Reviews for The Man Who Sold the World
| indilwen | 2009.06.16 - 01:07PM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| I loved the story, and read it all in one go (only pausing briefly to get a couple of hours of sleep once). I the writing and character development were exceptional. I occasionally enjoy stories where Voldemort has won and we get to glimpse the aftermath of what the world would have been in that event. I also liked the way each chapter ended in a cliff hanger...kept me moving relentlessly to the next chapter. I do have to agree with those who didn't like the abruptness of the ending. A unhappy ending is ok, even though I prefer happy ones...but this one did sort of seem to come out of nowhere and didn't really fit with the way the rest of the story developed. It sort of seemed like you just got tired of writing the story, or didn't know how to end it and just sort of made it stop? |
| daria_mf | 2009.06.16 - 10:09AM | 15: Fifteen--Late-Night Lessons | Signed |
| I've just begun reading the story tonight, but I must say, the writing is thought provoking and the title is an awesome song! |
| Lyssiej | 2009.06.16 - 04:00AM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| 2:55am on the nose. Wonderful story, though I wish you'd tied up the ending a bit more neatly. |
| Katbc12 | 2009.06.16 - 03:15AM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| Ending was a bit to abrupt for my liking, but ether way I still enjoyed this story very much. Also I found it very amused that when I finished reading this fic, it was exactly 3:00 am. |
| somebodyoranother | 2009.06.15 - 06:10PM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| fantastic |
| Veritas51 | 2009.06.15 - 04:33PM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
A magnificent but depressing story! I also think that the ending was too abrupt, and did not understand that the headline was only for the country that Hermione was in, not for Voldemort and the Death Eaters as a whole. But if the ending is unhappy, you have to stop somewhere, and after more than four years you probably decided that this story needed to close. Poor Severus! And Ginny!
Author's Response: There; I've fixed the part with the newspaper headline. You're absolutely right about the unhappy ending and me really wanting this to be over, but to be fair (to me, I suppose ;D) this was always supposed to be the ending--abrupt and uncomfortable. Thanks for your patience and reviews! |
| julymorning | 2009.06.15 - 08:29AM | 1: One-A Day in the Life | Signed |
| Just happened upon this story in the recently updated list and looked at your chapter titles - awesome. Just awesome. :-D
Off to read it now! |
| lilynotpotter | 2009.06.15 - 05:57AM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| This was great - but I wish she had walked somewhere to meet Severus...
And I did just read that all in one go, and it's 5 o'clock in the morning. :D |
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