Reviews for Naked Journey
June | 2004.09.18 - 07:31AM | 4: Wrong Turn | Anonymous |
Very funny, the naming process for Bob the Unicorn! As much as I hate to see Snape still in need of rescue, I am enjoying the pictures of Bob and Snape developing a friendship. |
June | 2004.09.18 - 06:59AM | 3: Alone | Anonymous |
I like the story you created about the final battle -- an exhausted Snape strill fighting to defend Harry, who doesn't even know Snape is protecting him until Hermione tells Harry after the battle. I also like the way you have Harry support Hermione (albeit reluctantly), with Ron nicely tucked away. I hope Ron CONTINUES to stay away from harassing Hermione! |
heartnut | 2004.09.18 - 01:28AM | 2: Lost | Signed |
Hee hee, this is great! I love this take on the SS/HG idea. Totally unique outlook, I look forward to seeing what develops. |
Denise | 2004.09.17 - 10:04PM | 2: Lost | Anonymous |
Great job so far. More please? LOL
Author's Response: Thanks to all. Your enthusiatic comments make it easy to keep writing away. I'm currently doing the first draft of chapter 11 and I had to take a wee break as Severus' situation is getting a bit...shall we say, heated? *Author giggles wickedly.* Please keep comments coming as they are deffinately writer's catnip. There will be more as soon as intrepid beta and hardworking moderators catch up. |
Jade_Orchid | 2004.09.17 - 08:32PM | 2: Lost | Anonymous |
This story is amazing! How's that for some input? (grin) Very well-written, humorous, poetic in places, and quite interesting. Severus as unicorn catnip... whoever would have thought. I am greatly looking forward to the next chapter. |
elementaldeity | 2004.09.17 - 08:19PM | 2: Lost | Anonymous |
Very nice story so far, and I can't wait to read more. The unicorn bit was funny and interesting to see where if anywhere you will go with that. Keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing;) |
CLARALUNA | 2004.09.17 - 07:24PM | 2: Lost | Anonymous |
I can imagine a naked Severus with a puppy-like unicorn! Just FANTASTIC! |
Imhilien | 2004.09.17 - 07:06PM | 2: Lost | Anonymous |
A good story so far! Poor Severus to be adored so much by unicorns, LOL. |
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