Reviews for Vengeance is Sweet!
siriusluv | 2005.04.10 - 11:53PM | 7: Taking Action! | Signed |
Great work as always. I love Hermiones' parents names especially since Hermiones middle name is Jane.
Author's Response: thanks! I thought Jane would be okay as well. :) more up soon |
nonymus | 2005.04.10 - 11:34PM | 7: Taking Action! | Signed |
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hahaha! i wanna see harry kick sev's arse..... that'd be hilarious...
Author's Response: lol.. i have some plans for it hehe |
spaz141 | 2005.04.10 - 10:53PM | 4: Reprisal! | Signed |
I sure hope that Hermione's self worth improves. Possession? Yikes. Another heart wrencher (but no silly tears this time). Thanks.
Author's Response: :( sorry, doll, for the sad stuff. it does get better though hehe |
Darque Queen7 | 2005.04.10 - 10:27PM | 7: Taking Action! | Signed |
Good grief! What a LOW blow! This Snape makes the Dark Lord look like a 20 year old sheep at the petting zoo! Going to her parents with such misinformation. He doesn't love her - he couldn't love her and he will blame and resent both Hermione and the child! All he will be happy with is the fact that he possesses her - nothing more. That no one else can have her. I really don't like this Snape at all. He is an ass and I hope Harry kicks him into the next fan fic! That's my opinion - and I'm sticking to it!
D.
Author's Response: lol.. good deal. Harry is going to have a go at him in the next chapter. That is how he appears now, but he'll lighten up. it's just taking a bit of time. :) |
Fictionlover_32 | 2005.04.10 - 09:58PM | 7: Taking Action! | Signed |
This time, Snape has gone too far! How could he? Hermione granted him a way out, didn't she? That's what he wanted, right? So why he's bringing her parents into this? Even though he doesn't love her, I would've expected him to treat Mione with respect, but I guess it's asking too much of him. What's his agenda? He doesn't want to be tied to her, yet, he won't accept any man courting her or
being her lover. That's not very fair on her part or his. I just can't believe he would do something like this! It just boggles my mind because in all your other fic, Snape's portrayed as a man who's passionate and reasoanble towards Mione, but in this he's just a overgrown bully. He's just so different here. Actually, I think Snape would be like this in canon. He's certaintly mean and cunning enough, don't you think? At this point, I truly wonder what Hermione will do? I don't think Snape'll get away with this one. I sense a huge fight coming. Update soon. Cheers!
Author's Response: Well, let's think about what Albus said. It's like he's warring with himself. He is the only one talking about their marriage. It's almost as if he wishes someone to force him into it so he can say Oi! I'm just here because I have to be. There is a lot of things that he feels, but he just doesn't know how to identify it as love. I've always told my husband that my jealousy means I care. heheehe. I do love my snapes in the other stories, but I'm trying something a bit different here. His passion will come, just might take a bit. :) I'm thinking of a Succubus type Severus by the time this one is done. |
spaz141 | 2005.04.10 - 09:47PM | 3: Retribution! | Signed |
Okay, now we have the tears and no funny twist to lighten things up. I think this may well be so much more than you ever intended. Angsty brilliance it is. Thanks.
Author's Response: thanks, spaz. it'll get better. I promise :) |
Maddy Riddle | 2005.04.10 - 09:02PM | 7: Taking Action! | Signed |
Great chapter!
I love the way Hermione is so determined. I think this way is the only that will lead Severus to actually realise his feelings for her (I kind of think Hermione's parents will force him to say it).
About Severus act for the Grangers, I'm studying law... I'm always the wonded party in the story... *smirks* (as a teacher once told me, it's not important if you're saying the truth, it's important the judge believes it is) ;)
Author's Response: ahahaha!!! love the quote and too right! her parents are going to be surprised~ lol it's cute. i have a bit of it down already. maybe cute is not the right word... interesting? Severus must have studied law as well. hehe |
spaz141 | 2005.04.10 - 08:50PM | 2: Bwahahahaha! | Signed |
You are a tricky. My goodness. I was almost crying until you made me laugh. Thanks.
Author's Response: tee.. i try to be lol... the story gets a bit dare, but I promise there will be light. |
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