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Reviews for The Man Who Sold the World

June W2005.09.28 - 04:51PM19: Nineteen--Behind Black EyesSigned
So what is Po’ka? I would think her conscience would eventually force her to consider that he was tortured, etc. - something that she has never experienced to that extent. I just hope Severus and Vasiliy are watching Ginny. Severus’ sharp warning forgotten - foolish Hermione! Just watch Hermione give away everything to Ginny!!

And lest you forget: Vovo! Vovo! Vovo! Vovo! Save the house elf! (You already killed off Dobby, so you're way over your quota of permissible house elf deaths....)

Author's Response: Oh, po'ka means "bye" or other forms of casual "see you laters." Yeah, but Hermione's conscience isn't the one in control of her brain right now. She's pissed, and I would certainly defend her right to be that way. Foolish Hermione indeed. As for the House Elves, I suppose you have a good point. Don't worry, he'll show up. Eventually.

pickles2005.09.28 - 04:10PM19: Nineteen--Behind Black EyesSigned
good chapter. but what she saw doesn't explain anything. well to me anyways. i need more info... it was just a clip. she didn't see what happened to him before he became injured. did snape still only show her what he wanted her to see? What is going on with Ginny? Is she really on the side of light? why did she make a comment about hermione's wand? is she wearing a "bug" that can really back to whomever to watch out for drawn wands.. i drive hubby "mad" with all the questions... hubby will be reading this chapter after work. thank you for a new chapter. have a great week.

Author's Response: No, no, questions are good. You must question! Hermione must question! But she is in (gasp) state of shock! Bad Hermione, ignoring Severus' warning like that...

fresh82005.09.28 - 11:40AM19: Nineteen--Behind Black EyesSigned
uhoh.

Author's Response: Uhoh indeed. The shite is about to hit the fan, as it were.

medicdaddy2005.09.19 - 10:04PM18: Eighteen--Come TogetherAnonymous
Pickes read it first and was keeping this update all to her self. She forgot to tell me it was posted.

Author's Response: Oh, so she's not playing fair, hmm? I ought to give her a stern talking to....

sheri222005.09.19 - 08:04PM18: Eighteen--Come TogetherAnonymous
Update soon! I love this... it gives me a break from reading all the fluffy stuff... I like it because it seems like an alternate outcome from everything else... Great Job!!!

Author's Response: But fluffy is good too. But I don't do fluffy. In fact, I am the anti-fluffy.

medicdaddy2005.09.19 - 09:58AM18: Eighteen--Come TogetherAnonymous
O how wanderful to find another update. I cant wait to see what truths come out when Severus tells he what Malfoy did to him. And see how much trust he will give out. Well until next time. Thanks Bill

Author's Response: Yes, how much trust indeed. Severus isn't exactly good at opening up, is he? Be sure to tell your wife the update is up, eh?

Passionate4Snape2005.09.19 - 02:59AM18: Eighteen--Come TogetherSigned
Who would have thought that an author could make a reader bite their nails in anticipation of the outcome of a simple creation of a wand :>) Loved the chapter. I hope an update will quickly follow :>) Congrats. Linda Passionate4Snape

Author's Response: Mmm, glad you liked it. It was actually really fun to write.

UglyBabyGoat2005.09.18 - 08:22PM18: Eighteen--Come TogetherSigned
This is the best chapter so far. I enjoy the way you mix the amazing (The unicorn) with the mundane (Trying to get clean in freezing cold water). Not every story, or even every chapter, needs to be a huge all-out action-adventure tale. The pacing and character development in this story is dead on. I love the little asides that give so much away about the characters (ie Snape's cosmetic charm gone wrong). At the end of every chapter I find myself musing where you will take it next .

Author's Response: Hee, I thought people might like that. While I'm a big fan of my boy's fuzzy chest, I don't think Snape fits the profile, but he should have a reason for being smooth. A reason that doesn't involve shaving or waxing... I hate washing in cold water (and I've done so in a glacier-fed lake), so it was nearly painful to write that scene. It's a painful experience.

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