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Doomspark2004.10.12 - 09:29PM13: Fate and IronySigned
A very witty farce you've drawn here, upsetting conventional applecarts with dash and flair. Marvelously done! The cliffhangers only improve it, as they add to the sense of anticipation for what's to come! Nice work!

Author's Response: What are you doing reading my fluff when you should be finishing the fiendishly clever 'Invictus'? Get back to work immediately or I'll turn you into a newt! *Pook scowls threateningly* Oh...and thanks bunches. :)

Aragon_san2004.10.12 - 09:21PM13: Fate and IronyAnonymous
I love your story and check nearly daily for updates, it's definitely among my all time top 5 on this site. Beautyfully written and with both Snape and Hermione kept in character (which is not very often imo). Please keep up the excellent work! Just one thing: I think the animagus transformation is not dependent on a person having their wands with them - Sirius Black survived his decade in Azkaban (more or less) sane because he spent so much time in his dogform which wasn't attractive to dementors according to Rowling. I find it highly unlikely that wizards incarcerated in Azkaban were allowed or able to keep their wands.... Pettigrew during his Scabbers time also hadn't a wand when he was changed back at the end of PoA, if I recall correctly. Although in your story one would've asked why Severus didn't change to his unicorn form early and simply trotted back to Hogwarts but that would've rendered Herniomes rescue unnecessary or unsuccessful, ne? So perhaps it was an intentional plot device?

Author's Response: If you take into consideration that Severus does indeed believe he'll be stuck in animagus form, that explains why he didn't change from the get go. I admit that the need for a wand to change isn't quite cannon, but my little farce wouldn't go far without it, so I do hope you'll forgive me a touch of artistic liscense. ;)

Author's Response: Lol, I'd also have to note that both Sirius and Peter end up a bit mad, so what does that tell us?

HiddenAllusion2004.10.12 - 07:30PM13: Fate and IronyAnonymous
You're getting far too good at these cliffhangers... I want to read more and there isn't any! This is excellent. You've done a great job... and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm afraid my little cliffhangers are too tempting to resist! :)

Maela2004.10.12 - 07:26PM13: Fate and IronyAnonymous
Wow. He took a big chance leaving Hermione out there unconscious. I guess he didn't have much of a choice though. Please update soon. The suspense is killing me.

Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you like my story well enough to be impatient! Thanks! :)

Zengirl2004.10.12 - 07:15PM13: Fate and IronyAnonymous
What a cliff hanger!! Hurry with the next update, Youre doing a great job! I love his Animagus form. Very original.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

veneficus2004.10.12 - 07:05PM13: Fate and IronyAnonymous
ok. a cliffie like that was totally mean! isn't it enough for you that we have to suffer waiting for a new chapter to come, bitting our nails off with anxiety? well maybe the bitting nails part is a bit hyperbolic, however the suffering is 100% the truth. I can't wait to read another chapie. everynight i'm like, "My Lord, thank you for today." when you update it's like "My Lord thank you for today. And Pooka thankyouthankyouthankyou for the new chapter!" :p Great, great GREAT story. It's on of my top 5 favorities, and believe me, i read A LOT of stories.

Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie. I'm so glad that you are enjoying it!

Losumi2004.10.12 - 06:59PM13: Fate and IronyAnonymous
Ten million points for *the coolest* animagus ever! Perfect!

Author's Response: Thank you! Lol, maybe I'll win the house cup! :)

lyress2004.10.12 - 04:32PM13: Fate and IronyAnonymous
ooooooooooo my god, update, now, immediately - pleassse? this is amazing, wonderfully beautfully written - ah poor bob, can we have him back please? and/or some of his friends asap? love it and want more - PLEASE NOW!

Author's Response: Lol! I will update as fast as possible, I assure you. That's the trouble with works in progress I'm afraid. I'm so glad you are enjoying it!

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