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| Alexa Potion | 2005.05.22 - 04:25PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
| Wow, I can't believe how well you can pull out from me more and more emotions every time?! I'm so deeply impressed for this chapter, this was so touching and it gave the promises in the next chapter(s). I have to say "Wow" the second time!!! :)
I think that it was good thing that you told us more about Severus' grandparents. It explained a lot about Severus father's behaviour. I have a thought that Severus father asked the apology for his behaviour from his wife in his letters which he wrote everytime when he was with the other woman. Am I right?
I don't think that Hermione would press him on about Pensieve and the letters because I believe that she has learnt that it's not a good thing to ask too more questions. Yeah, Hermione is smarter now!
What about Harry? You promised that he's in the picture again! Will I hear from him soon??? In the meanwhile: cheers!!!! Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter. I am quite fond of it as well. I do have much to add with the letters that will give us a little more insight. The next bit though is mostly dealing with Severus and Hermione's helping him. I didn't make room for Harry yet again. He'll be back though. Promise. | |||
| StormAZ | 2005.05.22 - 03:46PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
| Another wonderful chapter ^__^ LOL, went back and checked my last review ... not sure whether to giggle or apoligize over that one (I think I'll just giggle though) ^_~ Occassionally questions just abound around me (I've gotten used to it, but not nice to subject others to it without warning LOL). At least Severus was able to make it through the penseive all right. It seems that a lot of his personal "demons" have been set to rest if he allows them to be. Not all mind, but a lot of them at least! Some of them are strictly his own and will probably take both he and Hermione to set them down or understand them better so they can't hurt him anymore. And yeah, I've been watching Luring as much as this one! Excellent stories that I look for every time I come to SH! Author's Response: No worries about questions. I don't mind. Sometimes I can answer then! Severus will have much to think on now, and he'll be confused. Hermione will be there for him. Luring will only be a couple of days. Cheers | |||
| Stormi | 2005.05.22 - 03:22PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
| Yes! Another wonderful chapter. Congratulations! Author's Response: thanks, stormi! | |||
| fresh8 | 2005.05.22 - 03:11PM | 11: Quiet Confession | Signed |
| update Author's Response: will do! cheers | |||
| looneyluna | 2005.05.22 - 02:54PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
| I'm glad you included the backstory of Severus' parents. I would have hated to think that his father was evil for the sake of just being evil. You've done a wonderful job of Severus' angst and Hermione's strength. Looking foward to the next chapter :) Author's Response: I wasn't going to include as much at first, but it just seemed necessary when I began the scenes. Hermione will continue to be strong, but we both know how curious she can be at times. Fear not. Severus really will try to not snap so much. I appreciate the read and the review! More should be up soon. | |||
| cab2000 | 2005.05.22 - 02:50PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
| You had me crying in this chapter. I eagerly await the next. I want to see what he does. Author's Response: sorry about that, doll. I teared up as well though. parts were so pitiful. more up soon. | |||
| Mouse | 2005.05.22 - 02:44PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
| Wonderful chapter my dear. I'm betting Hermione is wise enough to give Severus the room he needs to process all of the information that he has been given. She herself at times I'm sure has needed to think things through, and has taken more then a few hours to come to her own conclusions. Letting her hubby know that she will be there for him when he is ready would be enough. She is a courious girl not stupid. :D She'll do the right thing I have no doubt.
I loved the memories, and how they showed his fathers downward spiral. But can an old dog learn new tricks? That is the question. If he really wants to change he will I believe. But only if he truly wants it. I was surpised that Hermione found the room and the picture. I thought Severus would have been more angry about that. Concidering he is such a private person. I figured he would have though it an invasion. Or that she had over steped her bounds?? I agree with her doing it just thought he be more upset about it. Make sence? :D
Anyway, great job can't wait for the next chapter. ;) Author's Response: Thanks, doll. She's not going to be pushy for a while yet, but she will be curious about things. His father's life was a sad one as well. I don't think Severus will change all that much, but we can bet he'll treat hermione better. I think the major thing will be when his child is born. How will he feel when holding his little one? He was angry that she went there, but I'm thinking he was a bit emotionally drained. He'd been sitting there with a Pensieve all day. No trips to the loo. No food. I'm thinking he hadn't the energy, but if I didn't explain that well enough, sorry. more up soon | |||
| JTBJAB | 2005.05.22 - 02:38PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
| Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!
Please update again asap.....i both need and want another chapter! Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to hurry on with it! Cheers!! | |||
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