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| Novinha | 2005.04.05 - 04:50AM | 22: Trouble Brewing | Signed |
| Dear Pooka, I am so sad you had bad complications - what an awful thing it must have been! Actually right now my grandfather is at home, but he should be at a hospital - he would be if we had proper health care here. I am up for a rant at the doctors who told him to write he doesn't want to stay in the hospital even though he should be treated - because of the hospital being poor. Surely the doctors are poor either. Yeah, I'd like to see that. It ain't a good week. My mum has some serious stomach problems, Jan Paweł II is dead... World seems to be a bit worse today. But - your story, right? I am supposed to tell about it. So, here we go. It was a sweet chappie, Pooka. The part when Snape sees Hermione in the toilet - funny - in a sweet way. Proves my theory that the most erotic thing is not being squicked by the partner's body and all that stuff. And I liked the way you kept the balance between the PoVs in this chapter. It was somehow appropriate and matching the way the characters' personalities seem to balance one another. And - well, once you give us the smut, you do give us the smut, huh? Best wishes for my dear Pooka. I do hope you won't have any more problems. Leaves the room. Marches in, carrying a huge poster with... Get Better, Pooka!!! written on it. Greetings from Poland, Novinha, who is exceptionally glad today that she is a Pole. Sorry this is such a strange thing, a semi-review. I just wanted to wish you health, and it all escalated... ;) Author's Response: Don't you dare appologise my Polish girl! I love hearing from you! I always get a review plus a little update on how things are in Poland. I'm doing very much better and I hope the worst is behind me. I'm so sorry about your poor Granfather, it sounds like he is having a rough time indeed. It seems like health care is messed up all over, doesn't it? I was sorry as well to hear of the Pope's death, but I must say that I'm glad he didn't suffer long. Those last few days must have been very difficult for him. As far as my story goes, I'm with you about partners not being squicked about each other's bodies and stuff! I'm glad you agree! And I'm glad you liked the balance in their POV's, that's something I think I need to work on more. I let things get lopsided from time to time. *giggle* I admit I do get a little smut happy once I get folks together. To me it seems natural that once they finally get what they want, they want more! Thank you, sweetie! And I hope things at your home start looking up soon! :) | |||
| kereneluz | 2005.04.05 - 03:01AM | 22: Trouble Brewing | Signed |
| Thankyou for more delicious lemons!What went wrong in your surgery?I hope all is well now,feel better,and keep up the great writing. Author's Response: You're most welcome! They didn't get me all hooked up right, so I was leaking bile into my tissues. Apparently the body takes high offense to that. So I ended up in the hospital for 5 days hopped up on morphine and demerol, and they had to go down through my stomache and put a stint in there. I'm doing ever so much better now, but I still get easily tired out. :) | |||
| kereneluz | 2005.04.05 - 02:45AM | 21: Rhygin Grindsman | Signed |
| the lemons were great!Don't underestimate the removing of a gallbladder.I have been in the hospital for three years now because of that little simple surgery gone wrong.Good luck in any case! Author's Response: Good gods! You poor sweetie! Well that certainly puts my own trials into perspective. Thanks for the read and review! :) | |||
| sevati | 2005.04.04 - 07:31PM | 22: Trouble Brewing | Signed |
| Mmm, smutty goodness. Excellent chapter. Psh, why would he want to resist the urge to kiss Hermione? ;) Author's Response: *giggle* Well, they do have that whole "saving the world" thing to deal with! Thanks for yet another lovely review! You rock! :) | |||
| DADA_Mistress | 2005.04.04 - 12:49PM | 22: Trouble Brewing | Signed |
| Wow, another GREAT and FABULOUS chapter! Let's get busy indeed! ;) HA! I loved it, my darling Pook. I'm SO happy you are safe and sound and out of the hospital. :) Author's Response: Thank you, my sassy sweetheart! I'm glad you got a kick out of it! And I'm glad to be out of the hospital as well! :) | |||
| Winna | 2005.04.04 - 12:06PM | 22: Trouble Brewing | Signed |
| So you're out of the hospital, but we the readers wind up with the get well present: an update! Wonderfully smutty chapter, but I am looking forward to some plot advancement. Author's Response: Lol, oh, there will be more smut on the way, I'm sure. But now that I've finally got our stubborn hero and heroine together I am expecting the plot to speed right along. I'm more worried about rushing it actually, as I think we only have 3-4 more chapters to go. You'll have to tell me what you think when we get there! Thanks! :) | |||
| LariLee | 2005.04.04 - 02:10AM | 22: Trouble Brewing | Signed |
| I'm so glad you're back, PlaidPooka! And I hope you're feeling better! A deliciously hot chapter and I'm hoping her idea works. ~Lisa Author's Response: Thanks honey! I am feeling much better! *smirk* I suppose you may be right. ;) Not a very sneaky plot, is it! Thanks, Lisa, you rock! :) | |||
| queenp | 2005.04.04 - 12:54AM | 22: Trouble Brewing | Signed |
| **Whimper***Chapter was excellent. I look forward to seeing what you have next...So, what's Turpin's opinion on all the sex taking place in Severus' rooms...surely he has an opinion to voice about it....Can't wait to see how that make the potion work...Update again soon!!! Author's Response: Well, Turpin is from the weasel family, so I suppose he's all for it! *giggle* Glad you liked the chapter, and there will be more as soon as I can get it written! :) | |||
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