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Reviews for Vengeance is Sweet!

lovethelab2005.03.30 - 07:44AM5: Concurrence!Signed
I enjoyed reading this chapter - like always! I think it is a good show of both trying to noit give in, even though they want to. I think the voice in his head needs to be quiet for a little while. It would be different if it was his conscience, but the vioce telling him to take advantage of Hermione's feelings is just wrong on so many levels - - but I guess we all have that voice inside of us also. (the waring angel and devil on our shoulders!) I was wondering, as I read the last part of this chapter, if Hermione just had a bug, or if it was something with long term effects??

Author's Response: the voice will go aways soon. :) i'm glad you liked the chapter. he was trying to 'fake' being nice, but he fell into a nice pattern lol.... unfortunately, for now, it's something with a bit more long term effects

semperputus2005.03.30 - 05:34AM5: Concurrence!Signed
You are going with the pregnancy thing aren't you????? I like this chapter it has strength and an undlylying deepth of Character. It is more like the Hermione we know standing up for her rights. Will Snape realise it is not monotonous or will he find a nasty shock? Can't wait for more glad you have developed it can't wait to see what you do next

Author's Response: i'm glad you liked the chapter! she will make a bit more of a show soon to defend herself. Severus is about to have a bit of a rant soon. :)

spitfirecrackre2005.03.30 - 05:16AM5: Concurrence!Signed
I totally agree with Harry's description of her from a few? chapter back. hermione seems to be spark-less. Quite sad that. And I don't really like your Snape. Right mean git he is. Hrmph. Oh. and I do so know what you're talking about with those ruddy voices-in-heads-that-never-shut-up. ;)

Author's Response: lol.. the voices will sod off soon... lol.. severus is very hateful, but he will become a little more flexible. hermione will get some spunk back

just me2005.03.30 - 05:10AM5: Concurrence!Signed
I think they still have a long way to go. Hopefully there will be a happy end... hm, I´mnot quite sure,

Author's Response: there will be doll.. just not quite yet :)

Black_lust_z2005.03.30 - 04:50AM5: Concurrence!Signed
Oh no, Severus what are you thinking...poor Hermione. I hope he finds the true depth of his feelings for her before he ends things with her. Can’t wait for more, I’m on the edge of my seat! *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*

Author's Response: bad severus huh? i know. things are coming up soon. a little bad before some good, but i do promise a happy ending

ozarkmoon2005.03.30 - 04:50AM5: Concurrence!Signed
Yes that ruddy voice needs to get out of his head! Nasty thing that.

Author's Response: it is! it will eventually leave though

Author's Response: sooner than later hopefully. haha more up soon

albie2005.03.30 - 04:42AM5: Concurrence!Signed
I think I know what's wrong... Pure Hermione if he wants to end things. I'm curious how you'll dell with next chapter. :)

Author's Response: the next chapter will be very touchy for us. sigh. a lot will be going on there. more up soon

Bellamar2005.03.30 - 04:25AM5: Concurrence!Signed
My how this little one shot has grown. Now it has turned into a check the recently added section story to feed the addiction several times a day story. I love the loop this appears to be going in and I can’t wait to see where this is heading. I keep wishing that little voice in Severus’s head would fade into the night, but then another part wants it to stay because when it comes down to it I’m an angst whore. I love the difficult path that leads to a happy ending. How many more chapters do you think this story will be? I know you said you had another idea but you weren’t sure if you were going to use it here or in a new story. Anyway, I was just wondering. Cheers and applause from the ATL and thanks you for all of your hard work. Bellamar

Author's Response: it's getting bigger and bigger... hehe... HAIL BRAVES... the voice will get told to bugger off eventually lol i'm going to put the other idea in here. it seems to fit. i'd say maybe 7... that's approximate

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