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Reviews for Vengeance is Sweet!

Blueeyes2005.04.21 - 12:42AM8: UnanimitySigned
ok. so you made him realize his fate...now give him back his wife and child....or children....make him realize he does love her,, and wants her.let the true Snape come out,, i know he has it in him,,,

Author's Response: yep, something like that . hehe.. coming soon! xoxox things will be better

Molly Schlemmer2005.04.20 - 11:30PM8: UnanimitySigned
I love how you've made me go from loathing Snape at the beginning of the chapter to feeling terrible for him at the end. The very last lines about not being like his father were heart wrenching. Please update soon!

Author's Response: thanks, molly. I had hoped to thave that effect on people b/c he will try in his own snapey way to be good to her. it'll just be a bumpy road, and they'll have to get through this bit

Wolf Moonshadow2005.04.20 - 06:42PM8: UnanimitySigned
wicked, wicked Snape, still being manipulative, but I think his growing feelings will still come back and bite him on the arse. And wicked, wicked Southern Witch for leaving us with this evil, evil cliffy!

Author's Response: teehee..sorry about that. I had to snip it there. Snape is actually getting a bit better as time goes by. lol... we'll see another change in the next chapter :)

Mystic2005.04.20 - 04:55PM8: UnanimitySigned
I like Severus, but I found myself wanting to hit him on his head for some of the stunts that he has pulled. I still can't belive that he BLACKMAILED her into marriage, and yet she feels guilty. *sigh* Can hardly wait to see what you got planned out.

Author's Response: at times, i too want to smack him. he'll get better though. :) more up soon

WickedlyWanton2005.04.20 - 04:41PM8: UnanimitySigned
Please don't let her loose the baby (or babies since there was already something that she needed to speak to him about). I think that if they were to lose the baby that Severus might become even more bipolar than he is now. I love this story, though. I think Severus is closer to canon here than anywhere else I have seen. He's evil, but isn't at the same time.

Author's Response: Thanks, Wicked. She'll still be pregnant once the smoke clears, but you're very close. I think that this will ultimately bring them closer together. I'm excited that you like the story!! more up tomorrow probably.

Enitsirhc2005.04.20 - 03:41PM4: Reprisal!Signed
Well, here I am again. I already know you lengthened this story, so I will just say for future questions you may have; I don't care how you split up your stories just keep writing!! I love reading what you create. I don't care if it is short or long, and I rarely say that about anything! In your case, size doesn't matter. I will say I like a nice long one I can take my time with ...like ‘The Succubus’. Yes, I like to be naughty too. Love everything! Thanks!

Author's Response: Teehee... I guess I should go back and change those old author's notes, huh? lol.. I still need to email that mini vid to you. gonna do that in a few. I'm messing with the epilogue of the Succubus right now. I'm really glad that you like everything. More up for this one probably tomorrow. Luring the Enchantress (chapter 2) will be up tonight as well.

Sniv2005.04.20 - 01:39PM8: UnanimitySigned
He had to hold back a smirk as an uncertain look passed over her face. It was quickly replaced by one of hope, and then it moved into one of mistrust. I really like this one it really shows how their relationship is; full of hope and mistrust and...gah so many things... I'll definitely check your other story out ;) Great you updated...I kinda have hope for Snape now but well...I'm affraid it won't be that way...

Author's Response: Thanks, doll. Glad you liked that bit. Just seems more realistic to have all different emotions flying about during something like this. There is hope for our man yet :) I am a sucker for happy endings, you know cheers!

Satoni2005.04.20 - 06:30AM8: UnanimitySigned
sad chappy this...I was already tired when I read it this morning, and it would have ruined my entire day if I didn't have friends around who cheered me up. really. I do like the chapter....but sad endings....the news she wanted to tell him.... is it twins or is there something wrong and will she wont have the baby? and she tells him nothins is wrong because he doesn't want the child... I don't know. TELL ME !!! His slytherin way of handling things pissed me of bigtime. He even got her parents to support him instead of her and then the pathetic wedding?what was he thinking! Harry did a good job for hitting snape, it helped them....No I do like this chapter...although it has a bad ending. I'm sure you will make that up in the next one(that you will post today :) ) And I really love it that you keep Snape in character. good job! cheers !

Author's Response: It was a bit sad, but I think they really made some progress. We're going to learn more about why he truly left that prostitute woman as quickly as he did. And, at least he's questioning his feelings for her now. More up for this chapter probably tomorrow. I'm updating Luring and The Succubus today. Cheers xoxo

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