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| Sassara | 2005.03.24 - 11:53AM | 4: Reprisal! | Signed |
| Hummm...what a decision. I can't decide! I really love this story. Severus is such a snarky bastard (which I love), but can Hermione stand another rollercoaster. Arrrgghhh, to heck with it, I say keep on writing. I'm especially intrigued to find out what other twists you throw at this story. Continue on please! Author's Response: Thanks! I will continue it for a while. I have a few things planned. I want to develop Hermione a bit more and let her find herself again. More up soon! Cheers! | |||
| Inspire | 2005.03.24 - 11:28AM | 4: Reprisal! | Signed |
| Hmmm... a few chapters more or a whole new story? Decisions, decisions... Who am I kidding? Of course I'd like for you to save the idea for another story as long as you're willing to wrap this one up nicely for us as well as give us another fun read. :) Author's Response: decisions..decisons.... it's hard to decide. the response has been divided so far. I would need to make the next bit go along with this one, so I'm unsure if i truly should sequel it or tag it on. it wouldn't make things much longer (chapter-wise). Never fear! i'll always be sure to have happy endings :) | |||
| Sooz | 2005.03.24 - 09:30AM | 4: Reprisal! | Signed |
| I will start this review off by saying that I hope you feel better. That is most important. Now, as far as this chapter goes, I have to tell you that I thought Severus was a total dickhead for 80% of it. LOL. I was nearly yelling at my computer. You really kept him in your characterization of him! Hermione's epiphany about what Severus is lacking was such a great turning point and not forced at all. I love how this just winds around...just like real life and a real relationship. I am so glad what started as a fun story has become something longer.
Author's Response: I do feel better, thanks! Severus is a jerk, isn't he? LOL about the yelling at the pc. I've been guilty of that myself at times. I really liked that Hermione had that epiphany. It truly was the turning point! I am trying to keep their relationship more real (not fairytale). More up soon and thanks! :) | |||
| just me | 2005.03.24 - 08:02AM | 4: Reprisal! | Signed |
| I think there is a lot more to write about this couple :-), please lengthen it as long as you can! Author's Response: thanks! glad you are interested in it! more up soon | |||
| semperputus | 2005.03.24 - 07:04AM | 4: Reprisal! | Signed |
| OK I like the twist and turns Snape wants her he feels content with her and in his own way appriciates her is it too far froim that Love developes??? I think Hermione should break down his reserves and he will realise that he can not do without him . Snape mnight argue with himself that it isn't Love just a need that Hermione can fill. But I think The Hermione you have written will take severus any way she can take him and maybe people interfering will had negative reactions at first but Snape strikes me as a person who thinks about everything anyone says far too much so He might reject it at first but it will niggle away at his mind untill he can resolve it Author's Response: He will eventually realize that he loves her, yes. I'm not sure how long really, as I've decided to expand this some. I think with just a few more obstacles things will change for them. More up soon, and thanks! cheers, doll | |||
| Imhilien | 2005.03.24 - 04:22AM | 4: Reprisal! | Signed |
| Another good chapter - I'm sorry to hear you have been ill... Author's Response: thanks! more up soon. i feel much better | |||
| ook | 2005.03.24 - 03:50AM | 4: Reprisal! | Signed |
| Do it as a new story. I find tag-on plots detract from an originally good idea Author's Response: i like new stories as well. everyone seems mixed as to what way to go. more up soon | |||
| Mouse | 2005.03.24 - 02:18AM | 4: Reprisal! | Signed |
| Ok first things frist. I love Succubus, and will hate to see it end. If you can continue then do so. I would be thrilled. :D The story is in no way lacking, nor is it loosing focus. It is still cliping a long at a goodly pace and I love it. I guess the real question is are you tired of it?
Now Vengeance. Wow what a chapter that was. At first I couldn't believe that she would let him walk all over her again. But after what happened later on in bed, with him telling her to sit with him, showed that he is changing he hust doesn't realize it. One thing I have always wondered was what it takes for men like that to realize they need their woman and would be lost with out her? Death, illness? Love the story and your Snape, even if i do want to box his ears. lol
I'm glad you feel better. Hurry back. (((southern))) Author's Response: oh thanks, doll. i was meaning to expand this one. the succubus is cruising along as usual. hahahaha.... i'm glad you liked that chapter (sort of), but was able to see the slight shift in snape. more up soon dearest! cheers | |||
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