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| bgard | 2005.05.05 - 06:09PM | 1: One-A Day in the Life | Signed |
| I like the fact that both sides of the culture both wizard and muggle have been effected by the results of a wizard war and that the UK wasn't the only place mentioned. As others have said about the gettos you have very good images- makes me think of the movie "The Pianist" and that horrors can become common place in these type of situations. It also speaks of the human spirit that learns to adapt to adversity and still has hope to go on.--I do wonder if Malfoy reconized Hermione, or is she just another nameless body to order about and torment.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! My ghettos are very much modeled on the Jewish ghettos of WWII. As for Malfoy, I tried to go with the idea that anyone not important for his own plans is unmemorable; when he met Hermione during her school days, she was a useless Muggleborn and of no consequence. He would not hesitate to forget her face, if not her importance to Harry Potter. Also, Hermione herself barely recognizes her face in the mirror in Chapter One. Lurve, Meggory | |||
| June W | 2005.05.05 - 05:11PM | 3: Three--In the Dark | Signed |
| He's alive!! He found her!! And she has his potions book. Now to get a cauldron and some ingredients to make healing potions for him... Do Hermione and Georgiana get to a eat a little at work, like maybe leftovers? Thanks for the new chapter, but I'm already anxious for the next one. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! As for food, I figured a small conspiracy to steal scraps from a Death Eater headquarters would be unnoticed (for the meantime...). As for healing potions, he doesn't really need them. His behaviour is strictly due to malnutrition (lowered mental abilities and focus, decreased cardiovascular and pulmonary function, irritability--more than usual, I guess). But we'll get to that later. Lurve, Meggory | |||
| sophierom | 2005.05.05 - 02:57PM | 3: Three--In the Dark | Signed |
| Wow! First, thanks so much for posting so quickly! It's great that we didn't have to wait long to find out what happened to Hermione. Second, I'm really looking forward to finding out what happened to Snape up till this point. No need to apologize for the "chattiness" of the chapter ... I loved it! Thought your dialogue was fantastic. You've already created great chemistry for the two characters. Looking forward to more, whenever you have the chance. (I know how busy RL can get!) Best, Sophie Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I posted so quickly only to get Snape into the mix before people lost interest. And don't worry, we'll find out what happened to Snape, although the whole backstory may be a while coming (it's not a happy story...). Lurve, Meggory | |||
| RachelW | 2005.05.05 - 02:40PM | 3: Three--In the Dark | Signed |
| Don't apologise for nessicary chattiness. The way you describe the surroundings makes it very easy to visualise...this is reminding me of WW2 movies I've seen. Just caught up on the last two chapters...either you're writing very quickly or you've already written most of this out. The writing is excellent as is the story. Now, I'm really looking forward to what happens now that she's run into Professor Snape! This has the makings for a great tale of adventure. If anyone tries to get you to cave to make Snape and Hermione 'get it on'...don't! I really like the realism of how this is coming across so far, the starkness. I believe this is going on my Friday Fanfic rec list. :-) Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Rachel! I'm writing quickly, and I hate to admit I haven't started the other chapters yet. But not to fear! I will prevail! Don't worry, there will be no "getting it on" in this story, although there may be "neccessary lemons" (you'll see...). Thanks for the recommendation to your rec list. Lurve, Meggory | |||
| Expected Aberrance | 2005.05.05 - 12:18PM | 3: Three--In the Dark | Signed |
| This is the most original fic I've read in a very long time. I hope you continue. Author's Response: Thank you very much! I tried to be original, but sometimes it's hard. Rule one of writing: steal all you can. Lurve, Meggory | |||
| TNgirl | 2005.05.05 - 10:09AM | 3: Three--In the Dark | Signed |
| You have an excellent, but sad story going on here. Why didn't you post it under angst? I hope Voldie's crew gets what's coming to them, just like the Nazi's did. The way it's looking you may have to send in help for the resistance like maybe the Americans? Lucius needs to be shot, maybe since they're intergrated into muggle England Hermione or Snape could find a gun for me and shoot him!!! Anyway, I really like your story and I can't wait to see more!! Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I didn't mean it to be angst, especially for what's coming in later chapters. I'm not going to give away what happens, but Hermione and Snape are not going to singlehandedly stop the occupation of Britain and the continued invasion of continental Europe. It's just implausible, and I'm going for realistic. Lucius may get what's coming to him. ;) Lurve, Meggory | |||
| Lupine | 2005.05.05 - 09:27AM | 3: Three--In the Dark | Signed |
| excellent Author's Response: Thanks for the review! | |||
| snarkypants | 2005.05.05 - 08:12AM | 3: Three--In the Dark | Signed |
| I'm very much enjoying this story. You're very good with mood and the little details of this Nazi-like occupation. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It's all in the details minus the annoying exposition. Lurve, Meggory | |||
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