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Reviews for Vengeance is Sweet!

June W2005.03.29 - 11:16PM5: Concurrence!Signed
Uh-oh, looks like she is pregnant.... I just wish all those voices would go away - his father, HARRY, Minerva, HARRY. Her plan was going well until they interfered. She's strong and smart, and I think (hope) she realizes he doesn't want to be a weak Arthur Weasley to her Molly - I also doubt Hermione wants to be Molly. Now this story is labeled Romance, so I'm expected you to pull a miracle here and get him to stop running in fear from commitment and marriage! [PS - it still makes me grin when he "opens" her knickers....talk about her belonging to him!]

Author's Response: it does look that way, doesn't it? voices = ruddy... lol uhhuh (nosy minerva/harry). hehe..those knickers were your idea eh? lol good thinking. there will be some slooow romance here, no worries :)

Purificatus2005.03.29 - 11:16PM5: Concurrence!Signed
Oh, dear Lord she's pregnant! And he's hardly even up to spending the whole night with her--Aaggh, he'd *better* shape up! For Merlin's sake, skewer the little voice, already! Or julienne it like a Flobberworm, I don't care. Little voice bad. Needs. to. die! (And, yes, I hear my mother's voice "hawking" me to do things, too! <*Grin*> A common affliction among young women, I'd imagine. You know, the Little Voice that says things like "No reading fanfic 'til you're done your paper..." that sort of thing!) More soon please--Oh, and *KILL THAT #$%^$%^& LITTLE VOICE!* It is nothing but badness! Too much bitterness in either character will drive readers away from even the best story, you know. It's all about balance. Regards, --Purificatus

Author's Response: isn't this horrible? the voice will be told off at some point lol things won't always be so bitter :) more up soon hehe

SylvaniaSnape2005.03.29 - 11:13PM5: Concurrence!Signed
oh please tell now that she is getting her own back that she going to end up with child...

Author's Response: we shall see. that is the direction i am headed for now

LariLee2005.03.29 - 10:54PM5: Concurrence!Signed
Another engrossing chapter! It's a shame he's not able to cast out his father's voice, but that can be hard to do. I just wonder why Hermione is sick. :-)


Author's Response: i know! his ruddy dad's voice (or so he calls it) interferes with everything! lol... more up sooon

deianaera2005.03.29 - 10:53PM5: Concurrence!Signed
Oh, please, oh, please, oh, please, don't knock Hermione up. I've enjoyed this story so far, but throwing a baby into the mix as the key to "happily ever after" is enough to turn me off this story. If you feel you have to do it, make it something original, please. I'm begging you.

Author's Response: happily ever after because of a baby? not here. but, yes, i am going in the baby direction (key to more angst if anything else). he will not be happy.

Fictionlover_322005.03.29 - 10:50PM5: Concurrence!Signed
I think Snape is in D-E-N-I-A-L. Pat of hime loves her, and the other part is preventing him from doing so because it will make him weak. So, instead of facing his feelings, he's going to end it! To save his ego! At this point, he doesn't care about anyone but himself. Does he think his reputation is more important than Hermione or her well-being? By the looks of it, Hermione may be pregnant. If he plans to leave her when she's in that condition, not only he'll break her heart, but she may not forgive him at all. He's not treating her better at all. He's a scum, that's what he is! Using Hermione whenever he wants, regardless of how she feels about him, planning to leave her when she needs him the most! I hate him! I want to see him punished! He deserves it! Whew!(Feeling better now) Update soon! Cheers!

Author's Response: he is! lol.. two sides warring with each other lol he sees things differently than we do, i suppose, but he will get better.. some things will happen in the next chapter. soon :)

Meredith2005.03.29 - 10:32PM5: Concurrence!Signed
You are great, chickie!! I love this chapter. Yes, she is doing better for herself, but they still have a ways to go, don't they? And besides, he IS Snape, after all. Hmmm . . . mystery illness . . . HAHAHAHAHA!!

Author's Response: ::giggle:: I wonder...lolol... psst. I'm going to bed right now, but let's chat at some point tomorrow. cheers!! they do still have a way to go yet... i have some difficult stuff coming up soon. :(

Althea Grey2005.03.29 - 10:28PM5: Concurrence!Signed
umm, I wonder why she could be feeling so bad! hmm... I have no idea.. okay, hehe [/sarcasm] seriously, thanks for the update. boy, is Sev messed up or what? Such a weak lil boy.

Author's Response: teehee ( i wonder why) lol... glad you liked it! Sev is mucked up, huh? poor sod

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