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| emmakitty | 2004.11.13 - 02:44PM | 4: Repose | Signed |
| Yay! This is a great story! I love it! Update soon, please! Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update as soon as I'm able. :) | |||
| etair | 2004.11.13 - 01:05PM | 4: Repose | Anonymous |
| Very original!!!
Please update soon.
I love how you are handling Severus character. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm having some fun with this Severus, glad you like it. :) | |||
| Lana Manckir | 2004.11.13 - 11:52AM | 4: Repose | Anonymous |
| Wow I love it, i'm only sad the chapter is over! I hope you update soon. This is a great story with a very refreshing theme. You are the best, can't wait for more ;-) Author's Response: Thank you very much, Lana! I'm thrilled you like it so far. Thanks for taking the time to review! :) | |||
| Jade_Orchid | 2004.11.13 - 11:22AM | 4: Repose | Anonymous |
| Oh, goodness. I figured it was something like that. Will she be able to "feel" Snape through his Occlumency, I wonder. Very sweet scene with Minerva at the end. Delicious chapter, wonderful Pooka. I'm looking forward to finding out the extent of her empathy. Author's Response: Thank you darling Jade! I'm so glad you are finding it intriguing! I loved your 'Snape quiz' by the way, and eagerly wait for an update to "Neccessity"! :) | |||
| NightQueen | 2004.11.13 - 10:51AM | 4: Repose | Anonymous |
| OMG!!! This is so fabulous!!!!!! She's an Empath no wonder she was going out of her mind. Being hit with hundreds of emotions all at once must have been more than a bit painful!!! I adore Severus, he held her for over 4 hours and I do believe he enjoyed it, no matter how he protested!!! I can't wait for more!!! Love it!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: *smirk* I believe he did as well. I think he protests too much, as they say. I'm so glad you like the new story so far, I love getting your comments! :) | |||
| Derelict Author | 2004.11.13 - 10:45AM | 4: Repose | Anonymous |
| I am liking this story so far even though the character's speech seems a bit stiff. Perhaps try and let it flow a little easier, if possible? Also, I'm hoping you speak more on "Empaths" in your next chapter. Keep up the good work! Author's Response: More on the whole Empath thing will be explained as soon as I can get my Firewalker there. There's a few chapters to go, I'm afraid, but they are rather fun. I'm sure you make an excellent point on my dialogue. I haven't done any creative writing since High School, and that was ever so long ago. I never wrote dialogue at all until I took up writing fanfiction a month-ish ago. And what do I do when I decide to try my hand at writing? I pic a genre where all the characters are British! I grew up in Indiana, and now I live in Kentucky. I'm sure you can imagine the extent of my handicap. *giggle* Now I'm on my second full length story, and while I think I have made some definate improvement, I'm sure I've still got a ways to go. Thank you for sharing what you think! I promise you I am working on it! :) | |||
| Maela | 2004.11.13 - 10:35AM | 4: Repose | Anonymous |
| Great chapter. I loved the interaction between Minerva and Severus. I'm also glad that she picked up on his feelings and gave her blessing. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon. :) Author's Response: Thank you! The bits between Severus and Minerva are some of my favorites. I'm so happy you liked them! :) | |||
| Mary | 2004.11.13 - 10:28AM | 4: Repose | Anonymous |
| Love it, love it. Such an original idea. And the apology scene between Severus and Minerva was really well done! Author's Response: Thank you, my dear. I liked how the bits between Severus and Minerva turned out. I'm glad you did as well! :) | |||
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