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just me2005.04.19 - 06:00AM8: UnanimitySigned
What began as a somewhat funny story now slowly is turning to be a kind of tragedy... I don´t think your Snape is too soft, no, I´m afraid you have to soften him a bit if you planned this to be a story with a happy end. I´ve almost lost hope for them.

Author's Response: all will be well :) he's slowly changing with each chapter, and we will see a great change in the next chapter, but he'll still not be a weak! severus more up soon

Alexa Potion2005.04.19 - 05:03AM8: UnanimitySigned
This was a very good chapter, I don't think that Severys would have been too soft he's acting normally and of course he's feeling some 'soft' to Hermione. And it was funny to read Harry's and Severus' fighting scenes without they using a wand. What Poppy told to Hermione about her pregnancy? Well I have a hunch, I think that Hermione is having twins! But we'll see was Hermione's falling very bad to her, but I hope that she's okay. You really know how to keep the readers hooked!!

Author's Response: thanks. i'm glad you liked this chapter. The info about her pregnancy will be up first thing in the next chapter :) you're very close though

LariLee2005.04.19 - 02:28AM8: UnanimitySigned
I am so sorry they consummated their marriage and now Hermione is stuck with Snape. Words I thought I would never write in a review. :-) Snape is not just immature, petty and cold, he is seriously neurotic and a danger to those he is around. In other words, I can't wait for the next chapter! I have no clue to as to whether or not Poppy will save the baby, but I'm extremely worried for Hermione's safety. Not just her physical health, but her emotional health. She is like all the women on TV talk shows who put up with emotional abuse "because I love him". Get over him! Though this could be what it takes to bring Snape to his senses, though I suggest inpatient psychiatric care might be quicker in the long run. :-)
~Lisa

Author's Response: lol... odd being against snape, isn't it? hehe hermione will be ok but there is an issue or two that they will have to deal with. Snape will have another epiphany in the next chapter and things will get a bit better. lol @ psychiatric care... too funny

JTBJAB2005.04.19 - 02:14AM8: UnanimitySigned
Oh please dont kill the baby! Maybe Severus could be caught muttering how he will not be like his father when Hermione wakes up, and then she could realise why he is like the way he is....i dont know, just please dont kill the baby! Great chapter by the way and i look forward to the next update!

Author's Response: oh my! something like that does happen about the father bit! interesting that you mentioned lol... only it's not hermione that hears it more up soon. things will work out for the best :)

Maddy Riddle2005.04.19 - 01:45AM8: UnanimitySigned
Since it's unbecoming to squee in this forum I will force myself to remain calm :P
I love the chapter. And don't worry, Severus is not soft, just enough nice to unbalance Hermione's determination...
You are a bit mean, not only to the characters (as you forced them to pass for this situations *winks*) but also to us. You let me all worried about Hermione now.
I know I shouldn't ask, but... will Severus feel the need to explain to Hermione what really happened before his encounter with Potter *sneers* (sorry, I really hate the little whiny brat)?

Author's Response: **giggle** i just love when you review. too cute. And, you are too right. Every time she resolves to tell him to bugger off, something 'softens' and touches her. But, he'll make a huge step forward in the next chapter. she believes severus once he explains and is a bit miffed with harry for a change yay, huh? lol xoxoox

Amr2005.04.19 - 12:50AM8: UnanimitySigned
This marriage is truly horrific; and, frankly, I can't believe someone as intelligent and strong as Hermione would let herself get railroaded into an unconscionable marriage contract in this way. He has insulted her, injured her, threatened her, gone behind her back to her parents, and betrayed her trust. She knows him, and she knows he has misrepresented the situation to her parents, essentially lied to them; and then he proposes a contract that ensures she'll be his exclusively even if she divorces him, and insists on finalizing the marriage immediately. I don't understand how any woman could go along with this for a second when she has so many better options. And when she clearly doesn't want to consummate the marriage, he first tries to do it anyway, berates her for her lack of enthusiasm, and then goes off to a prostitute? The apotheosis that sends him back to her without getting his money's worth with the prostitute seems to me to be based more on the unattractiveness of the prostitute than any realization of feelings for Hermione. And after all that, the mere fact that Potter has hit him brings her into his arms and back to his bed so they can make amazing "love"? Hermione may think she's in love here, but I think she is seriously disturbed.

I hate unhappy endings, so I hope Hermione and her child survive, even though the misery that Snape would feel at losing them would serve him right. But he'd probably blame Harry anyway--he wouldn't learn anything from it. Perhaps the best solution would be if he only thinks he's lost them, and jumps off the Astronomy tower in a fit of selfish rage at the loss of his "property" and his convenient bed partner. Then mother and child would have his name and his respectability of marriage without having to ever again have anything to do with the cruel, violent, selfish and sadistic bastard that you've made Snape. Otherwise, I can't imagine a satisfying, non-abusive relationship ever being possible without something akin to a brain transplant; but Hermione thinks she loves him as he is now, so that probably wouldn't make her happy either.

Author's Response: i agree with what you are saying about scamming her into marriage. that was pretty low. it was the unattractiveness of the prostituet that started him thinking about her, and he had the first of many small epiphanies. At least he is now wondering if he loves her. It's a sort of defense mechanism for him. If anything makes him uncomfortable, he chalks it up to something else.

i'm a fan of happy endings, so no worries about that here. The changes are happening only gradually. I would firmly believe that any woman who is angry at her husband would pity him if he was attacked no matter who did it. It's amazing love to her because he's so tender and his body seems to generate that he loves her even though the words aren't there. that will all come up later though. more up soon xoxox

June W2005.04.19 - 12:37AM8: UnanimitySigned
Nope, Severus is not soft here. I do hope the baby survives and that he tells Hermione about his fears of becoming like his father, and that he does love her. He can offer to take Veritaserum about the prostitute. He needs to tell that voice to shut up! And she needs to quit running to Harry and Ron...

Author's Response: thanks, june. Things will work out for hermione and severus. the voice gets told to sod off for good in the next chapter :) And, I'm thinking that she might not look at harry the same way after this.

Betz2005.04.19 - 12:36AM8: UnanimitySigned
AAAAAHHHHHH!! Evil cliffie!!! How dare you! You better update quickly or I'm sending the lynch mob after you. I don't know which wedding was more heart-breaking, yours or LariLee's in For Your Pleasure. THought your wedding night turned out much better than her's the morning after, Hermione falling down the stiars is just as equally heart wrenching. This story keeps on getting more and more tragic. What next? Charactrer death? This story is just so choked with angst I'm elated to see each update, but I go away aching for the next chapter and feeling so emotionally drained by all the heart ache going on between Hermione and Severus, especially Hermione. So much sorry. You could turn your fic into an opera, it has that farce that turns into a tragedy quality about it. Hurry and post more soon.

Author's Response: teehee..silly betz! That wedding really sucked, poor hermione. I suppose he might have to make that up to her. nooo character death of developed characters here. things will be getting a bit lighter soon. severus has just had the first of several small epiphanies. more up soon xooxox

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