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| Gardengrrl13 | 2005.06.12 - 01:59AM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| Southern, I enjoy your writing... That being said-- whether you decide to stop now, or continue, I assure you, the story is and will be wonderful. I agree, this is a good place to stop, maybe add an epilogue, but you are such a joy to read that if you continue this story, know I will be reading every chapter. *big smile* Great job on characterization and storytelling. GG Author's Response: Thanks, doll. I'm glad you like my stories. I'm gonna go on and add a few more chapters here. There are some ends that I could tie up. No point in not carrying on just a bit. :) cheers! | |||
| spaz141 | 2005.06.12 - 01:57AM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| As I came to the end (which is beautiful by the way) my brain did say...ooooooh noooo, she's going to end it here. Its your story love, your choice. Me, I'll read more if you write more. Like I said last chapter, this story is so much more than it started off as. It has been a real trip. The whole development of Severus' father, a scary brilliant and gross portrayal. If not continue, perhaps a sequel? Thanks for writing. Author's Response: I'm thinking that I can add a few more chapters to tie up the loose ends anyway. Isn't it something how much it grew? I'm quite proud of it. Thanks for following through with it. I'll have more up at the beginning of the week. Cheers! | |||
| Vickie211 | 2005.06.11 - 10:54PM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| Yes, this is a satisfying place to stop. An epilogue would be nice, but is not necessary. I think if you try to go into detail about all those loose ends, the story might get away from you and grow by leaps and bounds. I love your writing so much that this would be fine with me, but I wouldn't want you to start resenting the story for taking over. Well, I didn't mean to go on so long about it. In case you don't write an epilogue, I wanted to let you know what a fantastic story I think this is. It's certainly been quite heart-rending in places, but it’s been one of those fics that you “just can’t put down”. As with your other stories, thanks so much for sharing it. Author's Response: I'm going to add just a few more, I think. There could be a few things I could touch upon. I think I was just a bit down the last chapter, and it reflected in my words and feelings. Things are better now though. I really appreciate the feedback. Cheers!! | |||
| Nightbird | 2005.06.11 - 09:50PM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| I did notice the shift in tone, and I like this a lot. Hermione and Severus have grown a lot closer, getting past the childish pranks that got them together and finding a true, deep relationship that they share.
this could be the end, you're right - it fits so nicely. but if you wanted to keep going, I wouldn't be upset about that either! :) Author's Response: I like the way they are getting closer and really loving each other, even though he doesn't voice it. I like the way it could end, but i'm going to go ahead with it for a bit. Cheers!! | |||
| Slytherin Queen | 2005.06.11 - 07:04PM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| Sweet! Author's Response: Dude! (hehe.. sorry..couldn't resist..that's from a movie. each time one guy said sweet, the other said dude) teehee... ty | |||
| jlbwmb01 | 2005.06.11 - 06:17PM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| I have enjoyed this story and if fact like some of your other work. Please do as you feel right about this story, you are the writer after all! Either way I am sure I will be reading some of your other work soon. Thanks!
Author's Response: Well, thanks. i'm glad you liked it! I would like to stop, but I think I do need to tie up a few things. I'll maybe just add in a couple of epilogues..hehe | |||
| tubbles14 | 2005.06.11 - 04:27PM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| Don't stop now!!! Stop after the baby's born!
Excellent story by the way.
Author's Response: thanks. i'm gonna go ahead and move forward with it. | |||
| Sniv | 2005.06.11 - 04:11PM | 13: Serendipity | Signed |
| Can’t wait to tell him that you knew all along that it was only a matter of time before you could entice your former Potions master to fall in love with you? I can't believe Hermione took that long before -well realising what Snape had just said! I almost screamed when she didn't react on it - mind you not comment on it or anything but just well....reflect. But that's what makes you good because you make her realise it later which makes it even stronger! About ending the story - I can see what you mean about this would be a good place to stop. And yes I would actually agree with you even though that would mean no more goody story. Then again one can never get enough...It's really up to you. You are the author and I am 'only' a humble reader! *wink* ...well humble may not be the right word to use but ..lol
Author's Response: I thought about having her say something right then, but then i decided that a realization later on would work. hehe I will have more up soon. I really want to end it b/c of the way it came out, but I really want to tie up some loose ends. I'll have more up soon. cheers | |||
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