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Reviews for Vengeance is Sweet!

DawnEB2005.03.18 - 06:10AM3: Retribution!Signed
I think Severus was just right - a tad more than plain snarkiness, but not so nasty Hermione would immediately wipe her hands of him. He's finding it difficult to admit to any positive feelings he has towards her, which just seems so in character to me. As for Hermione, I was worried she wasn't showing enough spirit, but then she showed enough to everyone else, and she always was one to get caught up in lost causes :). I'd like them to be together at the end, but please don't make Snape go fluffy. Oooh, I am so enjoying this story - more soon, please

Author's Response: exactly. each time she would have a doubt, she would see a small part of him that kept her with him. snape won't be fluffy! thanks so much.. more up soon

nighthawk2005.03.18 - 05:22AM3: Retribution!Signed
Every author creates his/her "own little Severus" and I think you kept yours wonderfully in character. It would be unrealistic if he would be suddenly turned into a romantic hero. It is good that Hermione stood up to him, it would have destroyed her otherwise. If he really wants her back, I think some public grovelling would be the perfect penance. There is nothing like a good debasement to get his inflated ego back to reality.

Author's Response: lol good thinking. i do think that severus should take a while before turning into mr romance. hehe more up soon

Thorn2005.03.18 - 04:31AM3: Retribution!Signed
I am so glad you continued on with this litttle ficlet! Severus is such an ass but thats how a lot of men are. Hermione is getting the reality that playing by his rules won't get her what she wants. She might wear him down eventually, but that can be emotionally draining. Most women don't end these types of relationships if the sex is really good and Hermione is very determined. My money is on the Gryffindor!

Author's Response: its a shame that a good bit of men act this way, huh? hermione will have a great epiphany soon, as will Severus. more up as soon as i can

Betz2005.03.18 - 04:06AM3: Retribution!Signed
Your version of Severus in this chapter is so utterly canon, it's scary. This is pure canon Snape. He will not appear weak, he will not allow Hermione to declare her love to him or he will end it, he will use her to his pleasure till he's done with her. Very, very canon. If there was a contest for canon Snape, I think this would be a very strong contender for first place. You totally blew me away with this chapter. Hermione's heartbreak of continuing to be with him, though she knew from the beginning she could never have his heart was absolutely heart-breaking (and scarily acurate - as I had a boyfriend just like that once). And now that everything has disintegrated and Snape no longer has his fuck-buddy, it's interesting to see that he realizes he does care for her...but of course, he'll never admit it openly to her. Severus' revenge on Ronlanda with Harry was a riot, so perfectly SLytherin of him. I just can't wait for the next installment to see how Severus is going to get Hermione back. The big question is, will he subtly win her back or will he trick her once more? Absolutely one of the most rivetting chatpers you've ewver written and really made my heart clench with empathy for Hermione. Truely fabulous.

Author's Response: i was hoping to capture a bit of canon snape here (or atleast what i thought him to be like). i'm afraid he'll never voice his 'love' for her..sigh. lol i loved what he did to ro n harry hehehhee more up soon and then we'll see what he has up his sleeve :)

Sabrina2005.03.18 - 03:13AM3: Retribution!Signed
I hope Severus and Hermione get back together.

Author's Response: they will. :) Cheers

Mouse2005.03.18 - 02:52AM3: Retribution!Signed
I loved the lenth. I feel bad that he was being such a dic* to her. I too am glad she stood up for herself. But how on earth are you going to fix this now?? This was a very sad chapter. My heart was breaking for her when she concidered herself his whore. :( Funny that Ro thought that sev's prank was a good joke. Ahh no one can keep that silly witch down for long eh? Great writing on this chapter my heart was breaking every time I turned around. More please. Ps there is a happy ending . . . right?

Author's Response: yep they will end up together. he was mean, wasn't he? i wonder how long she'll be able to stay away? hehe i did feel a bit sorry for hermione

deejay2005.03.18 - 02:22AM3: Retribution!Signed
This story is marked complete. Doesn't seem that way.

Author's Response: sorry. started out as a one shot and grew. i've fixed it to show incomplete. thanks

cocoachristy2005.03.18 - 02:18AM3: Retribution!Signed
Very, very good chapter but IT CANNOT END HERE!!!! please???? I am glad she stood up to him as well, he was treating her too selfishly.

Author's Response: not a chance. i have at least one more chapter in me.. hehe

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