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| leonie | 2004.12.07 - 04:55PM | 10: Confessions | Signed |
| i've only just dicovered this (stupid me!)... it's amusing and very original... good job!!!!!! Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you discovered it! :) | |||
| amethyst | 2004.12.07 - 02:11PM | 10: Confessions | Signed |
| Great Job!!
I love how you combined two of Ron's strongest character points, his temper and his skill at strategy. If I were to offer one bit of criticism to it, the transition happened a bit too fast, but then again we all see things differently don't we. Author's Response: Lol! You know, I can't argue that point with you, it is a bit rushed, but I thought it was necessary. Ron and Harry are not the antagonists in this piece, so I didn't want to waste too much time wallowing in their reactions. We've got bigger fish to fry, and one of these days maybe we'll get there! If I don't get too awful distracted with sub-plots. Thanks for the kind review! :) | |||
| Ratchick | 2004.12.07 - 11:34AM | 10: Confessions | Signed |
| I like this story a lot.... I'm eagerly awaiting the next installments, because I'm desperate to see if all these people end up happy! Two Slyth-Gryff pairings in one fic makes me very happy. Turpin sounds like a sweetheart (albeit with the mouth of a sailor) and now I want to borrow him to keep me company. Author's Response: I want a Turpin too! I want a Turpin too! Hmm...maybe E-bay... *giggle* If you have read any of my other fics, I think you will find that I favor humor mxed with a touch of trauma followed imediately by a ridiculously happy ending. So, anyone who is expecting fiery deaths at the end of this will most likely be disapointed. Thanks for the sweet review! :) | |||
| Daywahyn | 2004.12.07 - 10:05AM | 10: Confessions | Signed |
| "I’ve lived thirty-eight years without hugs. I believe I can manage this last one as well." Sniff, sniff. I'll give him a hug!! I do so enjoy your writing and am very glad you're willing to share. Author's Response: That line made me sniff a bit myself. Why do I put my Severus through such things? I'm terribly glad you like it so far! :) | |||
| Kaylee | 2004.12.07 - 09:16AM | 10: Confessions | Signed |
| hi this is . I'm kaylee now and this is so sweet, it's adorable. Severus is thinking about hugs, or his lack of them. awww I can just picture him sitting there forelornly staring at his tea. thank you for the wonderful chapter. can't wait for the next one. you rock. bye! Author's Response: Thank you my dear! I like the new handle, by the way. I'm glad you got a kick out of my introspective Severus. :) | |||
| hellspoette | 2004.12.07 - 08:48AM | 10: Confessions | Signed |
| Gack! *dies* Ohh, maybe it's the lack of sleep talking, but this chapter just made me feel downright *giddy*! Giddy giddy giddy. I think half the fun of SS/HG fics is getting good reactions out of Harry and Ron. Loved Ron's typical first outbursts, the continuing Harry-thinking-he's-dashing thing...ahh. And the scene with Draco - LOVED it! Ok, I'm getting incoherent, it really must be the lack of sleep, but I'm just loving this to death. And yes, Snape would never ever conjure his tea, no ma'am, I even write about that in my own fic. Forty-two stars and good luck with the writing! Author's Response: Lol, I think Severus brewing tea must be getting very common in SS fanfic, since I wrote the first draft of this chapter, I think I've read about 5 fics with a tea reference. Not too surprising that the Potions master is forever making tea and cooking in fandom, I suppose! Lol! I'm so glad you like my story so far, I hope the giddiness wasn't all from lack of sleep! *giggle* Thanks! :) | |||
| SusanKinTexas | 2004.12.07 - 12:57AM | 7: Tea and Turpin | Signed |
| Oh, this is a wonderful story! You do such a wonderful job with bringing new characters in with complete personalities. I also loved how Hermione feels so safe with Severus... feeling his protectiveness, but no ugliness of jealousy or obsession... just a lovely, honest caring from him. Snape not wanting to engage her feelings with his belief that he will die before the end anyway... I also really liked how you had Hermione's overloads go... with the rocking and pulling hair and screaming - exactly like autistic children. My two kiddos had some Sensory Integration issues when they were younger and had to have therapy...and there would often be autistic children having the same therapy, just more intensive. And if they became overloaded...they would react the same way, rocking, screaming, hiding in their own world to protect themselves from too much information... wonderful job with this... I look forward to reading more... Author's Response: Actualy, my nephew used to react a bit that way. He wasn't autistic, sometimes things just seemed to be too much for him. Now he's in High School, and I'm terribly proud of him. I'm so glad you have enjoyed this so far and thank you for leaving such a kind review! :) | |||
| wolfmoonshadow | 2004.12.06 - 11:51PM | 10: Confessions | Anonymous |
| Oh, what a lovely chapter! Draco jealous of Harry looking Snape? Way too funny. Also, it is really nice to read a story with a mature Ron and Harry, instead of the Super!Prats they usually are. And Oh My… what a delicious dip into Severus’s subconscious! I think he needs a good hug. If Hermione is not available, I’d be will willing to substitute (really, it’s no problem! I could make the time! ;-) However…… I saw nothing in this actual chapter to warrant an NC17 rating, no yummy smutty NAKED TIME!!! goodness ;-> (and you know how much we are all waiting for that! So I am quite grouchy that I was tortured by seeing it up all day, but unable to log-in and read it. (And a note to Ashwinder: *stated with far to much childish glee than is befitting my significantly older than 17 age* Ha Ha I still found a way in to read!!!) Author's Response: Lol! I just love your reviews, my dear Wolf! I must say, that while Super!Prats Ron and Harry can be fun to play with, I get a bit tired of them from time to time myself. I think the good Potions master can use all the hugs he can get. I believe the queue starts around the block somewhere... I know, I know! No naughty bits yet, all in good time! I'll do my very best to make it worth the wait! Thanks hon! :) | |||
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