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Reviews for Overcome With Feeling

keller7892004.12.06 - 04:35AM10: ConfessionsSigned
Please let him kick down the door and demand a hug, that would be so cool! *g* And when are we gonna see some more of Turpin?

Author's Response: Lol, while I think that would be bloody brilliant, it would be a bit OOC even for my version of Severus! *snicker* Don't fret, I'm not done with Turpin yet! Thanks! :)

GreenEyesBlind2004.12.06 - 03:48AM10: ConfessionsSigned
More lovely, lovely pieces to the story. I especiallly like the musing on tea oddly enough. Though I must admit to being dissappointed with the lack of cuddling going on in this chapter (*pout*). Thanks so much for doing that wonderful voodoo you do and writing this. :)

Author's Response: Someday we will get back to a little cuddling, promise! I'm glad you liked the tea bit, I wasn't sure how that would go over. Thanks! :)

Gillyweed2004.12.06 - 03:33AM10: ConfessionsAnonymous
Yay!! Another update to one of my favorite stories!! I'm so happy! *does a little dance, looks around sheepishly, and then sits back down at her computer* And while I'm not a big fan of the H/D slashiness, you make it work in your story, so no complaints there! Poor Sevvie, a whole day without being "accosted," how ever will he survive!? Hehe! Love this story!! Keep up the great work Pook! ~*~Gilly~*~

Author's Response: *giggle* I'll try to get the poor man acousted soon. Glad you are likeing things so far, despite slight slashiness. ;) Thanks! :)

Sulevia2004.12.05 - 05:21PM9: The FirewalkerAnonymous
You have a great gift, Plaid. Are you a professional writer, or intending to be? I've read dozens and dozens of Hermione/Snape romances, and it's rare to find fresh characters and exciting writing--not to mention unique plots. You nail 'em. Are you teaching yourself Jamaican, or did you live there? Dick's dialogue style is masterfully done as well. The only --quite small--critique I would make is to watch your Snape, who teeters on the brink of being SO kind and apologetic and compassionate that he could easily become overcuddly/non-believable/OOC. I think a good Snape keeps a healthy dose of pure snark, and is easily bewildered and even angered by the softer emotions, both in himself and in others. To remove too much of his bitterness and self-doubt and discomfort with love is to make the man a teddy bear with too much syrup and not enough passion. He is heroic and irritating at the same time; a touch sadistic, unpredictable, a "simmering cauldron" that cooks up a bittersweet brew. Don't you think? : ) Brava! Please continue--you're addictive!

Author's Response: Lol! Professional writer? *gigglegiggle* Er...no, not at all. I started writing about 2 months ago, and the total of my writing (with the exception of a short story I'm writing for wee tots) can be found here, or on Occlumency. I am a rank amatuer, who has--by the way--never been lucky enough to have been to Jamaica. Lol, they say when one starts writing they should write what they know, so why is it I'm writing fanfic in a genre where all the characters are British and then I have the sheer audacity to throw a Jamaican into the mix? I'm obviously barking mad. As for my Snape, I knew I'd run into some disagreement about him when I began this fic. I've gone for an all-out Snape the Spy portrayal and I've done my best to make it clear that the Snape he portrays to the students and the world at large is part of his position as a spy. I'm sure that has nothing to do with JKR's image of him, though there is nothing particularly in Canon which proves this couldn't be so. In my fic, the Snape you see when he feels safe enough to be more 'himself' will differ very much from the "aren't I a nasty Death Eater" persona that he shows the world at large. So, needless to say, while my spy will still be stubborn, bitter, and perhaps not have the best social skills in the world, there will be nothing a "touch sadistic" about him. Gods know that's been done extensivly, and by writers with far more tallent than I. I feel no need to contribute to that area of the genre. Indeed, I don't think sadistic Snape would fit very well into my lighthearted fics. While I certainly don't intend to let the man turn into some belly-up pushover, he may indeed be a bit too different for your tastes. Thank you for the kind review, and I hope you stick with my little tale inspite of a more compassionate Snape. :)

Sophie2004.12.05 - 10:04AM9: The FirewalkerAnonymous
Wow, wonderful story so far! I'm really enjoying it, especially as Hermione gets to know more about the real Severus Snape! Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it so far! :)

Slyth_to_the_core2004.12.04 - 05:09PM9: The FirewalkerAnonymous
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh wonderful story. I can't wait to read more. I love all the characters you created, but Turpin is definitely my favorite, that snarky bastard.

Author's Response: *giggle* Turpin is my favorite as well. Thank you so much! :)

Lana Manckir2004.12.04 - 01:15PM9: The FirewalkerAnonymous
Another wonderful chapter! Can't wait for more, you have become one of my favorite authors, i just love your style ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you my dear! :)

bansidh2004.12.04 - 10:48AM9: The FirewalkerAnonymous
Neat OC (always makes me worry when they show up, but you of course created a wonderful one), consistent but dynamic characters, and very precise use of language--you rock! Thanks for brightening up my day with an update.

Author's Response: Thank you sweetie! I was worried about Andrene myself, I'm glad she's gone over well! :)

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