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Reviews for Naked Journey

DDMalfoy2004.09.21 - 08:09AM6: Walking ThoughtsAnonymous
I find I can't seem to concentrate on anything but getting new chapters of your story. This was a great chapter. Thank you for updating so fast. But it's not fast enough for me.

Snape Fan2004.09.21 - 06:58AM5: Cavalry of OneSigned
This story is wonderful, but I think you are giving a 17 (18?) year old a tad too much knowledge of things. Granted Hermione is extremely intelligent, but I find it hard to belieive that she would be able to accomplish that arithmentancy spell as young as she is.

Author's Response: My Hermione is not all-knowing, as shown by her inabillity to work out what happened with Neville's potion, but she isn't called "the cleverest witch of her age" for nothing. My story has more explanation of her Arithmancy prowess in later chapters. Put simply, I find it easy to believe that Hermione is a "math nerd". I don't expect everyone to agree with that choice of mine, but it amuses me no end! :)

mijita2004.09.21 - 03:17AM5: Cavalry of OneAnonymous
And gobsmacked...(or something smacked) he well should be. Go Hermione, go!

anonymous2004.09.20 - 06:16PM5: Cavalry of OneAnonymous
Just read the first five chapters, and I can't wait for updates. A wonderful use of a fairly cliched premise (potions accident caused by "the Longbottom effect," as one author called it). The renderings of Hermione's relationships with Ron and Harry are thoughtful. And having Severus be unicorn catnip is a stroke of genius. I can just imagine the scene ... Anyway, thanks for this wonderful story. Keep up the good work.

Clair Snape2004.09.20 - 03:15PM5: Cavalry of OneSigned
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Spanefan2004.09.20 - 01:03PM5: Cavalry of OneAnonymous
I just read the updates to "Naked Journey" and am quite impressed. My question is, how come Snape can't accio his want and clothes? Also, why didn't Hermione pack any for him before she left Hogwarts? Finally how come he can't apparate to the edge of the forrest? In any case, I'm anxious to find out what's in store. Great job!

Author's Response: I know that in fanfic, wizards are always calling their wands to them, however in cannon there is no example of this and wizards always use their wands to accio anything else. I went with cannon and decided one can't accio without aready possesing a wand. As for why Hermione doesn't pack him clothes, why would she? Why carry what she can transfigure when she needs it? I answered my take on the apparation business in a previous review. I really must remember to put some of these things in the author notes! Thanks for the input! :)

Beatrice2004.09.20 - 11:19AM5: Cavalry of OneAnonymous
This is really really good...

elementaldeity2004.09.20 - 10:19AM5: Cavalry of OneAnonymous
The last few chapters were very good, and I anticipate more.

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