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Reviews for Vengeance is Sweet!

verasuspense2011.01.31 - 01:59PM1: Muahahhahaha!Signed
I suspect this started out as a one-shot, and then just grew.

WannabeWolfe2011.01.04 - 10:56AM15: Full CircleSigned
Whew - this story wore me out emotionally. There were many points where I wanted to strangle either Severus or Hermione for the way they were acting, but by the end, you explained the actions behind their behaviors and helped them move past it. It was a lovely end.

severus492010.09.08 - 11:13AM15: Full CircleSigned
I did a search for new stories to read and came up with this one. I was not dissapointed! There is only one thing that bothered me about this story: the use of 'I'll not' instead of 'I won't' or 'I shan't' in some instances. Like in the line "I'll not listen to you anymore, sir" (ch. 9 - Transition; Severus is speaking about his father.) In that instance, it's a very stilted, southern America way of talking that you wouldn't hear in England. For that reason, it sounds really out of place in a story about Brits. However, overall, the story is extremely well-written completely focused and centralized on very few characters. It may seem odd to some to read a story about Severus without Draco, or Lucius or any of his other cronies hanging around, but when you realize that this story's universe is compacted for explicitly the reason of telling their story together, it doesn't seem odd at all.

Jinxie2010.04.20 - 04:30PM15: Full CircleSigned
Fantastic story, very well written! Thank you for sharing!

Half Blood Outcast2009.11.18 - 06:59PM15: Full CircleSigned
this was well worth the read, dear!!! i was always rooting for Severus to really admit how much he loved her.

leffe2009.08.20 - 02:46PM15: Full CircleSigned
I like how you described Severus' distrust and fear of being "caught" with his true feelings in this story. It made my chest ache reading about it. You are a good author, I have read some of your other stories too and enjoyed all of them. Thank you!

Bongyorka03062009.08.17 - 03:55PM15: Full CircleSigned
Liked your story really much, the way their relationship developed was very realistic, (i think that's the right word for it), because Snape was just Snape, with deep marks from his past, burned into him so much. It was good that you don't just write about his childhood,and then he forgets about it easily, and live a happy life, but carry on with the effects it had on his adulthood. However smoetimes I didn't like your Hermione, when they started to have sex, because I don't think Hermione allows to be treated like this. Sometimes she didn't have dignity and let him humiliate her and then like nothing happened, keep on. how could she? she loves Severus, thats okay, but she shouldn't give herself up. It was good, the way she behave about the wedding, that helped Severus to realise that he should treat her elseway. All in all, i liked your story very much, and would like to read other stories by you. Best wishes, forgive my english if I have some mistakes, I'm not a native speaker.

nimath7722009.06.25 - 09:07PM15: Full CircleSigned
I really enjoyed this story and the deep delve into Severus' character. I don't know that I have ever read a story that so completely captures who he is, both in canon and in your story. Thanks for such an enjoyable read!

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