Reviews for Naked Journey
corky42 | 2005.01.23 - 10:16PM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
I had been reading about "Bob" lately & just had to find out what/who it was! Very clever - also the clock was a riot. Not to mention the chess-playing unicorn! Nicely done - I have just started your WIP & that looks promising too - I like your writing style.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) |
cryingoddess | 2005.01.21 - 09:20PM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
awww... the story was fab :) loved the name 'bob' its cute, i absolutely ADORED how severus's animagus form is a black unicorn, awww that's so cute!!! your plot was really cool, especially with the clocks ~ have to say my favourite part is severus naked in the forest though ^^
Author's Response: *giggle* I must say I rather like the thought of Snape wandering naked through the wood myself! Thanks for the kind review! :) |
Jelaine99 | 2005.01.21 - 01:35PM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
I really loved it...it was so awesome. And you get my reward (if that means anything!) for best incorporation of Seabiscut in a story:) which was truely hilarious! Thanks for writing such a great fic!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the Seabiscuit reference, it made me giggle. Thanks for the kind review! :) |
Dizzywitch76 | 2005.01.20 - 11:56AM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
I started to read this when you posted the first few chapters and i am ashamed to say that i gave up reading at the end of chapter 2. I really don't know why i did that because now i have come back and read the entire thing through i have to say that i have throughly enjoyed it.
The thought of naked snape is yummy and i think that Bob has got to be one of the sweetest best written OC i have seen in a long time.
I loved the way that you had a totally determined Hermione and a slightly nervous Snape. I do love it when he is not quite sure of himself and then finds his courage to go for what he wants.
Yet again i apologise for not recognising that this is a very lovely and well written piece. I only hope that this reveiw will make up my lateness.
I wish you well in everything you write and will be keeping an eye out for it.
Much love and encouragement
Becky XXX
Author's Response: *snicker* Hmm...I believe we discussed my weak beginnings in your review for OWF. It is a bit apparent here as well, though I like the beginning of NJ much better than OWF. I know this fic has it's troubles, it is the first thing I've ever written so I imagine that was inevitable. But I'm terribly fond of this little farce. It was a hoot to write and I think it will always be my favorite! Thanks for the review! This review-slut would rather have them late than never! :) |
tinnidawg | 2005.01.19 - 02:40AM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
I heard about this story on WIKTT. I just read it at one go and i must compliment you on a wonderful story, especially for a first story it was just fabulous.
Hoping to catch the next one too.
Tinnidawg
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Oh, I know it has it's problems, but it is a first story and I am tremendously proud of the little thing! Thanks again! :) |
Shiro Ryu | 2005.01.18 - 03:08AM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
Mmmm...still good reading third time around! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks! :) |
Shiro Ryu | 2005.01.18 - 03:07AM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
Mmmm...still good reading third time around! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks darlin'! :) |
moonkittyc | 2005.01.16 - 03:55PM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
this is so good i laughed i cryed you need to make a second story with this like thm getting married or something please do it
Author's Response: I have thought about a sequel at some point. I may yet do one if I ever get around to it. I don't know if I'll go so far as to get them hitched, weddings are so boring! :) |
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