Reviews for The Man Who Sold the World
| zenia | 2016.01.01 - 11:08AM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| I was digging this story... right until the ending. I tried to click to the next chapter only to see that there wasn't one and you said the story was over. It really doesn't seem like it was. :C |
| Naydriel | 2015.07.23 - 06:31AM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| Holy shit.
So many questions left - yet it was this perfect resolution for me.
Thank you. |
| verasuspense | 2014.04.14 - 03:03PM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| No HEA here but not a completely dark ending either : Hermione is out of England, with a new Gregorivitch wand and there has been a successful uprising against Voldemort in Belgium. I would like sequel though. |
| Jadecadence | 2013.09.29 - 01:31AM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| Fascinating and dream-like. Even the chapter u called boring to write! Well-crafted. But this ain't poetry to leave this story like that! This is prose, which means the tricky ending needs to be sorted out. Unless you need anti-depressants to focus your mind - like i do! |
| Buggy | 2013.03.13 - 08:08AM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| Oh, that was masterful. Contrary to popular opinion, I loved the ending. I thought it was perfect. Amazing, thank you! |
| holyflyingpig | 2013.02.28 - 11:52PM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| I very much enjoyed this story in the beginning. You had some brilliant ideas, and everything was so well written. As the story progressed there were many questions unanswered. Why was Ginny with Voldemort? Why did Ginny hate dumbledore? What happened to Harry? Why does everyone want a nuclear scientist? You didn't wrap up any of these plot elements. It seems like you just got tired of writing. I encourage you to go back and rewrite. You have a beautiful idea and need to continue. I'll be waiting. |
| Derelict Author | 2013.01.07 - 02:21AM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| Gah, I read the reviews all but warning me away, but alas, I could not be kept away. Yes, this ending was hardly what I expected, even from those. It seemed hurried, put together, and a bit unnerving considering you seemed rather proud of it... but, this was quite a story to take on. And it was brilliant, really. I'm quite a fan of "If Voldemort won" stories, and this handled it in a way I had never seen done before... and the parallels to World War II and the Nazis was beautifully done. Some things seemed heavy handed (Hermione being cursed/passing out ended WAY too many chapters, and I always find it weird when Hermione ISN'T suspicious in stories like this...), but the dialogue was superb, the development of this "new world" was fantastic, the plot was like me watching Odessa Files or something... just constant intrigue, suspense, etc. It would have been nice to see actual romance develop between Hermione and Snape, but I don't think I'm at a loss that it didn't; their dynamic, and the story as a whole, made up for it. The last paragraph of this story was brilliantly done... I just wish the rest of the chapter had been better, and us readers weren't left so empty... the only decent solution would be to write a sequel, I'd say! |
| Magicmarker36 | 2012.11.14 - 05:00PM | 31: Thirty-One--Wish You Were Here | Signed |
| Like most of the others, I thought your work here was absolutely amazing. Except for that last bit where it just seems like you quit. Very disappointing ending. |
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