Reviews for Naked Journey
Andrian | 2004.09.30 - 09:49PM | 7: Until Death do Part | Anonymous |
Oh my. This story is so enchanting and I sniffled loud and long over Bob's death. What a terrific story teller you are. Glad you have graced us with the gift
Author's Response: *Pook smiles sheepishly* I don't know if it's a gift or not, I'm still rather nervous about writing at all. But as long as folks seem to have as much fun reading it as I have writing it, I'll keep it up! :) |
Ezmerelda | 2004.09.30 - 08:52PM | 9: A Day of Peaceful Plotting | Signed |
I couldn't help but snicker at the two of them...
Lovely story, thanks for writing! ~"~
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! :) |
NightQueen | 2004.09.30 - 07:13PM | 9: A Day of Peaceful Plotting | Anonymous |
That was delicious!!!!! What a perfect way to wake up!!! oved every second of this chapter!!! Can't wait for chapter10.
Author's Response: Glad I could brighten your morning! :) |
Jade_Orchid | 2004.09.30 - 02:05PM | 9: A Day of Peaceful Plotting | Signed |
Whew!! (pant, pant, drool) I mean... my, what an interesting section! The image of Severus sitting with bare chest exposed... gulp! As far as I'm concerned, it can take them a *week* to get back to Hogwarts! And it can be very cold at night, and they can share body heat, and, and... sorry, you have turned my brain into mush! This section was tender, sensual, and humorous. You are a masterful story teller!
Author's Response: That means a lot to me coming from you, Jade; as I sit here with baited breath awaiting each bedeviling update to your own story! I can only hope you enjoy the infamous chapter 10 as much as you did this one. I'm a tad afraid folks will be disapointed after all this build up. Perhaps they will be gentle, it is my first time after all! ;) |
Clair Snape | 2004.09.30 - 01:56PM | 9: A Day of Peaceful Plotting | Signed |
Very good. Lemons soon?
Author's Response: Oh yes...Lemony Goodness quite soon. ;) |
Aurealis | 2004.09.30 - 01:00PM | 9: A Day of Peaceful Plotting | Anonymous |
This was a sweet chapter. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you! :) |
Invisible Voice | 2004.09.30 - 12:03PM | 9: A Day of Peaceful Plotting | Signed |
ooh, i like this fic! looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) |
Cathy G | 2004.09.30 - 11:59AM | 9: A Day of Peaceful Plotting | Anonymous |
You never fail to make me smile...you've created a gentle story that has captured the personalities of both parties. Even the erotic scenes...and they are that - eroticism, not smut -have a gentle quality that is delightful. Although I'm sure they'll get smuttier later (smuttier....is that even a real word?) which is fine by me, I'm enjoying the difference between your story and most of the others. It's much more realistic that they would behave this way at first instead of just throwing themselves on each other like ravening wolves.
Author's Response: You are a balm to my fledgling writer's soul, Cathy. Yes, they do get smuttier (which I think is a fantabulous word) though I don't think I'm ever quite crude about it. It is my first time writing naughty bits though. They get more brave as I go along, I find.
Author's Response: P.S. The "throwing themselves on each other like ravenous wolves" is coming soon to a fanfic near you.
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