Reviews for The Man Who Sold the World
Novinha | 2005.06.23 - 07:18AM | 9: Nine--Words to the Wise | Signed |
Dear Meggory,
Ever since I read Bloodcult of Freud's Long Black Coat I've been very interested in reading a story about post-war world in which Voldemort has won. So of course I was very happy when I saw your story. And it wasn't a disappointment. The vision of the post-war world is terrific. I am also quite amazed with how you describe the situation - it's your own vision, but you use WWII elements carefully interweaving them with your own creations. This truly makes me happy - for I often get frustrated with people's lack of knowledge about the horrors people here had to live through.
As to the chattiness - no need to apologise. I love well-written dialogue and will take it over over-sized description any day ;)
Draco was banished to rule Lihuania or somewhere around there - my, that's terrible. I do hope not Poland - although that just might kill him. There is much to be said about the Poles, but one thing is - we're good at Resistance. Hundreds of years of training.
Dolohov's way of gaining power in Russia - possible only because it wasn't Putin at power yet (because it happens before the 2000 year, doesn't it?). Putin would not be taken over so easily.
4. I have nothing against the Russians. Really. It's just fiction. More countries' governments and policies to be mentioned later... - now, I do hope I will like what you write of Poland ;) If not, I promise I will tell! (BTW, if you haven't guessed yet, I am writing the review as I am reading. So I don't miss anything huge I want to comment on)
For the first time in over a year, someone wanted to protect her from the world - that was a good sentence. Put exactly where it should be. Nice.
Ha! Poland is still fighting. Neat. I do hope the Death Eaters will have huge problems with it. If you want to write something more about the situation there, include names or something, feel free to ask me - as a Native, I could tell you where Polish magic schools may be located or some such! Names, anything. I would happily help.
Percy being the evil wizard - I don't find it too likely, and it's already become somewhat cliched, but I suppose he is the only one that works here. And I must admit I've always liked the idea of Percy being Malfoy's personal assistant. But I am somewhat deviated ;)
Rodolphus had actually saved Hermione twice - is he simply so impatient or is there a bit of humanity in his soul? I must admit that it's a bit strange, for Malfoy is his superior, is he not?
You wrote Snape very much in character and nicely. I liked how he dealt with the guard and his talk with Hermione later.
As to sleeping in a car - nothing unusual, I can't even sleep in a bus, let alone car. It's simply impossible for me to fall asleep unless I am lying down.
All in all, I very much like the story so far and am looking forward to reading more. The cliffhanger at the end of this chapter is really a good one.
Greetings from Poland, Novinha
Author's Response: Wow! This is the most detailed review I've ever received, so first of all, thank you for your attention to detail! I wasn't planning to write anything Poland-specific (mainly because I know very little about it), but if something rolls around in my brain for a little while, I'll be sure to get in touch. I needed to get Draco out of the way for a little while, and I figured Lithuania would be a good start. The area will sure stir up trouble. As for the little bit about Poland and the immediate area, I wanted to ensure they put up a good fight. Just wait what I come up with for France. They can't always surrender....
I realize the whole evil Percy thing has been done, but I really believe deep down that he could be selfish enough to betray his family and friends. I personally could see the large family adding to his drive for power; not that there's anything wrong with large families, but I know a few people who have many siblings and they tend to be a bit selfish simply because they had to share everything when they were young. Percy wants to stand out from the multitude of Weasleys, which is fine--but he is too blind with power (and myopia) to realize how poor his choices have been.
As for Rodolphus, I've always thought there should be a little bit of civility left in some of the Death Eaters. It was almost hard to write, knowing what he did to Neville's parents. He's an evil man, certainly, but I think he also dislikes waste.
Thank you again for the review!
-Meggory |
medicdaddy | 2005.06.22 - 10:13PM | 9: Nine--Words to the Wise | Signed |
You are forgive by me for the late update because the real world also stoped me from comming back to this wonderful story to read the last three updates. I dont know about the 79 grand marquis but the 76 marquis makes a good bed in the front and back seat. And my freinds teased that it was a 5 o mobile (from Hawaii 5 0 ). I think a lot of people dont sleep while others drive because they dont have control of the vehicle and that is not normal to the human nature. Well I cant what to see who caught Hermine and how see gets out of this. does her wondless magic help? Well I hope that the real world doesnt hinder eather of us to find out . until then Bill
Author's Response: Oh, trust me, the '79 Marquis is fabulous to sleep in. Mine had springs instead of just a foam-covered bench in the back, and leather seats. I could almost stretch all the way out (i'm just a hair shy of 5'4"). Throw in a sleeping bag and crack the window a bit to keep the air circulating, and it's a better sleep than in a tent full of vomiting drunks. The Real World kinda sucks sometimes. |
Alarase | 2005.06.22 - 12:02PM | 9: Nine--Words to the Wise | Signed |
wow. This is probably the best LV wins story I've seen out there yet! Update soonnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! Update should be very soon. |
nightshift | 2005.06.22 - 02:53AM | 9: Nine--Words to the Wise | Signed |
Well written. An interesting take on "the War's" impact on the Muggle world.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I feel bad for the poor, unsuspecting Muggles. |
chatto | 2005.06.21 - 10:15PM | 9: Nine--Words to the Wise | Anonymous |
Again, what a lovely writing style you have -- this story is very well plotted -- can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! An update to come very soon, with more plot! |
triskell | 2005.06.21 - 08:01AM | 9: Nine--Words to the Wise | Signed |
Excellent chapter, as always.
I wonder if Severus had seen that she had his name on her tatoo... It's an evil cliffie here :) Who is this wich ? Update as soon as you can.
Author's Response: If you read closely, Severus never saw his name because he didn't push her sleeve all the way up. As for the mystery witch, you'll find out soon enough. |
Hellios | 2005.06.21 - 07:52AM | 9: Nine--Words to the Wise | Signed |
Excellent chapter! I wonder if Snape will ever see that his name is also tattood on her arm. The cliffhanger is evil, though!
Author's Response: Evil, yes, I know. But it was the fastest way to get the chapter up for you guys. |
Gannet | 2005.06.21 - 07:29AM | 9: Nine--Words to the Wise | Signed |
Argh! Don't you know a cliffhanger in such a marvelous story is just plain evil? (thank you for the update... I'm just hoping the next chapter will come soon!)
Author's Response: Yes, I'm evil. Mwah. But updates to come quickly, because I'm going on vacation. |
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