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Reviews for Vengeance is Sweet!

Sassara2005.06.11 - 07:00AM13: SerendipitySigned
Excellent job! I'd like to see you write about his family and the complete recovery...I don't want to see it end either. ;-) Of course, I'm a sucker for all that mushy stuff. I love my angst, but I've got to have my mush to balance it out. Sassara

Author's Response: thanks! I'm going to add some more. lol i like the mushy bits as well. cheers!

Satoni2005.06.11 - 06:53AM13: SerendipitySigned
Hi! It would indeed be a good ending...More is always welcome of course, but there's always a chance that it will make it a bit longwinded. Most of the problems solved but still holding a bit of mystery, the more I think about it, the more it seems to be a perfect ending. I won't force u to write on or to stop here (I don't think no one should have that power) Just know that if you do update, I will read and review. And I even dare say that I will like it whatsoever, As you've still failed to dissapoint me with anything you've written thusfar.As U probably noticed I signed in on Potter_place :) I really hope all those personal thingies are all solved and won't bother you anylonger. anyway. I'm really glad it's over 'the past is in the past' and I hope you will give us the honour of reading the next chapter of luring soon...and off course an epilogue on this one. (i would really like to know the gender.... :p) Cheers, Snibbles

Author's Response: things are going well. luring is now up finally. lol. i think i'll add some more in though. i've some other things that i should include. thanks for the advice. cheers

mermaids child2005.06.11 - 05:37AM13: SerendipitySigned
Barb No please dont end things here

Author's Response: I'm going to move on with it. thanks for following it and the opinion. cheers

just me2005.06.11 - 05:19AM13: SerendipitySigned
It´s my humble opinion that you should NOT end this story here, because there are still so many things to say about their future life together. But... you are the author, and you decide whether to stop or to go on. I can only hope there will be more...

Author's Response: I'm thinking it needs a little more as well. Thanks for the opinion. I'm going to go ahead and work out something so that we won't have loose ends. more up soon

semperputus2005.06.11 - 04:03AM13: SerendipitySigned
I loved this chapter and I can see why you ended there, I had to read the lline four times because I couldn't belive what Severus said and then Hermione missed it I thought I was seeing things. And then the way you worked it in was brilliant. I loved the Harry Ron scene so nice to Have a good kind Ron Thanks for that. I loved the ending when she realised in the bath so sweet and the conversation very Severus. I am so glad you continued this. It has been delightful to read, I loved the story of his parents so sad and Severus has learnt so much. I think a short Epilogue would be good but I am biased I always crave more,

Author's Response: lol.. she was a bit deaf about it....that silly woman! I figured it was time for a grown up Ron hehe I'm likely not going to end it here. Most people like that it ends, yet not really b/c of the loose ends. Thanks fore the opinion and following. cheers

Cleo_cat2005.06.11 - 03:17AM13: SerendipitySigned
Excellent story. Perhaps you could consider a sequal rather than more chapters to this one? It would be interesting to see how Snape deals with his mum's family and how they deal with him. Plus I'm a bit of a softie for kiddies, so would like to read about the baby and Severus as a dad! :-) But whatever you decide; well done and thank you for this story - I've really enjoyed it! Cleo

Author's Response: I think i'm going to go on with it for atleast a couple more chapters. I like stories with little ones eventually as well. i'll have something up soon. cheers and i'm glad you are following along.

JTBJAB2005.06.11 - 02:29AM13: SerendipitySigned
It is a nice ending there.....i suppose you could do a sequel to tie up lose ends....that way you wouldn't have to rush the "next chapter"....but it would be cool if you just continued it....

Author's Response: lol...i think i'll go on with it. it's a lovely ending, but I would hate to leave anyone hanging. I don't really want to do a sequel. I might as well finish it up here. thanks so much! more up soon

mugglegirl09082005.06.11 - 02:15AM13: SerendipitySigned
*Sigh* As much as it pains me to admit this, this is a really nice way to end. But I'm feeling very petulant about it because I don't want it to end. *grumbles*

It was truly a wonderful chapter and an epilogue could tie up some of the lose ends. I still vote for taking it through the baby's birth, though. Even though it is a lovely ending I still would love to meet Severus' mum's family and their little one. But, if you aren't up to writing more of this, then perhaps you could leave it as is and then write a short sequel later or something. I don't know, just a thought. Whatever you do I'm behind you, but I would love to see a few more chapters. But that's just me being curious and selfish. ;-)

Hey, HE SAID IT! Not directly, but close enough! Woo-hoo! That made me really happy! :-)

P.S. I finally got chapter three back from Michele. I should be sending it to you later tonight after I make all of the corrections. Cheers!

Author's Response: i know what you mean. i'm gonna tie up the loose ends either way--continuing or a couple of epilogues. woohooo.... he did say it!

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