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Reviews for Naked Journey

Aurealis2004.10.07 - 11:52PM11: Panic and PainAnonymous
Whew! That was good stuff. I like that Hermione is so brazen.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Tarah Fae2004.10.07 - 09:42PM11: Panic and PainAnonymous
It is 4 in the friggin morning and I am reading your new chapter... that has GOTTA say something! XD Brilliant! You do torture so well but you dont keep your audience on tenterhooks for too long! *ding!* Next please! :D

Author's Response: Thank you Tarah! I do try not to be too cruel. I am lucky that I have insane readers like you, who stay up to all hours to read it! Giggle, I confess I was late to work this morning just so I could get that chapter updated. I must be mad myself.

Jade_Orchid2004.10.07 - 09:21PM11: Panic and PainSigned
Oh, my goodness. This section was even hotter than the first! How lucky Severus is that Hermione is so smart and forgiving. I thought it was touching that he was so upset he didn't think what he did through first, though I'd have still fussed at him a bit more! (grin) It was a beautiful section, poetic and lemony! And that bit at the end? WHOO! That packed a powerful erotic punch, Pook!

Author's Response: Thanks Jade! You always make me feel good about my story! Now, quit reading it and get busy on your own! *Pook scowls threateningly* :(

Nimué2004.10.07 - 09:19PM10: She Stumbles, He FallsAnonymous
I like this plot and the story is wonderful. And THANK YOU for emphasizing that our Sevvy is NOT old. I'll eagerly be looking forward to updates!

Author's Response: I'm an almost 40 year old muggle, and I don't feel old at all! I imagine a 40 year old wizard is still rather boyish. *giggle*

Author's Response: PS, And that will be 50 points from your house for calling Professor Snape "Sevvie". *gigglegigglegiggle*

Sister Katz2004.10.07 - 04:44PM11: Panic and PainAnonymous
YUM!!! I have been waiting for that all day and thanks to you and June I finally got to read it. So worth the wait. K

Author's Response: I'm terribly glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for being patient. Isn't June a sweetie! :)

mada2004.10.07 - 03:49PM11: Panic and PainAnonymous
HUGE PROBELM!!! I CAN'T GET TO THIS CHAPTER. IT'S NOT AN OPTION IN THE MENU OF CHAPTERS, BUT I KNOW THERE'S SOMETHING HERE BECAUSE YOU HAVE REVIEWS!!! THIS HAPPENS ALL THE TIME, EVEN WITH OTHER STORIES.....HELP!!!!

Author's Response: Firstly, Mada, may I suggest you disable the caps lock on your computer keyboard if you cannot resist the urge. I assure you I read all my reviews and answer as many as I can, so there is no need to shout. Now then, on to the problem. I am a brand new writer. Ashwinder has high standards and they must be careful of conent to avoid lawsuits as well. When I post a story chapter, 'Naked Journey' immediately hits the recently updated lists; but the new chapter does not go public until the moderators of this website read it and approve it. They are hard working people and have many stories to check, so this may take some time. Please be patient, and check back after a bit and you will find the new chapter. It usually posts whithin a day. As for the early reviews, I expect they are from mods and people slytherin enough to figure out where the new chapter is hiding. June has been kind enough to post the mystery web address for my last two chapters in the reviews. I hope I explained that well enough. There is more wonderful info about how Ashwinder works in their FAQ. :)

Sooz2004.10.07 - 03:06PM10: She Stumbles, He FallsAnonymous
PS: As a virgin with an imagination like that, you are going to make one man mighty damned happy. LOL Fantastic lemon :)

Author's Response: OH MY GOD! Hmm...I believe I did not make myself clear. *snickersnickersnicker* While I may be a virgin about writing naughty bits, I am myself not a virgin. Good gods, can you imagine? An almost 40 yr old virgin writing naughty bits? Thankfully that is NOT the case as the fellow I've been 'living in sin' with for over a decade can attest. He is indeed, most happy.

Sooz2004.10.07 - 03:03PM10: She Stumbles, He FallsAnonymous
Well worth the wait, my dear! That was lots of fun. Reading their inner musings was a crack up...especially Severus'. Only one bit of con-crit, if I may be so bold: the sentence "When Hermione shrieked, Severus almost came again." was a bit confusing. Something along the lines of Severus again nearly came" would have made it less confusing. Didn't mean to sound so picky. I really thought you did very well with that chapter. Not just the chapter the whole story. Thanks for the quick updates and kudos to you and your beta!!

Author's Response: Excellent point my dear! I will adjust it immediately. I hate confusion. Well, I'll adjust it as soon as I can get the aforementioned image out of my head. *giggle* :)

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