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| mel | 2005.06.11 - 12:16AM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| Please keep going! I would like to see it through the complete recovery period.
I still need to hear more of Severus thoughts on his child before I can believe he would be a loving father and husband. It's to open ended and sad. There is this huge open wound that hasn’t been taken care of and leaving it here leads me to think it will never be closed, fixed, or our couple will never have true happiness.
Sorry to read things are bad, take a break from the story if need be, just don’t end it here. I’ll happily do a fan-pic for you if it’ll help!! Keep your chin up and thanks for the wonderful story.
Melanie (usagistu)
Author's Response: I have a plan that will take them through the recovery period. Very understandable that you would wonder how he feels about his little one. Things are looking up a little for me, thank goodness, and I do that had a lot with me wanting to end the story. :) I'll have more up soon. Cheers | |||
| snapes_witch | 2005.06.11 - 12:10AM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| It feels like a perfect ending to me, but I wouldn't object to an epilog or even a sequel! Author's Response: lol ty dear. i think it ends well also. I'll definitely do an epilogue (or two) | |||
| squib612 | 2005.06.11 - 12:10AM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| I understand wanting to leave the story here, but I think it is a great story with much more to be explored. So my vote is to continue the story!! Author's Response: it might just be the mood i'm in. lol... thanks for the vote. I'll decide something soon. Also, I'm glad that you liked the story. :) | |||
| avery | 2005.06.10 - 11:46PM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| One of the most difficult tasks of a artist is to determine when a work is done. Unfortunately, only the artist can determine that, no matter what the critics say when it's presented.
This story is good, and it's been improving steadily. If you end it, well done, if not, I'll happily keep reading. One tip, though: if you are in doubt about continuing because of a mood, take time off before deciding either way. Distance can change a perspective radically. Take care. Author's Response: You are so right. I didnt think about it that way. I'm always so worried about displeasing someone. I'm gonna take a few days to a week off before I decide on what to do. I do have some ideas on how to get more out of it without carrying it on too much. Thanks for the support. cheers | |||
| deejay | 2005.06.10 - 11:44PM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| This could end here, but it has a vaguely unfinished feel. It could use, at the very least, an epilogue that just summarizes their future together. Otherwise, it may need only a couple of regular chapters. It is too good a story to just end it here.
Author's Response: I suppose some of those ends needed to be tied up. I have a plan for the ending. Perhaps I'll go with it. I'm gonna take a few days to think things over. I don't want my RL to influence things. Cheers. xoxo | |||
| Katherine Rose | 2005.06.10 - 11:43PM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| Normally I'm the one screaming for an epilogue and whatnot, but I agree with you, it's just right somehow.
Very moving. Author's Response: thanks so much. i think it's lovely as well. i've been thinking on it, and i'm thinking of an epilogue for sure. cheers! glad you liked | |||
| queenp | 2005.06.10 - 11:29PM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| OK, here goes...chapter, as always, was excellent...I understand your reasoning to end the story here. He all but said "I love you" to her. Great way to end the story. However, that being said, you have us emotionally invested in this story. It would be great to see things through to the end. In order to accomodate both wishes, how about a sequel? This ends here. The next picks up in a month when she next needs to visit Poppy and continues from there. Severus gets time to adjust to his emotional upheaval, Hermione gets to enjoy that he actually loves her, and then we get into somemore of the heavy stuff. I think that could work as an excellent compromise between the two...*grin* if not that, then an epilogue to let us know that Hermione made it through childbirth OK... Author's Response: hiya! I know... I hate to just cut you all off, I suppose I should further it. I'd rather continue it than do a sequel. I'm thinking a couple of epilogues wouldn't be amiss..hehe... i've seen that done before. ahahaha | |||
| GinnyW | 2005.06.10 - 11:24PM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| Wonderful chapter, as always, my dear! I think it ends nicely, truly truly. Although I would LOVE to see an epilogue for this story!!! *hint, hint* That bit about his dad...ICK! LOL! I think that the story did what it was supposed to do, it brought both of the characters full circle...it did it's job. Very nice! ~Ginny Author's Response: thanks, doll. glad you liked it. i'll post a little something more. dad was a yucko, huh? blah.... more up soon. | |||
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