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| Horserider | 2005.04.18 - 11:19PM | 8: Unanimity | Signed |
| Well! For a very rare instance, I am actually pulling for Harry, and let me tell you how hard that is to get me to do! But then, you write an uncommonly Bastard!Snape in this one, so it's fitting. I hope they can come around to their senses, both of them, and be happy despite all that has gone before. ~HR Author's Response: doesn't happen often where we pull for harry, does it? lol he'll lighten up though, and i'm a sucker for a happy ending :) | |||
| Bellamar | 2005.04.18 - 11:12PM | 8: Unanimity | Signed |
| Oh, this was so wonderful and well worth the wait. I’m on pins and needles waiting to see what will happen next (Evil cliffie). On another note, I don’t think Severus appeared to be too soft. He just seemed really stubborn to me, which is completely in character for him as well as any man. I think he loves her and yet he doesn’t realize it or at least he is falling in love with her. I guess we will just have to wait and see what happens next with these new developments. Cheers and applause to you that rival the Braves stadium. Author's Response: glad you liked it. yep, is a bit of a cliffie, but i had no choice lol... he'll lighten up a bit though, and the next chapter will bring about changes in each :) more up soon! Cheers! | |||
| Lana Manckir | 2005.04.18 - 10:56PM | 8: Unanimity | Signed |
| You were afraid Severus had gone softer? OMG he could be the next Dark Lord and you wonder if he's too soft? LOL She was a fool to accept marrying him and he has to do something about his father's voice in his head. I'm sure the last bit will change things, I know it would be too hopeful of me to believe he is going to start behaving like a decent person, because I'm sure you won't let that happen. Bad author! ;-) Please update soon, I really loved this chapter, very emotional. Your other story sounds good, I'll get to it as soon as I can. Author's Response: lololol..... poor lana! haha! for the record, his father's voice will be gone for good in the next bit. He'll start being better. he did promise to be faithful ;-) that's a start. the next bit though is really emotional for the two :( | |||
| Layla | 2005.04.18 - 10:54PM | 8: Unanimity | Signed |
| I have to admit I don't like this Severus at all (I like you other Severus's much better).
The minute things go wrong with Hermione he heads for another woman. How will she live like that?
I can't believe I'm saying this but I think she would have ben better off with Harry! Author's Response: if it makes you feel better, he'll not go to another woman again :) things happen in the next chapter that will bring them closer :) | |||
| looneyluna | 2005.04.18 - 10:39PM | 8: Unanimity | Signed |
| Gah! *Crawls across floor like person dying in desert for glass of water* Must have update soon...Pretty please. I so love this story. And Severus is not weak, just confused, which I prefer my men to be (smirk). I could go either way with this, ie. baby/no baby. What ever you decide, I'll read it and love it anyways (wink). Now I have to do the impossible and try to get some sleep. Author's Response: lol. love your name by the way! i'll have more up soon. he is very confused :) thanks so much cheers!! | |||
| TNgirl | 2005.04.18 - 10:39PM | 8: Unanimity | Signed |
| I hope she doesn't lose it! Especially when Severus is just realizing he does really care!! Hurry up and update!! Author's Response: it would be sad for that to happen huh? things will work out for the best though. more up soon xoxo | |||
| FeyinBetween | 2005.04.18 - 10:39PM | 8: Unanimity | Signed |
| I love your writing. I really do. It's raw and emotional, which is a difference from many of the stories around here, and it has its own special charm. But I do have a bit of a problem with the erratic swing of Hermione's moods. I was so happy when she stood up for herself in the first half of this chapter, and hurt him the only way she could. When he returns, she's still angry, and softens when she sees his bruise (I DID enjoy the punching bit, thank you very much) and that makes sense. When I think about it logically, I guess I can see why her anger dissipated from there on and she followed him to bed. But... I guess I was rooting purely for her. As for Severus... usually I cheer for him unconditionally, but you REALLY made him out to be an asshole in this story. You said that you did, and it's definitely a change keeping him a jerk. Though it does confuse me whether I should hope for a happy ending or not... I like the emotion in this story, but man, it really makes me confused how I'm supposed to feel (my problem, not yours) Author's Response: lol i know what you mean. he is a jerk here, but he'll get better. there will be a happy ending. the changes will be slow and easy. maybe her hormones are messing with her, but she does have mood swings, I suppose. I'm thinking she's confused. she loves him, she hates him, yet really loves him. lol... circle goes on and on. more up soon. maybe things will take on a new look in the next chapter | |||
| joots | 2005.04.18 - 10:33PM | 8: Unanimity | Signed |
| i did enjoy harry and severus fighting, however i'm not for harry and hermione being together. i don't think you made snape too soft, i liked it. can't wait for more! Author's Response: good deal! thanks so much! i think he's all right so far | |||
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