Reviews for Vengeance is Sweet!
queenp | 2005.05.22 - 05:44PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
interesting chapter. I like the pensieve images...Very well done...Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next...Update again soon!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked them dear. They were pretty easy to write. Well, I hated the little sad part with the little sister. :( but, alas, it was needed. I should have more up soon. Cheers! |
GinnyW | 2005.05.22 - 05:32PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
Oh, Sun, that was wonderful. Sad, angsty, sweet. So glad that Ella could talk to Hermione. The worst things I've ever seen have been stillbirths or babies born too early to survive...having them die while you hold them. That you could bring up those emotions and memories with your words--very well done. I think I need to go have a cry now. ;-) I look forward to more. ~Ginny
Author's Response: Thanks, doll. Baby deaths are terrible. poor little things. I hate the vision of it, but i needed to add that in :( more up soon xoxo |
lovethelab | 2005.05.22 - 05:25PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
Wow - and I thought my parents were confusing! Will Severus take his father's last bit of advice and love Hermione whole heartedly, or will he try to remain aloof? Great chapter as always, Southern!
Author's Response: I think he will try the advice eventually. There is a bit to work through right now. more up soon. |
sully2 | 2005.05.22 - 05:15PM | 11: Quiet Confession | Signed |
Oh, I certainly hope he doesn't go back to being a total bastard, just a snarky one. It seems more angst is up next, but thanks for the lemons to hold us over.
Author's Response: no, he won't be a total bastard any longer, but he'll have his snarky moments. hehe |
sully2 | 2005.05.22 - 05:13PM | 10: Acceptance | Signed |
Anticipation...
Author's Response: uh huh hehe :) |
Mystic | 2005.05.22 - 05:06PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
A new out look on life for Severus. The part with the polyjuice was kind of disturbing to me, but it was needed to relay what happened in the story. I think that Hermione will continue in being patient with Severus. Can hardly wait for the next update!
Author's Response: I think Severus will see many things differently. Sorry about the Polyjuice bit. That's why I had those warnings up. I knew some people may be put off by it and the character death bit.
His father was not a good guy or a wise one, I think. It's a pity that he did that to the woman. I'm thinking that he probably did much more. Thankfully he only wanted to show Severus the basics lol More up soon! Cheers |
larana | 2005.05.22 - 04:53PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
this is great. Finally he is not a thick headed idiot. :)
Author's Response: lol too right! more up soon. cheers |
Betz | 2005.05.22 - 04:34PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
Be still my beating heart!!! What an emotional roller coaster! So painful for Severus, such a lie he had been taught, what tragedy!!! Oh, it breaks my heart! I cannot say more more, as words cannot convey how moved I was by this chapter, especially the ending when his kisses her and realized it's time for change.
Author's Response: hiya, doll. This chapter was very emotional. i felt so sorry for that little one, but I did need to add that here. He does know it's time for a change. I'm just unsure how he's going to get there. More up soon. |
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