :)

SeverusSnape2005.03.26 - 04:55PM4: Reprisal!Signed
Wow. I really like this story. It's so heart-wrenching! In a good way. I like how strong you make him. If I were writing this story, I would have had him tell her he loves her in like . . . the second chapter. I like how you drag it out to the point that it's almost painful to the reader. I really hope he loves her in the end! Great job!

Author's Response: He will love her in the end, before then really, but he will never be sappy about it! muahahaha... I have a few more things up for the pair. more up soon. cheers!

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