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| Rainbow | 2004.12.03 - 03:35PM | 9: The Firewalker | Anonymous |
| Someone's falling in love... great story. Can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Hmmmm...I think you may be right! *snicker* :) | |||
| WriterLady1031 | 2004.12.03 - 03:34PM | 9: The Firewalker | Anonymous |
| Woo hoo! I'm back and I loved the last two chapters! I definitely liked the scene with Sirius, Remus and Harry because it was very interesting to see their reactions, Hermione and the guys, to her break down. I also liked Severus in this as well. Now, for chapter nine, you did a great job introducing the Firewalker. What a neat character--in fact, she's kind of like my grandma, a mystical little Mayan Indian woman wearing the colorful clothing like the Firewalker. Oh and you got Turpin learning a new language! I love it! Pook, you've done it again with those last two chapters--I can't wait to read more! Author's Response: *giggle* I could not resist letting the little weasel learn a few new phrases. I'm glad you got a kick out of it! I had fun writing that scene with Hermione and the boys, I'm glad you enjoyed it as well! Thanks, honey! I really appreciate all your support! :) | |||
| Aurealis | 2004.12.03 - 03:23PM | 9: The Firewalker | Anonymous |
| Awwww. I liked this ending. What made you choose a Jamaican empath? If you need help with the Patois at all, feel free ask. Also, if I were Snape, I'd be scared to be around these two women. Knowing that they knew what he was feeling to the core... That must be terribly invasive for him. Meanwhile, I can think of a couple of thinks that Hermione could "project" to him. Snicker, snicker, snicker. Author's Response: I've always wanted to go to Jamaica, but I've never been. I know that I have no hope in hell of her written "accent" being in any way true to life, but I hope that it won't hurt the story, or offend any Jamaican readers! I swear I mean it as a compliment, and I hope I do get to go visit there someday. :) | |||
| eve/roarke | 2004.12.03 - 02:45PM | 9: The Firewalker | Anonymous |
| A very informative chapter one which I should think was very difficult to write its a bridge in a way to the next continuation of the story.
It was very well written Pooka, I really enjoyed the information and also my mans (Severus, I wish) reactions.
Understand about lives moving on all the time, but I am sure all fanfic readers
are the same so UPDATE SOON PLEASE, if not able please note:-
Blessings, Happy Christmas and a good New Year, so mote it be. Author's Response: Thank you, Eve! You're an angel! I should be able to update again in a few days. These chapters have been so slow to write. Action just writes itself; so what am I doing with a buch of characters who keep thinking and talking and never DO anything! What was I thinking! *Pook grumbles to herself* Blasted imbecils...they never shut up...Severus and Hermione are always talking, blah blah blah! I'll never get them into bed at this rate...*grumble* :D | |||
| KarySky | 2004.12.03 - 02:29PM | 4: Repose | Anonymous |
| Hello there, congratulations, I absolutely love the story.
I am about to start the fourth chapter and I think that I have a little idea of what is happening to Hermione........
Something about other people feelings.. anyway I won't say much....!
Can't wait to continue my reading!
Good job! Author's Response: You are on the right track, indeed! I'm glad you are enjoying it so far, and thanks for the review! :) | |||
| lady_shoes | 2004.12.03 - 01:34PM | 9: The Firewalker | Anonymous |
| I swear I'm addicted to this story. Seeing a new chapter posted is like getting a hit. I love Andrene's speech, I can even hear it in my head. You are wonderful, keep up the good work!! Author's Response: Yea! Glad you like the way she talks, that was a bit of a pisser to write without it getting too goofy. Especially since I'm a Hoosier who bounced around the States before landing in Kentucky. The only Jamaican I've ever heard speak is Bob Marley, who is absolutely fabulous. I love the way Jamaicans speak, so lyrical, I only hope I don't offend any actual folks from that lovely island with my clunky imitation. Thank you my dear! :) | |||
| Darque Queen7 | 2004.12.03 - 12:17PM | 9: The Firewalker | Signed |
| Plaid - another winner! I love Adrene (did I spell that right?)! She's a great character and must have been a riot to write!
Can't wait for the next chapter...
D. Author's Response: Huzzah! Glad you like her! I tried my best not to make her too MarySue!Jamaican. She's my first original non-critter character attempt. Thanks sweetie! :) | |||
| Tarah Fae | 2004.12.03 - 11:42AM | 9: The Firewalker | Anonymous |
| Wow... GREAT descriptions :o I can see the Firewalker plain as day in my noggin - she looked almost exactly like I thought she would XD Severus was so brave *hearts all over his imposing black figure* The titbit about the Dementors made me go "dun-dun-DUUUUUUN!" - was that a mention of things to come mayhaps? I for one cannot wait until Hermione splays Severus wide open and batters his feelings for her into his stubborn head! ...mmm... splayed... *wanders off* PS oh my word... XD the Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy is featuring the Toadblat episode (HP parody episode!). Hooray for Gunderstank and Weaslethorpe! Author's Response: Hmmmm....*Pook wanders about aimlessly, as she's been thouroughly distracted by visions of splayed Potions master.* Er...what? Was I saying something? Mention of things to come? Perhaps... *giggle* *Pook wanders off, giggling to herself and drooling* :) | |||
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