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Reviews for The Man Who Sold the World

Lisard2005.06.08 - 07:15AM8: Eight--Niceties of a Civilized WorldSigned
Lovely chapter that manages to resolve a bit of tension but to sustain a bit more at the same time. Thank you. At the end of every one you're leaving your readers eager for the next part. Can't wait. Minor gripe: The car should have a full tank of petrol, not gas! ;)

Author's Response: Yes, I know. I remembered that this morning at about eight a.m. and I couldn't change it until I got home! I spent all day beating myself over the head with it! Thanks for the reminder.

Gannet2005.06.08 - 05:05AM8: Eight--Niceties of a Civilized WorldSigned
Your description of shifting gears is quite accurate, actually. If you're especially clumsy (like me), and, say, have to start the car on a slope, you can also manage to have the engine make a horrid noise and then stop (and then you have to start it again). Thanks for the update! Are they going to Hogwarts?

Author's Response: Ah, indeed, are they going to Hogwarts...? We'll find out. Mwahahah. The car scene was completely plagiarized, but I suppose I did credit the source in a footnote, so I've covered my ass...

Sokudo Ningyou2005.06.08 - 03:25AM8: Eight--Niceties of a Civilized WorldSigned
Automatic is the way to go. Stick sucks. :P I pity Hermoine when she has to stop on an incline....

Author's Response: Yeah, I drive an automatic too. I'll make sure Hermione doesn't have to stop on a hill somewhere. As the writer, I have license to do that kind of thing... ;)

chatto2005.06.07 - 11:27PM8: Eight--Niceties of a Civilized WorldAnonymous
This story just continues on in fine form; what consistency and attention to detail. I am really looking forward to reading this one until the end.

Author's Response: thanks for the review!

June W2005.06.07 - 09:55PM8: Eight--Niceties of a Civilized WorldSigned
BTW, since Severus has been starving for more than a few months, he needs more to eat than just a blueberry muffin. I hope he gets more than just Jaffa cakes, pickled onions (for Vitamin C?), and tinned soup, Where is Mrs Weasley when you need her!

Author's Response: I know, I know. But they do have to stretch their food as long as they can; who knows when they might get their next meal? We'll have a very starchy diet, because yogourt doesn't keep very well.

Lyndie5782005.06.07 - 09:55PM8: Eight--Niceties of a Civilized WorldSigned
Thank you so much for the update! I'm glad they hashed out their problem and moved on. They have too much to do without bickering all the time. Thank you for a resourceful Hermione; so good to watch her continuing to think on her feet.

Author's Response: Yeah, they do have lots to do. But expect more bickering. They really haven't moved past the bickering; after all, he's a git and she thinks she's in charge.

Winter Dragon2005.06.07 - 09:18PM8: Eight--Niceties of a Civilized WorldSigned
Congratulations on being in the Featured Stories column! It's certainly well-deserved. I particularly liked the exchange when Hermione asks Snape why he didn't Obliviate Seamus. It shows the humanity that tempers his survival instinct. But the lecture about no good and evil reminded me a little too much of Quirrell/Voldemort's speech in SS/PS. Thanks for another fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm rather proud of it, even though my best friend is standing behind me making fun of me.

behind2005.06.07 - 08:59PM8: Eight--Niceties of a Civilized WorldSigned
YAY! another good story. Now you shall be added to the list of amazing stories. I can't wait for the next chapter. This is a great plot. Squee! I'm excited.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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