Reviews for The Man Who Sold the World
| cowpie | 2010.12.18 - 01:09AM | 1: One-A Day in the Life | Signed |
| Are you kidding me? I cannot fathom why you ended it this way. It feels more like the midpoint of the story rather than the end. How can you leave these characters? Well done story, really fascinating. I just wish it had a proper ending. |
| rose_of_sharron | 2010.12.12 - 02:11AM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| Every true ending, is truely a begining, and not an ending at all. Well done. I won't say that I look forward to more, or even that you should write more, but i will say this- with such a spectacular begining will you be able to let the new story remain untold? Thank you for the gift of your words, they kept me spell-bound well into the wee hours of the morning. i loved your authors note... just for the record i started reading around nine, it is now 2:47AM. |
| atomich01 | 2010.12.09 - 02:02PM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| Excellent story, compelling, well written... but such an abrupt ending! No closure on at all... not so much an ending as it felt like it was just stopped at the end of a chapter with a "well, I'm bored now so I'll stop writing here" feel. Very disappointed :( |
| RedHH | 2010.12.08 - 03:18PM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| ...I'll be honest, I don't quite get it. Voldemort likely stays in power and Snape and Hermione part ways in the end? I feel as if I need a bit more closure on this one.
But really, great story! Very post-apocalyptic, kind of a Hunger Games feel, if you've read it. Well done! |
| easleyweasley | 2010.11.15 - 04:10PM | 30: Thirty--Two For Joy | Signed |
| A good 'Voldemort wins' fic is a rarity. You portray the dystopia convincingly and the story line is well handled. Snape/Granger is difficult to do well, but this one succeeds. Ending a little too abrupt, perhaps. |
| rocaline | 2010.10.30 - 11:54AM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| Nice, great story, the end is beautiful even if you want to know what happen next, are they going to see each other again, did You-Know-Who will be killed ? A lot of questions but by the way you write the end, you imagine what will happen. Again really great story bravo !! |
| emikae | 2010.09.24 - 06:58AM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| well you were off by an hour, it's four in the morning now.
I liked your story a lot. It's written very well, and you don't hold anything back. I enjoyed the ending, it was true to the story. Thanks for writing. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2010.06.30 - 05:34PM | 28: Twenty-Eight--Dirty and True | Signed |
| Wait a minute! Hermione (thru Lucius' memory) saw Bellatrix-as-Narcissa TAKE the Order information from Sev's mind thru Legilimancy during sex. ((What a convoluted sentence THAT was!)) So Hermione knows he didn't give it willingly--how can she hate him now, having seen this scene again? She seemed to have understood it better while she was watching it under Lucius' control. A dynamic, dynamite scene, any way you did it. |
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