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Xepheria2005.11.08 - 09:31PM10: She Stumbles, He FallsSigned
*snickers* I hope Dumbledore and McGonagall weren't watching the clock during that!

Author's Response: They would have gotten quite an eyeful, I imagine! :D Thanks! :)

Xepheria2005.11.08 - 07:55PM2: LostSigned
I just love the unicorn predicament. Can't help but snicker at poor old (naked) Snape!

Author's Response: I was rather naughty wasn't I? When I thought about trying to write a fanfic, I thought "What can I do to make Snape naked for as long as possible?" Thus this little fic was born! Glad it made you snicker! :)

SataiDelenn2005.11.06 - 10:22PM18: RemembranceSigned
Ok. I know I should have posted this in that particular chapter, but I just had to keep reading. Anyway, when you began talking about Severus being an Animagus, I just KNEW he was a unicorn. Especially when you discussed how "useless" the form he has was and then talked about him being "an impossible color". And you described his human mannerisms as a unicorn so well. I could totally picture everything he was doing that would make me see the human expressions in the unicorn form. You write so well and I thoroughly enjoyed reading your fic. Thank you!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you enjoyed it and I'm glad you thought I managed it all right! Thanks for leaving such a sweet review! :)

SataiDelenn2005.11.01 - 03:46AM7: Until Death do PartSigned
QUOTE: "With the final thread of his will, he drew himself up, flung the invisibility cloak from Hermione’s still gaping form, and intoned in his best wicked professor voice, “Miss Granger, that will be twenty points from Gryffindor for behavior unbecoming a student.” He then collapsed unconscious at her feet." END QUOTE. OMG! That is just so Snape like! Even if he isn't coherent enough to understand what is going on, I could definitely see him doing something like that! I couldn't help but snicker at that statement, lol.

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked that bit! It's one of my favorites! Thanks for taking the time to let me know! :)

SataiDelenn2005.11.01 - 03:22AM6: Walking ThoughtsSigned
Ok. I really like this story, and so far, you've given good and logical explanations as to why Severus has and has not done certain things. However, one question remains.... IF the unicorns like him as much as they apparently do, AND one has graciously made itself his traveling companion, WHY then, does he not just climb on the animal's back and let it lead him back to Hogwarts? Surely the beast would be able to give him some relief from his aching feet? Just wondering. And I've been wondering that since the two met and he became adjusted to the idea of even having a traveling companion.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it so far! I do get into the answer to your question, but it's obviously in a later chapter. In legend, unicorns have been portrayed as everything from huge, strong, horse-like creatures, to small, delicate, goat-like animals. I went for the more delicate version. I hope you continue to enjoy reading! :)

amra2005.11.01 - 02:10AM18: RemembranceSigned
Perfect ending... Thanks again for sharing your creativity...

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! :)

amra2005.11.01 - 02:03AM17: InnovationSigned
Wonderfully romantic... even Severus's note to Albus...

Author's Response: I got a huge kick out of writing that note. I'm glad you didn't think it went amiss! Thank you so much for all of the thought-filled reviews as you read this. It really meant a lot to me! :)

amra2005.11.01 - 01:44AM16: Romancing the CureSigned
I can just picture that chess game... I wonder what Hermione's idea is... surely he is not literally going to eat his wand?!

Author's Response: *giggle* :D

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