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Reviews for Vengeance is Sweet!

GinnyW2005.03.24 - 01:58AM4: Reprisal!Signed
Oh, Sunshine! I love this...it's wonderful! So very sweet! I missed your post at Potter Place about the issue you were having with this. I hate being on vacation and away from my computer! ARGH! For me to send a review takes forever! I've read a couple of updates, but yours is the only one I've commented on b/c this computer is so dang slow! (you'll notice i've neglected a few other things too.) Please keep this story going...you have a good Snape here and a good Hermione here. As long as you keep Snape snarky and worried about appearing weak then I think that they can manipulate each other to whatever devious plot bunny hopped across your computer! :-) ~Ginny

Author's Response: thanks, doll!! i hate that you are off on vacation! hehe.. hurry home, i say! some peeps are hating on snape right about now and screaming wtf? at hermione.. hahahahaa... I try to reassure them that I am a definite fan of a happy ending. I'll yak more about my plans in private to see what you think.

Betz2005.03.24 - 01:27AM4: Reprisal!Signed
Severus is one manipulative bastard. He's also self-deluded into thinking he doesn't more than care for her (pardon my review if it's a bit off, as I've just polished off most of a bottle of wine). Albus, you meddling old fool. Well, at least he started them on thier way, though the situation with Ricardo hastened things a bit. Did Albus have anything to do with Ricardo? My oh my. Seems Severus is convinceing himself of many things while he is in the process of falling in love with her. When will he realize that love doesn't make you weak but stronger. I think some wise words from Albus in that topic are in order.

Author's Response: Yep, Albus will mention a few things to both him and hermione. Severus is falling for her! I'm glad you can see that! He doesnt see it yet though, and he will try to make excuses for it. She is right to believe that he will change. :) You know, it is possible that Albus pushed the new Ricardo and his sister towards Hermione and Harry. He always has a way of helping things along. more up soon. cheers! and thanks!

Darque Queen72005.03.24 - 01:06AM4: Reprisal!Signed
You know, SW, you can really end this story now. This Severus is a callous bastard and Hermione is a grade one jackass. I know - because I've been in a relationship just like this. I got the short end of the stick there - and it was all my fault. I LET him degrade me...because I thought he'd love me in the end. Trust me, it NEVER works. I really don't like this story. I just don't like the place it's taken me to. D.

Author's Response: He is a bit mean, isn't he? And, she is so eager to please. Sigh. Good thing I believe in happy endings. I was in a relationship like this as well (we definitely broke up). The bloke never changed. I firmly believed he would though. What a dumbass I was! And, now, I think back and laugh at my stupidity. I ask myself what the hell was I thinking? Good thing that I happen to know Hermione finds her courage soon, and the Severus enventually un-arses himself (somewhat). I would suggest not to read any further though because there will be other touchy things that go on before the big epiphany hits our Potions expert. Thanks for reviewing, doll and cheers! :)

fyiagcg2005.03.24 - 12:59AM4: Reprisal!Signed
ok, love. first things first: i truly love this story. You are an amazing writier and i find myself sitting here, transfixed by your story, drawn into it. I have no criticism towards you or your writing. In fact, it is the quality of your writing, the way that it feels real and understandable, that is to be my undoing. because Hermione is royally pissing me off! You write her state of mind very well, and really this is not so much a review of your story as it is a rant for all of womankind. But what is the dumb bitch thinking? Like an abused wife, she blames herself for his unkindness. She is willing to take anything from him. she is weak and stupid and pathetic, and i want to see our girl be as strong as we all think her to be! your writing equals good. me entering your world and watching the scene in front of me play itself out, and watching her think and say these things and just act so mindlessly... that equals bad. For some reason i really want to reiiterate that im not at all criticising your story. i love your story and look forward to an update (whether you finish it quickly or give it a while, do not compromise your writing standards. as long as they're written so well i will not complain about length). But Damn that bitch is getting on my nerves. I sit here and i shake my head at her thoughts and berate the computer for her actions. I suppose that as far as reviewing your story goes, this isnt much. I guess that being so upset with Hermione is only proof that your writing is powerful. But she still pisses me off. I do hope, for her sake as well as mine, that she rise from this. It is a classic abusive relationship if I've ever seen one, and I want to see our characters happy, eventually. so yeah. thats all. i just needed to bitch about the female psyche for a moment. keep writing! xoxo .e.

Author's Response: Thanks, doll. I'm glad that you are enjoying my story. I will start by saying that not much offends me, so it's perfectly fine that you've said what you have. i don't mind at all.

I also don't like the way Hermione is acting. She is a bit too taken with him and allowing him to cause her a good deal of mental anguish. Unfortunately, some men do this to their women. I was once in a relationship such as this. It didn't work out. I found the strength to tell him to bugger off.

Severus will come around, but he will not be a softie in this story. Hermione, as I have outlined for the next chapter, will become a bit more like herself. I guess with everyone (Harry, Albus, Minerva, Ro, Ron) telling her that she isn't acting like her normal self, she will try to get back to good. Even Snape commented on the return of her temper, saying that it was one thing he found attractive about her.

I am a sucker for a happy ending, so there will be one. As far as the review, I loved it. It makes me feel as though I am portraying things as I had initially planned. Hermione will explain her actions soon. As far as abusive, i think it is a bit of mental abuse on some level, it will just take him some time before he realizes it. Someone like Hermione can only take so much. More up in a few days hopefully. Cheers and thanks again!

confuzable2005.03.24 - 12:31AM4: Reprisal!Signed
Was she waiting for an opportune moment? aaaaaaaaaah love that.

Author's Response: teehee.. thanks! a bit of paranoid severus there lol.. more up soon

April2005.03.24 - 12:15AM4: Reprisal!Signed
Keep going this is a really great. i really like the inner voice. it's not gonna win is it ??

Author's Response: no! lol he'll be rid of it one day. more up asap :)

justme2005.03.23 - 11:59PM4: Reprisal!Signed
Snape can be such a prick!!! Dont most of us think we can "change" the man we're with? Usually for the better??? Only to find that we can't, and we had just better accept this and stop deluding ourselves? When is Ro going to get her Polyjuice, and WHAT is she going to do with it???

Author's Response: he is being a jerk, isnt he? LOL. Like i told someone earlier, I have been there before hoping a berk ex of mine would change. It never happened though (psst.. Snape will sort of change before long though). I think Ro and Vector (hahaha) have plans. We will see some of that. Imagine Severus and Hermione looking down the hall and noticing another Severus walking about. ahhahaha more up soon. cheers!

Maddy Riddle2005.03.23 - 11:57PM4: Reprisal!Signed
Good chapter.
Did you read my comment about your last chapter in my LJ?
Anyway, as you're the one that knows tie plot device, I can't say if it will be better here or in another story. You'll have to figure that out for yourself. As for me, I'll read it anyway. You know I like your stories and that I'll read anything you write.

Author's Response: thanks, doll. I havent been on LJ in days, but i do intend to update tomorrow. I'll go and have a read for the past week on eveyrone's! lol I think I might keep it going just a bit, but I wonder if that is selfishness? lol... it's like i don't want to let things go! I'll go check out your LJ... i am curious now (hope it's nothing like the other night with that 'hilarious' story ahhahaha)

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