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| QIK | 2006.02.14 - 02:09AM | 5: Concurrence! | Signed |
| Holy crap, he is making me furious.
The whole story makes me furious. Don't get me wrong, it's great but I just want to grab Severus and beat the shit out of him until he realizes his arsehole of a father knew nothing of life.
It's making me crazy and I will probably dwell the whole day on it until I'm able to read on after uni tonight.
I suppose I can't say that there are many fanfictions out there that affected me that much, so yours really is a good one.
Patrick
*stalks off in search of somebody to take his Sev-directed ire on*
Author's Response: I know what you mean. The type of person I am right now would never put up with an asshole like this. I hope you made your class all right. | |||
| Silver Angel | 2006.01.30 - 12:54AM | 15: Full Circle | Signed |
| This story is absolutely terrific. I just finished reading it all, and can say that it was a completely pleasure to do so. I loved the characterisations and how Snape spent the entire story fighting falling in love, it was wonderfully done. Thank you for writing this :-) Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm happy you enjoyed. Most people are drawn in by the funny first chapter, but then they are a bit put off by the serious turn it takes. I appreciate the read! | |||
| skintwo | 2006.01.24 - 06:04PM | 15: Full Circle | Signed |
| What a fantastic, fun story! I am really coming to like your writing, and I'm so happy you ended up making this story more complete than just a few chapters. What started out as a fun goofy idea turned into something much more meaningful and complex, and I really enjoyed it.
I must also add that it's a complete RELIEF to finally read a story with, as far as I can tell, just about no grammar/spelling/punct errors. I'm getting tired of being distracted by them in other stories, and so.. bravo to both you and your betas :) | |||
| Joyce | 2006.01.17 - 06:55PM | 1: Muahahhahaha! | Signed |
| It was fun to write??? It was bloody brilliant to read!!!!! Long live Slytherin!!!! Author's Response: thank you! I'm happy you've enjoyed it! | |||
| amra | 2006.01.03 - 03:30PM | 15: Full Circle | Signed |
| Interesting interaction between Snape and his mother's portrait... it does make sense that some of the things that bother him the most, the portrait isn't aware of... At least she gave him good advice about Hermione and his child, as well as interaction with her family...
Beautiful interaction between Severus and Hermione... his declaration of love was perfect...
Perfect Epilogue!!!
Thanks so much for such a wonderfully written, sensitive, well thought out story!!! Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for all your comments. I do appreciate them and really enjoy when people "get" what I'm trying to write or feel a connection to the tale. | |||
| amra | 2006.01.03 - 03:24PM | 14: Progression | Signed |
| Nice chapter... Severus's sensitivity to Hermione's desires... I loved their entire day's outing, from Hermione's jealousy to their lunch at Harry's and that Harry is dating the doctor, not to mention the last scene with Harry, Ron, and Snape... Right down to the surprise when they returned, her own place in his lab...
I wonder what happens when he speak with his mother's portrait and whether Hermione will be able to deal with some of the horrific things in the pensieve...
I wonder if the older wizard who spoke to Hermione when she was out with Minerva was Snape's Grandfather??? Author's Response: Yep, his grandfather. :) She doesn't like what she sees in the Pensieve, but I think it helps her to understand him so much more. | |||
| amra | 2006.01.03 - 03:18PM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| Beautiful intro scene... It's wonderful that Severus is continuing to open up to her, even in these relevations he is admitting about his father...
At least he is realizing what being strong truly means and that he desparately wants things to be different for Hermione... it bring hope and the realization that family cycles can be broken!!
Interesting interaction between Hermione, Harry, and Ron... At last Ron steps up to the plate showing some sense and sensitivity!!
Finally, no more games between Hermione and Snape... hopefully!! Author's Response: Yes, the realization of strength was one of my major "changes" I'd had planned for him. :) | |||
| amra | 2006.01.03 - 03:11PM | 12: Verisimilitude | Signed |
| Wonderfully written chapter... beginning with showing more of the developing relationship between our Severus and Hermione and then such a telling tale regarding Severus's heritage... WOW... what a complete world you have conceived... another entire story in the middle of this one (albeit summarized... thankfully, as it is a sad one...)
What a time of introspection for Severus, thankfully he is resolving to make Hermione's life much different from his mother's...
I loved Snape's mother and the conversation with Hermione...
Thankfully, Hermione is trying to respect Severus's privacy and need for personal space...
What revelations...
Beautiful ending... the beginnning of true enlightenment for Severus!!!
Thanks!
Author's Response: Hermione is trying to be good about what Snape wants, and I think the revelations will bring about changes in him and realizations. :) thnx! | |||
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