Home | Members | Help | Submission Rules | Log In | Recently Added | Categories | Titles | Completed Fics | Random Fic | Search | Top Fictions Reviews for The Man Who Sold the World View All ReviewsReviews For 14. Fourteen--Breakfast at Vasiliy'sReviews For 4. Four--The Dead Walk at DawnReviews For 8. Eight--Niceties of a Civilized WorldReviews For 1. One-A Day in the LifeReviews For 2. Two--In the GhettoReviews For 3. Three--In the DarkReviews For 5. Five--Over BreakfastReviews For 7. Seven--The Librarian's ArtReviews For 6. Six--Before the StormReviews For 9. Nine--Words to the WiseReviews For 10. Ten--Time Has Come TodayReviews For 11. Eleven--Gallows PoleReviews For 12. Twelve--PomegranatesReviews For 13. Thirteen--RedReviews For 15. Fifteen--Late-Night LessonsReviews For 16. Sixteen--You Can Never Go Home AgainReviews For 17. Seventeen-- Pale Shadow of a WomanReviews For 18. Eighteen--Come TogetherReviews For 19. Nineteen--Behind Black EyesReviews For 20. Twenty--Mist and ShadowReviews For 21. Twenty-One--The Long Way HomeReviews For 22. Twenty-Two--Turn the PageReviews For 23. Twenty Three--DistractionsReviews For 24. Twenty-Four--Potion 986Reviews For 25. Twenty-Five -- I Know You Are But What Am I?Reviews For 26. Twenty-Six--There's No Such Thing As LuckReviews For 27. Twenty-Seven--Over and OutReviews For 28. Twenty-Eight--Dirty and TrueReviews For 29. Twenty-Nine--SalvationReviews For 31. Thirty-One--Wish You Were HereReviews For 30. Thirty--Two For Joy The Grim 2005.07.08 - 04:53PM 12: Twelve--Pomegranates Signed argh! you better get another chapter up! this one was good. but how did she lie under the veritaserum? huh? unless it was a really crappy brew, and she knew it when she tasted it. gosh, im sorry if people (including me) bug you about short chapters. i really dont mind short chapters at all; its just that i read a story that had an average of 8k per chapter, so the shortness is startling, cause it took me days to read that fic. anyways, hopefully you can crack out another one...without a cliffhanger, perhaps? thanks for the update! -The Grim Author's Response: Cliffhangers will drop off (pun intended) soon. But I really, really like them... As for the Veritaserum, yes, the brew wasn't made properly, and so is ineffective. I will try to make chapters longer, but it's easier for me to update faster if the chapters are a little shorter. pickles 2005.07.08 - 11:43AM 12: Twelve--Pomegranates Signed Hey Meg what's with the short chapter??? Good writing. Glad the potion isn't working properly. Where is Snape and what is he doing? Did he take off with the car? Do they realise the muggle car was stolen? Waiting for more. P Author's Response: Sorry about the shortness. Next chapter to be longer. As to Snape, all will be revealed. And the DE don't care if the car is stolen, because it's a Muggle problem, right? TNgirl 2005.07.08 - 11:32AM 12: Twelve--Pomegranates Signed Where did Severus go? Author's Response: Indeed, where did I put him? Oh yes, I remember. But you can't know until later. That's how suspense works. Gannet 2005.07.08 - 09:29AM 12: Twelve--Pomegranates Signed Thank you for the update! Author's Response: You're welcome! SlytherinSexGod 2005.07.08 - 09:20AM 12: Twelve--Pomegranates Signed short. annoyingly. ah well... the muse of authors are never to be rushed, or so my own says... :/ Author's Response: Yeah, that muse is a bitch sometimes. sophierom 2005.07.08 - 06:54AM 12: Twelve--Pomegranates Signed Just wanted to say thanks for your explanation about the 'sweet' comment. Makes a great deal of sense. Best, Sophie Author's Response: No problem. I wanted to make sense. I'll probably have some allusion to it in an upcoming chapter. behind 2005.07.08 - 02:47AM 12: Twelve--Pomegranates Signed LUCIUS! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!! :D!!!!!!!! I luvah me some lucius. I can't wait ::bounces in her seat:: Lucius, Lucius, Lucius. Author's Response: Well, I hope you keep that enthusiasm level up. It's great! triskell 2005.07.08 - 02:26AM 12: Twelve--Pomegranates Signed Another evil cliff. I can't wait for more. I hope it is Severus but who knows ? Maybe it is Lucius because she has a dread of this voice. Update asap. Author's Response: I'm evil. What can I say? [Previous] 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 [Next]

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